Our Writing Goals by Mr. Pfahl https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9 en-us 2020-10-24 23:51:55 UTC 2020-11-03 17:55:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4c4.png Hannah cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858525848 1. I need to focus my ideas and not ramble!
2. I need to work on the structure of my sentences.
3. I need to include improve how I conclude my paragraphs.]]> 2020-10-24 23:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858525848 Colby cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526169 1. I need to work on my conclusion sentences.
2. I need to add details.
3. I need to read my work for punctuation.]]> 2020-10-24 23:55:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526169 Ryan cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526215 1. I need to start writing conclusion sentences/improve them.
2. I need to focus my details on my topic. (Don’t Ramble!)
3. I need to use commas where they are needed.
]]> 2020-10-24 23:55:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526215 Dredyn cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526555 1. I need to work on focusing my star ideas on my topic.
2. I need to begin each of my paragraphs with topic sentence
3. I need to end each of my paragraphs with a conclusion sentence
]]> 2020-10-24 23:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526555 Austyn cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526652 1. I need to work on my conclusion sentences.
2. I need add more details.
3. I need to remember to include a topic sentence.
]]> 2020-10-24 23:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526652 Zoe cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526698 1. I need to focus my star ideas on my topic and use details to support my star ideas.
2. I need use more interesting words. (Word Choice)
3. I need to use appropriate transition words.

]]> 2020-10-24 23:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858526698 Conner cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858527059 1. I need to include interesting ideas in my writing.
2. I need to use transition words.]]> 2020-10-24 23:57:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858527059 Cassie cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858527117 1. I need to make sure my detail sentences make sense. (Use a strategy GTA, #, 2+2, L, or OP)
2. I need to make sure I proof read my work for punctuation
3. I need to have a clear conclusion sentence.
]]> 2020-10-24 23:57:29 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858527117 Zachery cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858527432 1. I need to use a variety of sentence structures (Simple, Compound & Complex) to improve the strength of my sentences.
2. I need to add details that support my star ideas.
]]> 2020-10-24 23:58:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858527432 Roka cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858527932 1. I need to use a variety of transition words (Don’t be repetitive)
2. I need to add more details.
3. I need to use better conclusion sentences.]]> 2020-10-24 23:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858527932 Kamryn cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858528085 1. I need to read my paragraphs for spelling and capitalization
2. I need to improve my topic sentences (Use a strategy – GTA, #, L, 2+2, or OP)
3. I need to use transition words in my writing.
]]> 2020-10-24 23:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858528085 Jesse cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858528459 2020-10-25 00:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858528459 Hailey cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858528574 1. I need to add more details.
2. I need to use better transition words.
3. I need to focus my star ideas on the topic.
]]> 2020-10-25 00:00:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858528574 Jayden cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858529252 1. I need to write better conclusion sentences.
2. I need to read my writing for punctuation.
3. I need to add details to back up my star ideas.
]]> 2020-10-25 00:01:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858529252 Cooper cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858529553 1. I need to shorten some of my sentences by focusing on the structure of my sentences.
2. I need to work on my conclusion sentences.
3. I need to add details that support my star ideas.
]]> 2020-10-25 00:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858529553 Francesca cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858529760 1. I need to use different transition words rather than the same ones.
2. I need to have better conclusion sentences.
3. I need to support my topics with interesting ideas.]]> 2020-10-25 00:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858529760 Logan cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858529891 1. I need to read my paragraphs for capitalization and punctuation.
2. I need to add more details that are focused on my star ideas.
3. When printing by hand, I need to be neater.
]]> 2020-10-25 00:02:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858529891 Evan cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530116 1. I need to write better conclusion sentences (restate the topic Sentence – using an alternate strategy GTA, #, OP 2+2, or L)
2. I need to use different transition words. (I don’t want to sound repetitive)
]]> 2020-10-25 00:02:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530116 David cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530359 1. I need to read my paragraph for punctuation and capitalization.
2. I need to add details that connect to my star ideas.
3. I need to use transition words correctly.
]]> 2020-10-25 00:03:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530359 Sofia cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530583 1. I need to work on run-on sentences, by focusing on sentence structure (Simple, Compound, and Complex)
2. I need to use transition words in the right places.
3. I need to focus details on my star ideas.
]]> 2020-10-25 00:03:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530583 Jack cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530929 1. I need to read my sentences for punctuation and capitalization (Proper Nouns)
2. I need to add more details to support my star ideas.
3. I want to use better words (Find more interesting words - Use a Thesaurus!)
]]> 2020-10-25 00:04:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530929 Lewis cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530973 1. I need to add more transition words to my star idea sentences.
2. I need to improve my sentence structure by focusing my ideas on my topic and avoid rambling.
3. I need to work on writing better topic sentences.]]> 2020-10-25 00:04:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858530973 Airylyn cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858531035 1. I need to add interesting details that support my star ideas.
2. I need to have a minimum of 3-star ideas that are focused on my topic sentence.
3. I need to Improve my conclusion sentences.
]]> 2020-10-25 00:04:35 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858531035 Yonathan cpfahl1 https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858603734 1. I need to read my writing for punctuation.
2. I need to read my writing for spelling.
3. I need to work on writing better topic sentences.]]> 2020-10-25 02:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cpfahl1/wocgmuci8534one9/wish/858603734