Remake of Anonymous Peer Review by elizabeth minarich https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr You will post ONE paragraph that you feel the least confident on or want the most help with. Then, when you are told to begin, you comment on others' posts. You will go t the post directly to the right of yours and use language from the rubric to leave them feedback on how to improve. en-us 2019-09-16 14:18:06 UTC 2019-09-16 15:17:38 UTC hello@padlet.com Intro 208884 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384720743 To begin with, Did you know that Haroun and the Sea of Stories was actually labeled a children’s book in 1990? In Haroun and the Sea of Stories by Salmon Rushdie, the story takes place in a city so sad that it has forgotten its name in the country of Alifbay. As a child Haroun’s father is a storywriter and his mother loves to sing. Salmon Rushdie’s Haroun and the Sea of Stories should be considered an adult novel because in the story, the author displays a sad city, uses word that children would not know, and children books are usually way shorter.]]> 2019-09-16 15:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384720743 Did you know that more than 4,000 books have been banned for school in the U.S? Haroun’s father is the shah of blah this means that he is the storyteller but the problem is the live in the sad city it is so sad that it forgot its name. Everyone trusted the share of bla and what him to speak with them so people would trust them but he started to lose his stories but haroun was not giving up so him went to the sea of stories to save his father's stories but he ended up saving the sea. In the book Haroun and the Sea of Stories by Salman Rushdie it should be considered an adult novel this is because many of the saying kids don’t get and because of the violence in the book. 2110193 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384720919 2019-09-16 15:04:51 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384720919 2078071 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721083 Ishmeal's attitude/beliefs changes throughout the text such as when Ishmeal was first going to into war with older soldiers leading them into the forest. After they flipped the bodies over and took the guns Ishmeal tells us from his thoughts “I was not afraid of these lifeless bodies. I despised them and kicked them to flip them.”(Beah, chapter 13) In this quote it shows how Ishmeal feels. This explains the thesis because in the beginning he didn't know how someone could kill a person but know Ishmael doesn't even feel a thing with “these lifeless bodies”.  Ishmeal also changes his beliefs throughout his journey.

]]> 2019-09-16 15:05:02 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721083 2078581 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721125 Therefore, Ishmael did change over the course of his journey because the difference in his fear, mind, and maturence.  Ishmael, scared 12 year old boy, to a young child soldier fighting and facing all different types of challenges, to a former soldier telling his story and his experiences but also knowing that he's strong, and won't let anything get in the way of being who he is. How would your world change if you went through what Ishmael did?]]> 2019-09-16 15:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721125 Haroun and the Sea of Stories (first body par.) 2101332 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721192 Haroun and the Sea of Stories contain themes that are dark or mature for children. When Haroun was heading to the Twilight Strip with some people of Guppee he was thinking to himself about the mission because he starts to fear they will lose and perish in battle. “It was a suicidal mission,” Haroun became convinced; they would be defeated, and Batcheat would perish, and the Ocean would be irreparably ruined, and all stories would come to a final end.” (Rushdie 121). Haroun thinks about how this mission can go wrong and get everyone killed when they head towards the Twilight Strip. Clearly mention suicide, perish, and death, which are words not associated in children’s books. This proves why Haroun and the Sea of Stories is an adult novel due to its dark and mature themes, but an additional reason is because of the many words and expressions that are hard for children to understand. 

]]> 2019-09-16 15:05:11 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721192 In conclusion , Ishamel Baeh did have transition over the course of his experience because he became aggressive, soft, and a drug addict. He became violent when he was drafted as a soldier , he had no mercy with the rebels and just kicked them around like rocks. He became soft or vulnerable because he was scared and worried about his family getting killed and he was scared of holding and killing at first. One of the last reasons were he became a drug addict, he liked doing drugs because it kept him calm and stronger at his case. Don’t take life for granted, because it can change anytime and anywhere and any day. 2245671 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721407 2019-09-16 15:05:24 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721407 Conclusion 2221851 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721417 In the book A Long Way Gone by Ishmael Beah, Ishmael does change throughout the course of the story because before joining the war Ishmael is a typical teenage boy happily enjoying his childhood with friends but later on joining the war only focusing on killing people or taking his drugs. After all he went through thankfully with the help of the UNICEF they were able to help other boy soldiers including Ishmael himself to become rehabilitated. How would you feel if someone you love was taken to become a child soldier ?. ]]> 2019-09-16 15:05:24 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721417 Intro 2079611 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721431 Second of all, it sounded like Malala’s father could not imagine not having her because in Chapter 10 Malala was speaking to the audience. “Tell me how one live without daughters.” In this quote Malala talks about how she believes that she plays a big role in her father’s life. Even though you are supposed to celebrate if you have a girl her father still did. Even tho Malala was a girl  he cared about her so much and did not want anything to happen to her.  He wanted to have her no matter what. She can imagine her dad without their daughter. He would probably not have owned a school. He did that for her. He wanted the best for her. Malala’s father and her were very close. It would have been very different if Malala was not in her father’s life. 

