https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m After watching the narrative writing videos on descriptive and visual writing, change the following boring sentence using juicy, vivid verbs, appositives, unique adjectives, adding figurative language. en-us 2018-10-05 16:59:31 UTC 2018-10-09 01:41:58 UTC hello@padlet.com chouck1 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/289738390 Change the following into  a descriptive and visual sentence.  The brown cat is walking through the woods.

]]> 2018-10-05 17:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/289738390 2400269 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290251648 2018-10-08 12:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290251648 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290253068 The stealthy oak brown cat was striding through the woods during the freezing frosty winter ]]> 2018-10-08 12:19:21 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290253068 2400115 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290253513 The big fat orange and black cat named Garfield strolled down the street not so stealthily ]]> 2018-10-08 12:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290253513 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290253518 The large beautiful brown cat wandered slowly down the rocky path in the overgrown woods.]]> 2018-10-08 12:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290253518 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290253777 The fat and ugly brown cat was having a rough time walking through the dark and creepy woods.]]> 2018-10-08 12:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290253777 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290254478 the brown cat went walking through the woods and then he saw a mouse and ran towards it.]]> 2018-10-08 12:22:56 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290254478 2400047 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290254526 The tanish brown, fluffy stray cat ]]> 2018-10-08 12:23:01 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290254526 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290254533 The cat who was very fat strolled out of the pet store untouched.]]> 2018-10-08 12:23:03 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290254533 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290254891 The white fluffy soft cat that reminds me of snow with blue eyes.]]> 2018-10-08 12:23:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290254891 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255053 2018-10-08 12:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255053 24002181 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255084 The big fat cat was having a very bad time getting around the house.]]> 2018-10-08 12:24:23 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255084 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255208 i love big fat cats

]]> 2018-10-08 12:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255208 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255365 2018-10-08 12:25:05 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255365 2400047 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255372 The tanish brown, fat,fluffy stray cat strolled through the dark over brushed forest.]]> 2018-10-08 12:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290255372 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290256036 2018-10-08 12:26:47 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290256036 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290257044 2018-10-08 12:29:23 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290257044 2400083 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290258265 The tiger had a white coat with black stripes. It had a pink nose and black lips.]]> 2018-10-08 12:32:28 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290258265 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290259439 The brown furry, small, and evil cat Spike leaped over the raisin cookie jar and knocked over the jar and ate all the cookies ]]> 2018-10-08 12:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290259439 2400083 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290259584 whoever is writing that stop. it is not funny]]> 2018-10-08 12:36:05 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290259584 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290311906 Surfing is a very popular thing especially in hawaii and near beaches.]]> 2018-10-08 14:14:05 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290311906 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290313111 The huge fluffy brown cat was leaping over rocks and speeding throught the woods, as it was trying to get to massive colorful treats.]]> 2018-10-08 14:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290313111 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290314260 The small dirty brown fluffy kitten was slowly walking through the muddy forest.
