https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj Write the student's name whose poster you observed as the subject. Write their feedback underneath. en-us 2021-10-26 08:54:40 UTC 2025-04-04 16:13:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879885891 Change your title from "donation to the poor" to something more uplifting and a movement for example - "Donations for Vinnie's Christmas Appeal"]]> 2021-11-10 01:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879885891 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879887985 I really like the way that you used picture and everything but you could add some text to explain a bit more.]]> 2021-11-10 01:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879887985 tsharma7 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879889708 I liked how you used a lot of colours to make it vibrant and eye catching, however next time you should write bigger and neater so we can understand your poster more. -trishala]]> 2021-11-10 01:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879889708 acruz518 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879890083 Try to refrain from using the phrase 'poor people', try using a more modest phrase such as the 'least fortunate', 'those in need', etc. 
Try organising your poster in a clear way so that the poster is readable and engaging. 
Try to add more information regarding why we want and need to donate.
I like how you added the Vinnie's logo. 
I like how the poster is colourful and can engage the reader.

Feedback from Athalliah :)]]> 2021-11-10 01:14:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879890083 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879890202 I like the way that you text is cathcy and eveyrhting but you could explain a bit more about the happer meal and I also like the use of images.]]> 2021-11-10 01:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879890202 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879890352 1 - i like how creative this is
2 - i like how you present who yo are working with
3 - i wonder if you could maybe do a diffrent theme like Christmassy 
~ miella]]> 2021-11-10 01:14:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879890352 amasood1 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879891410 Star - Nice drawings
Star - Vibrant colours
Wish - To improve it you could add more detail and information on what the St Vinnie's Christmas appeal is about and make it a bit neater.]]> 2021-11-10 01:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879891410 adelossantos19 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879891689 I like the supportive phrases that were used in your posters, "Help someone have a great day." However, I think that you should add more drawings, icons and images to make your poster more eye catching. -Ariel]]> 2021-11-10 01:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879891689 abalagtas https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879891825 I like how you used images to make the poster engaging. It could be better if you talked about why people should donate food so it sounds convincing.
- Alana]]> 2021-11-10 01:15:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879891825 spatel254 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879892067 I like how your poster has what each class in stage two will bring what, and how you were using strong and convincing words to why we should donate. What I think you should have added was how it can benefit the poor and photos of the poor that will make people feel sorry for the poor and make them want to donate even more. - by Shubh]]> 2021-11-10 01:15:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879892067 cquintos https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879892287 check your punctuation and make sure to expand on your vocabulary.
I like how detailed the poster is]]> 2021-11-10 01:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879892287 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879892420 Star - I like the amount of information you guys included.
Star - I like the amount of pictures you guys added. 
Wish -  I wonder if you guys could make it more eye catching by including more colour.  -  Vallen]]> 2021-11-10 01:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879892420 lbuere https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879893130 Two stars:
1. I like the lay out of the poster
2. I like how it specifically says which stage needs to bring that type of food

One wish:
1. You could talk about what St Vinnies De Paul is all about such as what their mission is.

]]> 2021-11-10 01:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879893130 agaurkhede1 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879894100 I like how you added a lot of detail when writing your information. Maybe you could add a few more images to support your text.]]> 2021-11-10 01:16:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879894100 zlima https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879894928 I liked they way you made your poster engaging and eye catching with the way you wrote your information, however to make it more catchy add some pictures of items that stage 2 need to bring in.

Ziahni ]]> 2021-11-10 01:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879894928 dkaur4 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879895059 The poster did catch my eye, but it didn't really have all the information needed, This includes why we want to donate and why St Luke's needs to be a part of it. - Diva]]> 2021-11-10 01:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879895059 tsharma7 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879895112 I like how you used demanding words like "you must take action and donate." However next time make your poster more bright to make people want to read your poster. -trishala]]> 2021-11-10 01:16:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879895112 egonzales12 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879895435 I like the way that the images are set out and  your use of images and background are vibrant. Your information is linked to the topic, but it would be better if you used more high modality words to persuade the audience more. - Emilio Gonzales]]> 2021-11-10 01:16:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879895435 mchittalwala https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879895763 you guys wrote everything accurate like writing When?, How? When? and where? which is really good.  
 ]]> 2021-11-10 01:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879895763 rbueno31 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879897047 I like how you added additional information on St Vincent De Paul and specified the deadline and what to do. I like the creativity, colours, and smiley faces. Try not to make the text too difficult to read for the viewer. In addition, adding more images can help give more information and entertain the reader. Don't forget to check grammar and spelling mistakes. 

