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      <title>11ABC- Tone Mood Paragraph for &quot;Me Talk Pretty One Day&quot; by </title>
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         <title>Daniel Colledge&#39;s PETER Paragraph </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There are two critical stables to any memoir, the beginning ad the resolution (the end). The tone and mood in any memoir fluctuate no matter the story. I believe in the story Me Talk Pretty One Day by David Sedaris is a prime example of shifting tones and moods. At the beginning the tone that is being set by the authour is optimism and what the audience is conveyed through this is that David is exited. Toward the climax of the story, you can tell that the author feels motivated by his journey and we as an audience feel motivated. What gives me this idea and allows me to believe this is these lists of evidence, "I’ve moved to Paris with hopes of learning the language.", "My school is an easy ten-minute walk from my apartment, and on the first day of class I arrived early, watching as the returning students greeted one another in the school lobby." these two quotes best represent the idea that the authour feels optimistic about this event. He is optimistic in the fact that he has taken a risk/ a leap and moved country to pressure a new langue in hopes to develop is bilingualism. He has turned up to class early to see and be ready for his lesson. We see this as he is excited to be starting this journey and to be in this class. To link this to the end of the memoir, throughout the memoir he went through struggles with his teacher and had many issues and problems to overcome, but toward the end, he has overcome them. Some evidence that matches my ideas pf the tone and mood are;&nbsp; "The teacher continued her diatribe, and I settled back, bathing in the subtle beauty of each new curse and insult. “You exhaust me with your foolishness and reward my efforts with nothing but pain, do you understand me?" The world opened up, and it was with great joy that I responded, “I know the thing that you speak exact now. Talk me more, you, plus, please, plus.". This is one of the best quotes the solidifies my idea of the fact that the tone that he has set is an accomplishment and our moods convey motivation. How you can see this is the fact that this quote exclaims that he finally understand what the teacher is insulting him with, he understands the full thing. Which he tells the teacher that i finally understand you. Which makes us feel motivated because we feel that we have seen this journey and this makes us strive to do the same.&nbsp; How this relates to the context is because the context is about taking a risk to seak a higher reward, in which this case was learning a new language and through this journey, he has seen his tone that he represents and, we feel the mood that it feels for us.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-09-26 07:26:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tone and Mood - Sian</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Throughout this narrative the authors tone has evolved from optimistic to sarcasm and accomplished. Throughout the first page we see signs of his optimism towards his new start in Paris. He states “I’ve moved to Paris with hopes of learning the language”. In this phrase we see his drive to learn the language ad the use of the word ‘hope’ directly references his high expectations and positive outlook on life due to its connotations. As the narrative continues we see his optimistic views shift to sarcasm upon realizing the cruelty, in his eyes, of the teacher. His sarcasm is shown through phrases such as “led me to believe that these mistakes were capital crimes in the country of France.” This sentence shows both his sarcasm and tone of the teacher in his eyes during classes. A reader can see it as a way of making the narrative more interesting and engaging, it could also be a coping mechanism to counteract the teacher’s insults and to combat the effect her opinion has on his self-worth and learning mindset. At the end of this narrative we see the tone develop into accomplishment due to being able to fully understand an insult the teacher has thrown at him. He claims to have been “bathing in the subtle beauty of each new cures and insult.” And to conclude the segment he begs her to “talk me more, you, plus, please, plus” This shows his want and need to learn more about the language showing his growth throughout the narrative and the reward to her cruel teaching.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-09-26 07:33:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tareq Naseraldeen&#39;s paragraph </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; The author’s tone and the reader’s mood evolve throughout the text. At the beginning of the text, the author feels optimistic. The author’s use of the word “a true debutant” shows how optimistic he feels to start learning French and become as a debutant and a person who seeks to learn to become a bilingual person as the author says “I’ve moved to Paris with hopes of learning the language”. The author feels encouraged and optimistic about learning French, which also leads to the creation of a mood of excitement for the audience as they will get excited to know and figure how the author is going to achieve that. As an American who is middle-aged and is at a new phase of her/his life, the audience will feel excited to see how the author is going to lead himself to success as that might be beneficial for the audience to get them to envision new ways of accomplishing things.&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>After a few paragraphs and as the text starts to go on, the author starts to feel intimidated and nervous as the reality he faced, was different from the imagination he had. “The first day of class was nerve-wracking”. The author felt nervous and intimidated due to expectations that he had as he used to feel optimistic, and then suddenly facing the reality and how difficult and hard his journey is going to be. “I realized while laughing, that I myself did not know the alphabet”, that is the moment when the author started to seriously get nervous as he felt intimidated due to his lack of experience in the French language.