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      <pubDate>2025-05-08 12:55:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>R.Y corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   One bright sunny day, the examination was just around the corner, he went to john's house for revision, but,the revision lasted long until late at night.Ben waved goodbye to johnwhen he was heading home.</p><p>   On the way home, he felt that someone was following him,his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage,he quickened his footsteps at once.</p><p>Out of the blue, a stranger patted his shoulder, he screamed at the top of his lungs,he turned around and he realized that was actually his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior , he also told him to not to go out late at night.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       One bright sunny day, <strong>the examination was just around the corner</strong>. He went to <strong>John's</strong> house for revision, but** the revision lasted long until late at night. Ben waved goodbye to <strong>John when</strong> he was heading home.</p><p>On the way home, he felt that someone was following him, his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, <strong>so he </strong> quickened his footsteps at once.</p><p>        Out of the blue, a stranger patted his shoulder, he screamed at the top of his lungs,he turned around and <strong>he realized that it was actually his uncle</strong>. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior**, and** he also told him <strong>not to go</strong> out late at night.<strong>Ben laughed along, feeling both embarrassed and relieved. Together, they walked the rest of the way home under the moonlit sky.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Lim Zen Xi corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>  The exam was just around the corner. Last week, Ben went to John house to do revision. It was late at night, Ben finally done his revision and waved goodbye.</p><p><br/></p><p>  On his way home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So, he quicked his footstep to reach his home at once. </p><p><br/></p><p>  Out of his blue, a stranger patted his shoulder. Without further ado, he sreamed as loud as thunder. To his surprise, when he turned around it was his uncle. His uncle laughed until his head off because of his silly behaviour. he promised his not to stay at night again. </p><p><br/></p><p><strong>  corrected</strong></p><p>The exam was just around the corner. Last week, Ben went to John's house to do <strong>some</strong> revision. It was late at night when Ben finally finished studying , he waved goodbye <strong>to John and headed home hurriedly.</strong></p><p>         On his way home, he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, <strong>so he quickened his footsteps, eager to reach home as soon as possible.</strong></p><p>         Out of the blue, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Without hesitation, he screamed as loud as thunder. To his surprise, when he turned around, it was his uncle!</p><p>His uncle laughed his head off at Ben’s silly reaction. Ben promised not to stay out so late at night again.<strong>They walked home together under the soft glow of the moonlight.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:11:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lee Ann Writing Star</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       One peaceful starry night, examination was around the corner. Ben was hoping he could get flying scores because his mother was going to bring him to Japan. Ben was going to his best friend, John's house to do revision. They burned the midnight oil together, until they had panda circles around thrir eyes. Ben was exhausted and decided to go home. Ben waved goodbye and dragged himself on his way home.                    </p><p>     On the way home, John heard a set of footsteps behind him. A cold shiver sent through his spine, his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He ran as fast as lightning on his way home.                                                                    Out of the blue, the mysterious stranger tapped him on his shoulder. He screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and realised the stranger was actually his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour, laughing at it if it's a hilarious joke. He advised him to be careful while walking alone on the streets at night.</p><p>Corrected</p><p><strong>          One peaceful, starry night, </strong>the examination was just around the corner.<strong> Ben was hoping to achieve flying colours, as his mother had promised to bring him to Japan if he did well.</strong> To prepare, Ben went to his best friend John’s house to revise.</p><p><strong>         </strong>  They burned the midnight oil together, studying until they had dark panda circles<strong> under their eyes.</strong> Eventually, Ben, feeling completely exhausted, decided it was time to head home. He waved goodbye to John and dragged himself <strong>wearily down the quiet street.</strong></p><p><strong>            On the way home, Ben suddenly heard a set of footsteps behind him. </strong>A cold shiver ran down his spine, and his heart thumped wildly against his ribcage.<strong> </strong>Panic took over, and he ran as fast as lightning.</p><p><strong>Out of the blue, a mysterious stranger tapped him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He spun around—and to his great surprise, it was his uncle!</strong></p><p><strong>             </strong> His uncle <strong>burst into laughter at Ben’s silly reaction, laughing as if it were the funniest joke he'd ever heard</strong>. After calming down, he advised Ben to be more careful while walking alone at night.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:21:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jia Xin  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      One night,the examination was around the corner, he went to John’s house for a revision lasted long until late at night.Ben waved bye to John when  he was heading home. On the way home,Ben felt that was someone was following him, his heart was beating fast Ben quickly his steps at once. All of the sudden a stranger patt his shoulder, he screamed loudly,Ben turns around then Ben realise it was his uncle. His uncle laugh at his behaviour, he also told Ben to not go out this late.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><br/></p><p>        One night, with the examination just around the corner, Ben went to John’s house for a revision session that <strong>lasted until late at night</strong>. When it was time to leave, Ben waved goodbye to John<strong> and headed home.</strong></p><p>        On the way, Ben felt like someone was following him. His heart was beating fast, and he quickly quickenend his pace.</p><p>          All of a sudden, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. He screamed loudly in fear. When Ben turned around, he realized it was his uncle.His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and <strong>advised </strong>Ben not to <strong>stay out late</strong> at night.