]]> 2019-09-16 15:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721431 conclusion 20223710 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721441 In summary, In the book A Long Way Gone Ishmael Beah caused many horrendous acts as a child. Therefore his actions are not justified because he chose to kill, he chose to take took drugs, and he felt no remorse after he killed. He is guilty of all these actions because when he was forced into becoming a child soldier, instead of being scared he used the title of  ̈child soldier ̈  to his own benefit. Murder is not ok for whatever reasons, especially when you want to kill at a young age and do other atrocities. 

]]> 2019-09-16 15:05:26 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721441 I 2087772 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721483 2019-09-16 15:05:29 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721483 I am Malala 2087772 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721488 In conclusion, education should be considered a basic human right. Because not everyone gets the opportunity to go to school and do what they want to do and that’s really unfair. That just because your a girl in Pakistan you don’t get to have an education. Also, education should be considered a human right because everyone wants to be someone in life and have a career and if you don’t have an education you can’t have that and it’s unfair. Education can also help you help other people like Malala did. She told people that they shouldn’t be scared to stand up for what’s right. Education is something we all need and it shouldn’t be taken away from us just because of our ethnicity or our gender. 

]]> 2019-09-16 15:05:29 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721488 208425 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721769 One reason why Ishmael changes over the course of his journey is that he starts smoking. What’s happening is that Ishmael has changed his ways ever since he has gone into the camp.“In the daytime, instead of playing soccer in the village square I took turns at the guarding post around the village smoking marijuana and sniffing brown, brown, cocaine mixed with gun powder which was always spread out on the table and of course taking more of the white capsules, as I had before addicted to them”. (Beah 12) This supports the claim because it’s saying that after he had joined the group he started doing things that he’s not used to like smoking and now he’s addicted to drugs. This shows that he changed because when he was young he was playful and now he’s corrupt. ]]> 2019-09-16 15:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384721769 A reason why Ishmael’s actions were just justified is because of the fear he felt, A quote that I choose from the book was “My face ,my hands,my shirt and gun were covered with blood. I raised my gun and pulled the trigger, and I killed a man. Suddenly, as if someone as shooting them inside my brain, all the massacre I had seen since the day I was touched by war began flashing in my head (Beah 141). I choose this quote because it shows that Beah change by being brainwashed with guns and violence and how he handled it,It proves my point because it describes how the life of war change him he had all these thoughts and rough times. Beah is feeling fear, on how he is feeling.Ishmael never gave up and he keep going no matter what. 2198081 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384722824 2019-09-16 15:07:03 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384722824 2075641 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384722899 One of the reasons that Ishmael has had a course of different changes is war a piece of evidence from the story, “I lay there with my gun pointed in front of me,unable to move” (chapter 14) this is Ishmael talking to himself during war, killing someone affected him from the tone of the story, It explains how the war has changed him as a person.]]> 2019-09-16 15:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384722899 INTRODUCTION 207549 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384724843 How would you feel if your father build a school for you? What would you do or feel? Imagine you been malala after what happened to her. And then receiving the news of your father building a school.  Malala Yousafzai is a parkistani education advocate, at the age of seventeen she became the youngest to win the nobel peace prize after surviving an assassination attept by the Tailban. After that she still continued to speak out on the importance of education. After all of that Malala's father Ziauddin Yousafafzai was always and will be supporting her and loves her. He always did so much for her and was always worried about her. In the book I am Malala by Malala Yousafazai, her father Ziauddin Yousafzai is a good parent because he was always and will be with  her on her side no matter what and has always shown to everyone how much she loves her 

]]> 2019-09-16 15:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384724843 https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384725098 One of the reasons that Ishmael has had a course of different changes is war a piece of evidence from the story, “I lay there with my gun pointed in front of me,unable to move” chapter 14 this is Ishmael talking to himself during war, killing someone affected him from the tone of the story, It explains how the war has changed him as a person.]]> 2019-09-16 15:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/wmlr0txnyjyr/wish/384725098