https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting Please write your paragraph based on your topic sentence from your freewriting activity on Thursday (Sept 28) Please include one compound sentence and one complex sentence. en-us 2017-09-28 16:21:14 UTC 2017-10-10 04:25:09 UTC hello@padlet.com 1365329881nola https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/192346900   Pollution can affect people and animals' lives. Nowadays, the development of technology is very fast, so almost all people have cars. but when people drive cars, it will produce a lot of unhealthy gases. Those gases will cause the temperature of the world (infintive) to increase. So, if people or animals live in a place which has lots of ice, they will have a big trouble, because the increased temperature causes the ice to melt and to break, it's very dangerous, and animals will lose their homes. For another example, some of the factories which produce the chemical things put the garbage in the river; it causes the water to become dirty and poisonous. Thus, if people drink this water, people will get illness. So, in my opinion, I think decrease the extent of pollution is an important thing.

Nola]]> 2017-09-29 07:10:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/192346900 william_yu0604 https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/192348187 Water is very important to people. According to statistics, water make  (Check your subject-verb agreement) up 70 percent of body, so water scarcity can lead to death. Normal people need to drink 5-8 cups of water per-day. If people did not drank enough water, people will be easier to get illness (when we are talking about science facts, we should use present simple tense). Water is a kind of liquid, it is circulating (Comma-splice), So when people drank water, water (instead of using the same noun twice in a row, try to use pronouns) can helps people absorb nutrients and help people become more strong. Also, people will have the smooth skin if they drink water in their daily life. Following this, I think people need to maximize the significance of water.

William ]]> 2017-09-29 07:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/192348187 urnotcarina https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/192356106 Water is a very important factor in the world. Because the part of the earth's surface covered with water and a lot of things need to use water for some reasons (incomplete). If Earth don't have any water, everything will be (make sure you have a complete verb) dead, such as the plants、animals and people. Also, people need to eat (EAT?) 5 to 8 glasses of water a day. it can helps people become an healthy person. So , I think water is the most indispensable part of the world.

Carina]]> 2017-09-29 07:57:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/192356106 https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/192840643 Pollution has become a major problem in our daily life .Air pollution are really affect humans life. Many people get sick or illness form the pollution.ot only humans have an effect on the pollution ,also animals .Every year has some animals become extinct because of the pollution.If human do not stop make the pollution getting worth ,we might lose our only home, the earth .In other words ,human will not exist anymore.

You have a complex sentence but you are missing your compound sentence.


annie]]> 2017-10-02 03:00:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/192840643 1365329881nola https://padlet.com/cheandme/freewriting/wish/193255674 2) All of them were requiring special effects. (put were after them)
4) Following the blueprints and plans for the original ship, Cameron's team created scaled sets and models accurate down to the rivets. (Put number 4 and number 5 together to making them into complete sentences.)
8) It can show the ocean rushing into the ship. ( change the word "to" )
9)The model was only a quarter as large as the original. (take out the word "Although")
12)The largest model reproduced every detail、 from the ship's name lettered on the facade to the chairs on the deck. (Change the word "which'.)
14) ，and it is a good chunk of the $287 million that Cameron spent on the most expensive movie ever made. (put number13 and number 14 together.)

Nola,
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