 - By Rafael B :)]]> 2021-11-10 01:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879897047 bcaballero12 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879897133 -I like the decoration
-I like the information
-I wonder if you could make it a bit neater and less confusing

-Benedict]]> 2021-11-10 01:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879897133 agaurkhede1 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879897865 I like how you used lots of images. Maybe you could change your title to something like "St Vinnies Donations".]]> 2021-11-10 01:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879897865 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879900318 I found your poster quite informative. You did a very good job with your visual aspects. You did not arrange your food items as well as you did with your other topics . You had a "Who,When,Where", but no What section for the food. I found this quite odd as to get the best message across your poster should be properly organised. ]]> 2021-11-10 01:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879900318 bprasanth https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879900620 I really like the short but powerful and informative texts which came with questions. Maybe you could add a theme or colour combination so your texts are more eye-catching - Bhadra ]]> 2021-11-10 01:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879900620 adelossantos19 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879900666 I like the way you drew small drawings of candy canes and food items because it makes your poster fun to look at. If you were to improve on it, I think that you should add more information about the Christmas Appeal and why this is so important for our school and the people we're helping. -Ariel]]> 2021-11-10 01:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879900666 enunag https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879902351 I enjoy how the photographs are organised, and your usage of images and backgrounds is lively. Your material is relevant to the issue. - Ethan]]> 2021-11-10 01:19:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879902351 cquintos https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879902369 I liked how you included images in your poster, just make sure to check punctuation]]> 2021-11-10 01:19:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879902369 dkora https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879902619 What I like: 
- I like how it is organised and eye catching
- The colours and decorations look amazing!
- I like how you added the most of the key details
Feedback: 
- Check your spelling
- Re-read your sentences to make sure they make sense
- Be a little more informative on what the poster is about and what the Christmas Hamper Appeal is
- Add some persuasive devices (e.g statistics, hooks or quotes)
- Make sure you write neater so it is easier to read

You did a great job :)
- Dhanvitha ]]> 2021-11-10 01:20:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879902619 ldelosreyes1 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879905531 I really love your drawing skills to go with your poster, and your information for the other classes for what food to bring ]]> 2021-11-10 01:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879905531 lbuere https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879906963 Two Stars:
1. I like how you added images of the food that needs to be brought 
2. I like how you wrote down the time of when it needs to be brought in the school  

One wish:
1. I wonder if you could add more information and images like the logo of St Vinnies De Paul or which stage needs to bring the items.]]> 2021-11-10 01:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879906963 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879907829 I like how they included the date and what they have to bring in and included the stages. They included images of the items they have to bring. Some feedback is that they should of included less writing and made it simple and eye catchy.

Hussian and Rishi]]> 2021-11-10 01:22:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879907829 zlima https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879907879 I liked how you had used pictures and images to make your poster catchy, but try rephrasing your title " helping the poor" to something more uplifting like " less fortune " Also adding more detail in the " when " title so people know what your talking about. Overall Its a great poster that just needs a few adjustments. :)

Ziahni ]]> 2021-11-10 01:22:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879907879 ksingh391 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879909709 make writing bolder or black not everything has to be pastel rainbow or unicorn if that's what ur were going foe people should be able to read it ok ty bye ]]> 2021-11-10 01:23:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879909709 pleaaetoa https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879911589 This poster was really good it had very good information. Although, your information and poster was very similar to another groups. I wonder if you could make it your own. ]]> 2021-11-10 01:23:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879911589 lbell217 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879914839 I like how your poster tells people what they need to bring and I like how it is simple. I recommend adding the class name that needs to bring it in and add reasons why people should donate.

-Lachlan ]]> 2021-11-10 01:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879914839 abiradar1 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879918449 Star - Your Designs are very aesthetic, and the poster looks very nice. 
Star - I like how you have specific pictures for each food item!
Wish - Try explaining into more detail about the donation and try to making your writing Stand out more. 
Ahana and Asmika ]]> 2021-11-10 01:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879918449 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879920016 - I like how you have drawn your own images  and added colour
- I like your decoration
- Next time make sure your sentences are clear and can be understood.]]> 2021-11-10 01:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879920016 cha226 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879920115 I like how you poster fonts and the details that you puts in the poster, next time it will be great if you add a little bit more picture in your poster next time.]]> 2021-11-10 01:27:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879920115 ksingh391 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879920596 more colours wouldn't hurt and some pictures of the stuff to donated ]]> 2021-11-10 01:27:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879920596 lbuere https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879920823 Two stars:
1. I like how you added rhetorical questions so it catches our attention.
2. I like how you added logos so we know which community to help

On wish:
1. Try and add images of the specific food so the stage knows what it looks like.  ]]> 2021-11-10 01:27:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879920823 nchandra6 https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879922661 You have good use of info and you also have good pictures and you stayed on topic. One thing you should do is space out your text more and i will be perfect]]> 2021-11-10 01:28:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1879922661 aryall https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1885448945 I like the bright colours and calming background.

I like that you included key information like the dates and logos. 

I wonder if you could include some pictures of the food you want the boys and girls to bring in. ]]> 2021-11-12 01:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jrapesoska/wmhcyukeylheuexj/wish/1885448945