My radiant padlet by Usic https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn Made with a dash of wit en-us 2021-10-22 11:41:42 UTC 2025-09-24 02:25:38 UTC hello@padlet.com schen1821 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836068997 Sihan Chen  58

Two positive:
 My essay has clear structure
 I explain my own thinking to enrich my opinions


Two negative:
 I may lack of enough evidence to support my claim
 I need to find more details about the connection between Emile  Durkheim’s theory and the Industrial Revolution (This is the topic I chose).]]> 2021-10-22 11:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836068997 Cindy Jingxin Zhao https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836069762 57

positive：
Get organized
Check weight rate is low


nagetive：
Words can be more precise, improve vocabulary
Write more examples]]> 2021-10-22 11:53:33 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836069762 chen tianzhe https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836070979 mark:51
Positive:Having included 8 references.
Having used the right structure to write.
Negative:The analysis of relevance is confusing. 
The grammer mistake can be seen.]]> 2021-10-22 11:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836070979 Cheuk Yin Poon cpoon61 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836072239 mark: 55 (topic 1)
two positive:
  • a clear structure of essay
  • give a quite clear explanation of the cause and impact of revolution
two negative:
  • few references
  • don't have a really clear explanation of the theory
]]> 2021-10-22 11:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836072239 Yuyang Wang https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836084442 Mark:52
Two positive:
1.My context is complete.
2.My structure is clear and i use linking words and sign posting throughout the essay

Two negative:
1. I don't have 8 academic source
2.My words of essay are less than 500 -750words, which excepting bibliography





]]> 2021-10-22 11:58:30 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836084442 Xinru Wu https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836084602 Grade：55
Two positive：I described related concepts and terminology.
All relevant questions were answered and explained.
Two negative：Not making evidentiary claims about the relevant issues very accurately.
Not very flexible use of literature，not enough concise sentences.

]]> 2021-10-22 11:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836084602 Yiqi wang https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836085000 52  topic1
Two positive: 1.enough words number.The structure is clear and coherent
2.Check weight rate is low.Reading material writing

Two negative：1.No source cited.
2.Statement usage is informal]]> 2021-10-22 11:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836085000 Ka Wing Cheung isabella076129 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836085108 Mark:56
Two positive: 
I have a clear structure, including introduction, body text and conclusion.
Also,I used linking words in my essay.

Two negative:
I have some grammatically mistakes.
I didn't use 8 academic sources.

]]> 2021-10-22 11:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836085108 Hongri Tang https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836086941 Mark：50
Two positive 
I'm up to 500-750 words
content is very complete



Two negative 
1 I don’t have 8 academic 
Bad grammar]]> 2021-10-22 12:00:04 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836086941 Weilin zhu 52 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836089321 Two positive:
I have a clear and logical structure for my essey.
I can make basic arguments.
Tow negative:
I have some grammatical mistakes.
Some of the analysis is inaccurate.


]]> 2021-10-22 12:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836089321 Cho Yu Siu 65 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836089809 Positive: I use many vocabulary to write the essay and use different linking words.
I checked my grammar and spelling carefully before hand in.

Negative: my essay didn’t include 8 academic source and not enough evidence to prove my sources ]]> 2021-10-22 12:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836089809 Chenxi Xiao. 60 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836090090 Two positive:I have developed a clear structure,and answered all requested questions,responded all topics.
I used correct APA system.And meet the words requirement.
Two negative:I only used 4 references.
I have some paraphrasing errors  and my sentences are not completely grammatically.

]]> 2021-10-22 12:02:15 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836090090 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836090137 Lingzhi Chi 56

Positive: 1.Have a clear citation about Marx thoughts.
2. Include all of requirements for the essay.

Negative: 1.I didn’t explain the thoughts with my own words and forgot to show my opinions. So my essay similarity was to high.
2. I didn’t use so many sources and I forget write the reference list at the end of essay.]]> 2021-10-22 12:02:17 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836090137 ywan27 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836090266 Wan Yafei 54
two positive: 
1. have used the right title and included the question that this essay should be contained.
2. have explained the basic meanings of several concepts that Karl Maxs claimed
two negatives: 
1. did not explain some in detail, for example, 
the question: The relevance of classical sociological theories to the Industrial or French Revolution. Beacuse I didn't understand the relevance of the concepts and industrial revolution entirely.
2. maybe some sentences and vocabulary are not academic and these are too simple. And maybe some references that I mentioned are not unqualified and inaccurate
]]> 2021-10-22 12:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836090266 kshimizu5 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836090311 Kotomi Shimizu
my score : 58( topic 2)
Two positive : 
1 clear structure
2 Did not make any mistake spelling

Two negative :
1 used only 4 references
2 there was something i did not express in own word.

]]> 2021-10-22 12:02:24 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836090311 twang106 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836091251 Tsz Ching, Wang 65

Positive: 
-Link the theoretical concepts to the French/ Industrial Revolution well, not only two connection.
-Include an introduction, body text and conclusion.


Negative: 
-Not included 8 sources
-Some grammatical mistakes 

]]> 2021-10-22 12:03:02 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836091251 Junya Luo https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836093222 mark:50
the article seems lack of linking word and because of the poor vocabulary,there have some grammar problems, no citations is another question. ]]> 2021-10-22 12:04:20 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836093222 https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836093815 Sherry:57
Positive:1.Have a clear structure.2.sentence are correct.
Negative:1.ues less reference.2.No formal language is used.


]]> 2021-10-22 12:04:42 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wrl4ab90rbzzdazn/wish/1836093815