Kaylee Google Sites Peer Feedback 2019 - 2020 by Kaylee Parchman https://padlet.com/26kparchman/wprbvvu11rta Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 16:40:24 UTC 2019-12-10 16:40:12 UTC hello@padlet.com https://minitravellers.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/Fotolia_74345131_Subscription_Monthly_M-1.jpg Narrative Story feedback-Taryn 26tribaudo https://padlet.com/26kparchman/wprbvvu11rta/wish/420852386 I like the way you describe the ball going back and forth between Kim, Kc, and Blair. As a reader, I really feel as if I was there. Also, I like the details you put in the present opening scene to show Blair is very rude. My favorite part is where Blair thinks that the candy Emily gave her is trash. Blair really knows how to express her feelings! Your story is great, but I wish the grammar was better. It would help the story sound so much better when you read it. ]]> 2019-12-06 16:38:38 UTC https://padlet.com/26kparchman/wprbvvu11rta/wish/420852386 I love in the beginning how you started by describing what the main character was feeling/thinking and what the setting was. Another thing I liked was 26zlessing https://padlet.com/26kparchman/wprbvvu11rta/wish/422238391 2019-12-10 16:00:34 UTC https://padlet.com/26kparchman/wprbvvu11rta/wish/422238391