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:22:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sze Jane corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The examination is just around the corner. Ben went to John house to do revision. It was already late at night, so he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>       On the way home, he felt someone following him. Ben's heart is thumping wildly against his ribcage. So he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>         Out of the blue, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realised it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advise him not to stay out at night. Ben promised he would not to do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>   The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house to do some revision. It was already late at night, so he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>On the way back, he felt like someone was following him. Ben's heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps, <strong>eager to reach home as soon as possible.</strong></p><p>        Out of the blue, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior <strong>and advised </strong>him not to stay out so late at night. Ben promised he wouldn’t do it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:22:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aden Lai Jun Di corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The examination was just around the corner, Ben went to John's house to do revision. It was late at night, Ben waved goodbye to John before he headed home.                                       On the way home, he felt someone following him, his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.                                         All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder and he screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and realized that it was his uncle. He laughed at his silly behaviour. His uncle advised him to not stay out late at night. Ben promised he would not do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>          The examination was just around the corner, <strong>so</strong> Ben went to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night when Ben finally waved goodbye to John and headed home.</p><p>         On the way back, he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home <strong>as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>         All of a sudden, a stranger patted him on the shoulder, and he screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and realized that it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and advised him not to stay out so late at night. Ben promised he wouldn’t do it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:23:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wee Hou corrected</title>
         <author>severenge</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     As the examation is just around the corner ,Ben went to John’s house to do revision .At it was late at night,he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p><br/></p><p>On the way home, he felt someone following him.his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage,he quickened his footstep at once. <strong>His imagination began to run wild with fear.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p>        All of a sudden,a stranger patted his shoulder and screamed at the top of his lungs,he turned around and realised that was actually his uncle.His uncle laughed at his silly behavior,he also told him to not go out late again</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         As the examination was just around the corner, Ben went to John’s house to do some revision. Since it was already late at night, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>      On the way home, he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps <strong>at once.</strong></p><p>         All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. He screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized that it was actually his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and <strong>advised him not to stay out late again. </strong></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:24:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Varick corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The exam was just around the corner,Ben went to John’s house revision.Late at night,His waved goodbye to John. Then ,he was heading home.</p><p>  On the way home,he felt someone following him.He heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage,he quickened his footsteps at once.</p><p>  Suddenly,all of a sudden patted his shoulder.Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around is he uncle.He uncle laughed at his silly behaviour.He also told him to not to go out late at night.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The exam was just around the corner, so Ben went to John’s house for revision. Late at night, he waved goodbye to John <strong>and began heading home.</strong></p><p>       On the way home, he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps at once.</p><p>Suddenly, <strong>a hand patted his shoulder. </strong>Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior <strong>and reminded him not to go out so late at night.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:25:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lee Sin Han corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The examination is just around the corner, Ben went to John house to do revision. Late at night, he waves goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>    On the way home, he felt some one following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>    Out of the blue, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he realised the men is his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and also advise him don't stay out at night. Ben promise he don't do same mistake again.   </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     The examination <strong>was</strong> just around the corner, <strong>so Ben went</strong> to John's house to do some revision.<strong> It was already late</strong> at night, he <strong>waved</strong> goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>     On the way home, he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>       Out of the blue, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized the man was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and <strong>advised </strong>him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised he <strong>wouldn’t make the same mistake again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:26:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zi Xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    One bright and sunny day,the examination was just around the corner and Ben went to John's house for a couple hours for revision. And Ben said goodbye to John. </p><p>    On the way back from John House, there is a stranger following him, and he quickened his footstep. And his turn around and seems it is Ben uncle. