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      <title> Partner Paragraph--put BOTH your names by Christopher Jelderks</title>
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      <description>1.  Write as a complete sentence
2.  Give Evidence
3.  Give Reasoning for your evidence</description>
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      <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:30:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>CHITO and SARAH</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206374615</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The change in scrooge in the graphic novel is best shown . I believe this&nbsp;because, you can see their facial expressions. It helps you understand better. Number two is that you can see what is happening and what there doing during the story. It helps you understand whats going on.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:35:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kyleah / Jozey </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206374624</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I believe the change in Scrooge's character is most believable in the Graphic Story version because, you can actually see his emotions and his facial expressions. In the drama story version you couldn't. On page 40 Scrooge looked desperate, scared, angry, and sad because, he wanted to know how he could change. On page 41, it also showed him laying down and praying. In the regular story the text said he was "On his knees praying" . So I think the graphic version shows more detail and it's easier for the reader's  to assume what's happening. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:35:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ella and Brock</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206374694</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The drama version of the story, "A Christmas Carol" has a different experience then the original story. It's a different experience because it has stage directions, for example it says on line 16 and 17, "The stone undulates and glows. Music plays." And it's different because it talks about futures hand wavering on line 24, "FUTURE considered SCROOGE'S  logic, his hand wavers."</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:35:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Evan and Caleb</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206375231</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is most believable in the novel, because you can see the pictures. Seeing the plot helps you visualize the story. In the original, you had to picture the setting in your mind. Also seeing his facial expressions and his words help enhance the story. The pictures show you the setting, and his face and speech helps show the emotion and how much he means what he says. Reading the novel is more interesting since you aren't just looking at black and white words, The comic adds pictures and colors making it interesting for your eyes and brain.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:36:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hannah &amp; Taylor</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206375579</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;Reading the dramatization&nbsp; of " A Christmas Coral " is very different from the original story. The text says," FUTURES hand tremble's; pointing has stopped." This gives more detail then the original story and shows more of the emotions from the spirit. The text also says,"...but FUTURE, stronger than SCROOGE, pulls away." This shows the aggression of the spirit.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:37:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Annelize and Lucy</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206376434</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;The experience of reading a dramatization of " A Christmas Carol" is different from reading the original story by giving us more details such as stage directions. On line 34 the text states, " Scrooge takes a desperate stab at FUTURE'S hand." This builds more intensity to what happens in this story. The text also states," FUTURE'S delinquencies slowly, gently." This part of the stage directions give a better mental picture of what is taking place.&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:38:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alex (by myself)</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206377026</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The change in Scrooge's character is most believable in the graphic novel. On pg. 41 box 2, Scrooge seems to be hit with the realization of his face, as shown by facial expression. Unlike the novel, the graphic novel shows change of characters and emotions through pictures. In the pictures where Scrooge's repeated questions are stated more important words are bold. This shows certain words or phrases shaped the spirit's decision, making it more believable.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:39:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>amelia and juliana </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206389401</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The change in Scrooge's character  is more believe-able in the drama. I believe this to be true because on line 34 the text says, " Scrooge is on his knees praying." his helps me understand by giving me a description of whats going on. another piece of evidence is that on line 42-43 the text says, "the spirit is elsewhere. scrooge has his sign. scrooge is alone." this tells me that spirit gave him another chance by letting him live because he said he would change.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 17:59:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tucker and Ayden</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206857961</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The difference between reading a drama of "A Christmas Carol" and reading the book is that you get to see the actions of the characters. I know this because lines 34-36 shows how Scrooge begged to the ghost. This makes it easier to understand because it shows us the scene and what happened during it which makes it easier to understand</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-14 17:38:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Eve and Herself</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/206950251</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think the graphic novel is more appealing than the original story. In the original story it doesn't say that the hand trembled while he was talking but in the graphic novel I found that it says (while the man was talking) it says the hand trembled. I can guess from this that Scrooges words were affecting the spirit. At the end of the story the spirit left scrooge holding his bed post. By this I can infer that the spirit was affected by his words and left him to change his ways. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-14 20:13:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aniko and Jackson</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cjelderks/wptbj3fu5ji3/wish/207891184</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The experience of reading a dramatization of, "A Christmas Carol", is very different from reading the original story in many ways. For instance, there is more description of what's happening, and it also tells me more of what the words are meant to mean. A detail from the drama is on line 12-14 the text states, "Gravestone turns front and grows ten feet high. Words upon it: EBENEZER SCROOGE. Much smoke billows now from the grave."  By this evidence I can tell that there is much more detail in this drama, they add effects to make it seem more dramatic, this makes since because this is supposed to be a novel turned into a dramatic play.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-16 20:22:15 UTC</pubDate>
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