&nbsp;</div><div>That tone of intimidation and nervousness created a concerned mood to be reflected at the audience, as at that point, that audience who are probably in a new phase in their lives and/or are risk takers, will start to realize how expectations do not always meet reality&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>At the end of this text, the author felt accomplished after all he’s been through. He finally understood what his teacher was saying. “The world opened up, and it was with great joy that I responded” this emphasizes the feeling that the author conveyed throughout his choice of words, which is the feeling of accomplishment. As the author felt accomplished, the audience begins to feel motivated as they start to feel that even if those audiences are middle-aged and/or risk takers, they could always make the best out of each bad situation to turn it to their advantage and benefit from it. Just like the author, the audience will feel like the “world opened up” and they will welcome their obstacles and life challenges with confidence and the belief of getting accomplished.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-09-26 07:34:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tone and Mood - Julia </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div> </div><div>“Me Talk Pretty One Day’ by David Sedaris has an evolving tone that follows through with the events that the author describes within his memoir. With a constant development of tone, a constant shift in mood is experienced by the audience. The tone begins as optimistic which is shown through the quote “I’ve moved to Paris with hope of learning the language” as well as “I arrived Early...”. The authors description of events allows the audience to feel excited, remembering an event similar to David’s’ or a time when they felt optimistic and how exciting it was. This links to the social context of this memoir being that the author is starting a new chapter of his life. The tone then shifts to sarcasm which is witnessed through to his description of Anna, she “had front teeth the size of tomb stones”. As the tone shifts to being sarcastic the mood of the audience shifts as they begin to find the memoir humorous through the authors use of multiple similes, metaphors and hyperboles. For example, when the author writes “the coming months...a wild animal” and “Every day spent...a caesarean section” he appears to link the events that take place within the text to those that his audience who are middle aged Americans may have already experienced and causes humour through using metaphors and similes that are well known throughout American creating a cultural link in the text. Finally the tone of the text ends with the author feeling accomplished of learning the French language enough to finally understand everything that the teacher is saying. A quote proving this is “for the first time......someone was saying”. This has an impact on the audience as it is noted he started off with an abundance of difficulties and now having reached a step that he thought he might never reach, motivates the audience to keep going and no matter what adversity gets in your way, you are able to make it through and achieve your goal just like David did when he was faced with a cruel teacher. Thus, it is clear that the tone within David Sedaris’ “Me Talk Pretty One Day” is ever evolving which in turn leads to the audience experiencing an emotional rollercoaster of the events experienced by the author from a different perspective. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-09-26 07:34:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tone &amp; Mood - Hassan </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;The author utilizes language to simultaneously to develop his own character and project tone in order to more effectively and clearly show the audience his current stance on a given situation. Early in the text the author is ridiculed by the teacher for associating the incorrect gender with a specific object; <em>“I absorbed as much of her abuse as I could understand, thinking – but not saying – that I find it ridiculous to assign a gender to an inanimate object which is incapable of disrobing and making an occasional fool of itself.”</em>. Here, his sarcasm is displayed in its fullest effect, yet at the same time, it shows what he thinks about the French language, and as a result, the teacher. Here, the mood becomes sympathetic, as the audience can understand the authors struggle, as they too are middle aged Americans who don’t have to deal with associating gender with inanimate objects; they can only image how hard it must be for the author. <br><br>   However, the shame the author experiences in that specific instance becomes more and more commonplace— forcing him to start taking French more seriously in order to avoid being insulted. The sarcasm is replaced by intimidation; <em>“After being singled out as a lazy </em><strong><em>kfdtinvfm</em></strong><em>, I took to spending four hours a night on my homework, putting in even more time whenever we were assigned an essay. I suppose I could have gotten by with less, but I was determined to create some sort of identity for myself: David, the hardworker, David the cut-up.”. </em>The author attempts to nullify the insults received from his teacher, and he attempts to achieve this by increasing his knowledge of French so that he isn’t an easy target. All of the authors actions are being done out of fear of the teacher. Along with the shift in tone, the mood has split— now not only is it sympathetic towards the author, but also resentful towards the teacher for setting up the author through this viscous work routine.