 ]]> 2018-10-08 14:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290314260 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290314830 The magastical brown cat trotted down the path inthe narrow woods.]]> 2018-10-08 14:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290314830 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290316123 2018-10-08 14:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290316123 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290316635 The timid orange cat sunk into his favorite cat bed. ]]> 2018-10-08 14:22:42 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290316635 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290316849 2018-10-08 14:23:08 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290316849 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290316864 The tiny black and white kitten started to charge at the bigger and fatter black cat while he was sleeping.]]> 2018-10-08 14:23:09 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290316864 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290317329 The tiny shaken brown cat, marched through the dark ominous wood filled with creatures of pure horror shaking in place as a bush rumbled with violent vibrations. ]]> 2018-10-08 14:23:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290317329 2400059 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290322113 The majestic brown cat hopped around inside the endless forest]]> 2018-10-08 14:31:40 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290322113 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290344650 the lepord comoe smilodon(if you dont know what it means look at photos in previous post)pounced on the titanboa and mauled it. he took it home to his cubs and had a feast. they where well fed for 3 short weeks]]> 2018-10-08 15:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290344650 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290347119 The lazy fat cat was slowly making his way through the deep scary woods]]> 2018-10-08 15:21:52 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290347119 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290348077 The brown and white cat walked though the peaceful woods and saw a big mouse. ]]> 2018-10-08 15:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290348077 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290348583 2018-10-08 15:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290348583 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349050 The small black and white striped cat was slowly walking to the food bowl]]> 2018-10-08 15:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349050 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349185 The light brown,short, fat Scottish fold cat is trotting through the thick timbered woods. ]]> 2018-10-08 15:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349185 2400063 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349346 The tall careful boy reached up to the fat helpless cat that was stuck in a tall leafy tree.]]> 2018-10-08 15:26:12 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349346 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349631
My grate dog huffed as it stumbled out of his bed opening his wide mouth and yawned so deeply that the other scampered out of the way. ]]> 2018-10-08 15:26:48 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349631 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349695 The big fat cat was walking throw the house looking for foo  ]]> 2018-10-08 15:26:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349695 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349927 the giant brown and white cat ran quickly though than thick forest ]]> 2018-10-08 15:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349927 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349976 Austin Fake]]> 2018-10-08 15:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349976 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349978 The brown, fluffy, dog slurped down his water,from his grey and blue water bowl]]> 2018-10-08 15:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290349978 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350303 I rode my awesome new bike down the slippery hill and crashed into the sidewalk. ]]> 2018-10-08 15:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350303 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350404 Collin McGlaughlin]]> 2018-10-08 15:28:17 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350404 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350458 The big fat, fluffy, dark brown, cat was rushy walking through the dark ,creepy woods.]]> 2018-10-08 15:28:23 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350458 2400042 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350501 The house cat is walkinhg fast threw the huge forest]]> 2018-10-08 15:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350501 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350914 2018-10-08 15:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290350914 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290351259 its a red doberman pincher he's]]> 2018-10-08 15:30:06 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290351259 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290353191 I held a vigorous flashlight in my hand and peregrinated with my bike through the woods.]]> 2018-10-08 15:33:45 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290353191 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290376102 2018-10-08 16:18:36 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290376102 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290393734 2018-10-08 16:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290393734 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395367 The tan clean sandy beaches stood at the edge of the island. ]]> 2018-10-08 16:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395367 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395465 The water rippled like a blanket being shaken, as I slayed across the harmonious beach when the sun drooped down to the other side of the earth.]]> 2018-10-08 16:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395465 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395593 The little yellow duck walk along the 10ft long sidewalk to get to his 3 darker yellow brothers]]> 2018-10-08 16:58:02 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395593 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395792 The Skinny Black cat with green eyes walked the the wet woods when it was a full moon
 ]]> 2018-10-08 16:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395792 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395836 The Big beaauitful butterfly wanderd to find its safe house ]]> 2018-10-08 16:58:25 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395836 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395935 The small bear cub cuddled its mama.]]> 2018-10-08 16:58:37 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395935 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395994 The orange tabby cat stelfly walked in the moonlight as if walking on broken glass, not to be noticed.]]> 2018-10-08 16:58:43 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290395994 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290396488 A small cat was limping through the dark and mysterious woods. the cat was small and brown, with an expression of fear on his dirty face.]]> 2018-10-08 16:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290396488 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290396831 The Big brown dog walked past the dark wet park ]]> 2018-10-08 17:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290396831 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397094 The brown tabby cat struted through the dark and moist woods.]]> 2018-10-08 17:00:58 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397094 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397285 The small black kitten pattled feircly to the other side of the pond .]]> 2018-10-08 17:01:16 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397285 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397581 My 18 year old sister was walking dreadedly to her next class in college.]]> 2018-10-08 17:01:46 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397581 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397630 The big light brown cat zipped through the dark and gloomy woods.]]> 2018-10-08 17:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397630 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397807 My big kitty tumbled down the black ally.]]> 2018-10-08 17:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290397807 https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290398596 The small brown ungroomed kitten slowly hiked through the rustling leaves on the floor of the gloomy and dark forest .]]> 2018-10-08 17:03:41 UTC https://padlet.com/chouck1/wr3kxihtxh5m/wish/290398596