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the memoir “Me Talk Pretty One Day” by David Sedaris, the tone develops from being optimistic, sarcastic, and finally accomplished, which makes the reader feel excited, then humorous, and finally motivated. Sedaris uses diction to emphasize his optimistic feeling towards this new experience, using words like “young, attractive, well dressed” and “confidence” to describe his environment. Such words gives off a positive connotation, making the reader feel excited about the authors experience, which tempts the reader to continue reading. Henceforth, the author realizes his incompetence in the class and narrates his story using a sarcastic tone. This tone is exclaimed by the use of dark comedy, writing phrases/scenarios such as “we soon learned to dodge chalk and protect our heads and stomachs whenever she approached us with a question”. Using comedy, the readers feel humored and entertained by what is happening, however there is an underlying feeling of concern that the reader feels. This works in favor of the author, as the author wants the readers to relate to what is happening to make the readers more engaged in the story. Finally, the author feels accomplished and therefore writes in a triumphant and accomplished tone. This can be visible when Sedaris acknowledges that after the course, “the world opened up” and comes to terms with the fact that “understanding doesn’t mean that you can suddenly speak a language”. Such phrases make the readers feel motivated to accomplish something they have been wanting to do. Additionally, this motivation makes the reader feel more reassured to take a risk and try something new, since it worked out for Sedaris, a 41 year old reflecting on his past. The author understands this, as his intended audience is middle-aged Americans that have been meaning to take a risk or take a new path in their lives. Furthermore, through the use of diction, comedy, and perspective, Sedaris makes his memoir relate to his audience. This links to a cultural context of the struggle of being an American in a country, such as France, that stereotypes American tourists and immigrants to be annoying and stupid, and how it can affect someone’s experience in a certain event.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-09-26 07:35:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tone and mood PETER paragraph - Saif Mahmoud</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the memoir " Me Talk Pretty One Day" , the author develops along with the situation and character that the he establishes, he adds bits of absurdity in his story. As the intended audience are middle aged Americans that are taking new phases in life considered after he establishes the fact that he will be a new student at the age of 41, the author reveals all the perks that are included with having a student Id, as it allows him to have "a discounted entry fee at movie theaters, puppet shows, and Festyland, a far-flung amusement park that advertises with billboards picturing a cartoon stegosaurus sitting in a canoe and eating what appears to be a ham sandwich." The author also uses language techniques like simile and allusion, in the purpose of creating and absurd picture as he compares his discomfort of being surrounded by students who look younger and appear to speak better French and we know that from the line that says ”causing me to feel not unlike Pa Kettle trapped backstage after a fashion show." Pa Kettle is a film character from the 1940s and 1950s; he and his wife "Ma" were a hillbilly couple who won a writing contest to move into a brand-new, future model home which was very different from their nearly-condemned farmhouse. Sedaris uses these techniques to spotlight the attention to the absurdity of his feelings of difference among young French students. This feel of “ intimidation “ makes the reader know from the author a message in which is to expect the unexpected</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-09-26 07:36:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tone and Mood - Me Talk Pretty One Day - Arpita</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div> </div><div>As the narrative progresses, the author, David Sedaris’ tone transitions from optimistic to sarcastic and then finally, accomplished. Consequently, the incorporation of such tones instigates a shift in the intended audience’s mood, evolving from eager to humorous and then eventually, motivated. The prevalence of tone is evident from the extensive utilization of visual imagery, diction and a steady development of sarcasm. At the beginning of the narrative, Sedaris conveys his optimism when he describes his move to Paris to be in ‘<em>hopes</em> of learning a new language’ and as he explains how he ‘arrived early, watching as the returning students greeted one another…..’. This vivid description of his own behavior as well as synonymizing his immigration with ‘hope’ allows the inference that he truly feels enthusiastic and optimistic in these unfamiliar surroundings. The niche audience, which is essentially middle-aged Americans attempting some sort of mid-life crisis, would find such a situation exciting and feel eager as the author begins his ‘adventure’. A shift in tone, however becomes apparent as Sedaris starts to struggle with his French teacher and the language itself. Both his annoyance and his disdain for his teacher are evident in his overly sarcastic tone. When she chastises him for making grammatical errors, he becomes hyperbolic and says her reaction was as if ‘these mistakes were capital crimes in the country of France’. Additionally, he asks sarcastic rhetorics like ‘Why refer to Lady Crack Pipe or Good Sir Dishrag when these things could never live up to all that their sex implied?’ Such a tone audience is allowed to see how his attitude changes as well as how naïve he initially was, eventually making them feel both sympathetic as well as humorous. </div>]]></description>
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         <title>tone and mood - Jamie </title>
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         <title>tone and mood - Jamie </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>What is the tone and mood of Me Talk Pretty One Day by David Sedaris?</strong></div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>The tone of the text transitions from optimistic to sarcastic and finally to accomplished, as the author narrates his experience of learning French with his cruel teacher. At the beginning of the memoir, the author uses quotes such as “I’ve moved to Paris with hopes of learning the language.” And “On the first day of class, I arrived early” in order to show the reader that he is excited to learn and eager to begin and attend the classes. At this point, the reader feels a level of excitement for the author. Perhaps the reader is in a similar situation and is going through a drastic change in their lives and can therefore connect to the authors experience. As the text progresses to the experiences within the classroom the authors tone changes drastically to intimidated when the teacher begins to harshly criticize the other students, this in turn introduces the authors sarcasm through quotes like “The teacher’s reaction led me to believe that these mistakes were capital crimes in the country of France.” Or “I absorbed as much of her abuse as I could understand, thinking – but not saying – that I find it ridiculous to assign a gender to an inanimate object which is incapable of disrobing and making an occasional fool of itself.” These quotes highlight that though the teacher was incredibly rude, even the author could find an underlying amusing side. By implying this, the author adds a more humorous mood for the reader as he talks about the abuse of the teacher. Within the final lines of Me Talk Pretty One Day, the author brings back the overall positive tone with a more accomplished feeling, this is seen when the author finally understands what the teacher has said to him and responds with “The world opened up, and it was with great joy that I responded “I know the thing that you speak exact now. Talk more, you, plus, please, plus.” The author almost uses this response as a way to motivate and encourage the reader with the theme that though criticism is harsh and severe at times, it is a powerful tool in education. Furthermore, the use of the above quotes throughout the text links to the tone and mood of the memoir with connections to the social and cultural context of the text as well.&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>            Within the memoir “Me Talk Pretty One Day” by author David Sedaris which depicts his journey to Paris in order to learn a new Language at the ripe age of 41. Throughout the text, the author transitions the tone from optimistic to naivety to accomplished. Simultaneously the mood of the text evolves from encouraged to humor to motivated. The author begins his memoir by explaining his situation whilst describing himself as “a true debutant”, displaying signs of narcissism and cockiness which tie into his optimism for learning the language. The story continues on where at this point the author reveals his own fears of the class, realizing that his ideal experience of learning was quickly shattered by his French teacher who constantly ridicules and insults all of her students for their incompetence and stupidity towards the language with phrases such as “You exhaust me with your foolishness and reward my efforts with nothing but pain”. After time spent in that class coupled with his acknowledgement of the realities of such journeys, the author comes to the conclusion that he finally understands the language even though  the teacher had been repeatedly putting him and his peers down as he states “Understanding doesn’t mean that you can suddenly speak the language”; he persevered through the hardship and accomplished his goal, leaving his with a sense of satisfaction and pride. Through the authors sarcastic undertone and diction, he was able to easily portray the tone of the text, allowing the audience to gain a certain mood. By the end of the memoir, the audience would have gone through the process of laughing at the authors series of unfortunate occurrences, and landed on the same closure as Sedaris and would have gained some inspirational guidance from his story; the author’s use of cultural and social context would have additionally encouraged the audience to get up and try something new in life, even if it means that there will always be that one person bringing you down and demoralize you as you attempt at your goal.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Tone &amp; Mood</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The author’s tone throughout the memoir varies as the text proceeds, this in turn affects the audience’s mood. He describes the first day of school as, “exciting” which develops an overall tone of optimism. By seeing that author David Sedaris is enthusiastic and passionate about attending his first lesson of French class the mood of ‘excitement’ for Sedaris is placed on the readers. This tone can be identified through the quote, “”, which has a positive connotation of hopefulness an passion towards the learning of the French language. However, the tone is later shifted to ‘intimidated’ when he sits through his first lesson. He learns that his teacher is extremely aggressive and mean towards the students and will critisize anyone on the first signs of an error. As this shift of tone occurs, the readers become ‘concerned’ for Sedaris as his passion and optimism are ripped from him by his teacher. An anecdote is utilised in the early paragraphs quoting, “How VERY INTERESTING. I THOUGHT EVERYONE LOVED MOSQUITO's.”.  The teacher here is once again criticising the statement another student made, resulting in the intimidation from the teacher.This is a form of satire which conveys the mood of ‘humor’completley contradicting the previously stated mood of, ‘concerned’, resulting in the mood of a combination of concern and humor. By utilsing these tone transitions the author’s message and purpose of the text is better conveyed as Sedaris’s personality is evident. </div>]]></description>
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