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      One bright and sunny day, with the examination just around the corner, Ben went to John's house for a couple of hours of revision. <strong>After they finished studying, Ben said goodbye to John and headed home.</strong></p><p>      On the way back from John's house, he noticed a stranger following him. <strong>Feeling uneasy,</strong> he quickened his footsteps. <strong>When he turned around, to his surprise, he realized it was his uncle.His uncle gently reminded him to be careful and not to stay out so late, Ben nodded and  promised to be more careful.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:27:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jae Hong corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p> The exam was just around the corner, Ben went to John house to revision. Late at night, he waved goodbye, and hurried home.</p><p>   On the way home, he felt someone follow him. His heart was trumping wildly against his ribcage,he quickened his footsteps, in a bid to reach home at once. </p><p>    Suddenly, the stanger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs turned around and he relised is his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour. His uncle tell him don't stay out late at night. Ben promosed his will not do again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The exam was just around the corner, so Ben went to John's house for revision. <strong>It was already late at night,</strong> he waved goodbye and hurried home.</p><p>       On the way home, he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>         Suddenly, <strong>a stranger </strong>patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he<strong> realized </strong>it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and<strong> told him not to stay out so late at night.</strong> Ben <strong>promised he would not do it again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Kong Jun San corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  One day, The exam is just around the corner. Ben goes to John house to do revision, Late at night, Ben waved goodbye to the John and go home immediately.</p><p>  On the way home, Ben felt someone following him, His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, His quickened his footsteps at once.</p><p>  Suddenly, The suspicious looking man patted his shoulder. He screamed at the top of his lungs, he turned around and realised that the man is uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advise him can't stay out late at night.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       One day, <strong>with</strong> the exam just around the corner, Ben went to John's house to <strong>do some revision. Since it was already late at night,</strong> Ben waved goodbye to John and <strong>went </strong>home immediately.</p><p>       On the way home, Ben felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps at once.</p><p>        Suddenly, <strong>a suspicious-looking man</strong> patted<strong> him </strong>on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized the man was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and <strong>advised him not to stay out late at night.</strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:28:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>ALYSSA corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     The examination is just around the corner Ben went to John house for revision. Ben going home late because of the exam. After the revision Ben waved goodbye to John when he was heading home.</p><p>         On the way home Ben felt someone was following him,his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>          All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realised  it was uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben silly behaviour and advise him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised he would not go out late at night.    </p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>        The examination was just around the corner, so Ben went to John's house for revision. He ended up staying late because of the exam preparation. After the revision, Ben waved goodbye to John<strong> and headed home.</strong></p><p>        On the way home, Ben felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home<strong> as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>       All of a sudden, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben’s silly behavior and <strong>advised</strong> him not to stay out so late at night. Ben promised he would not go out late again.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>  </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:33:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Goh You Wei corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p> The examination was just around the corner, Ben went to John's house revision. It was late at night, Ben waved goodbye to John, then heading home. </p><p>  On the way home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footstep, in a bid to reached home at once</p><p>  Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around, and he realised that the man was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour. He also advised him don't stay out late at night. Ben promised he will don't do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The examination was just around the corner, so Ben went to John's house for revision. It was late at night when Ben waved goodbye to John <strong>and headed home.</strong></p><p>      On the way home, he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>Suddenly, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized that the man was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him<strong> not to stay</strong> out late at night. Ben promised he wouldn't do it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:36:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>elson corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     One hot afternoon, the school examination was just around the corner, Ben went to his friend, John's house to do revision. They do revision until late at night. Then Ben waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>     On the way home, Ben felt someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. Therefore, he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>   All of sudden, the stranger tapped him on his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he realised the stranger was actually his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour. His uncle advised him that don't stay out late at night especially alone. Ben promised his uncle that he will not do it again.                                            <strong> Corrected</strong></p><p>     <strong>One hot afternoon, with the school examination just around the corner</strong>, Ben went to his friend John’s house to do some revision. They<strong> studied together</strong> until late at night. Then, Ben waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>         On the way home, Ben felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickly quickened his footsteps <strong>in a bid to reach home as soon as possible.</strong></p><p>All of a sudden, a stranger tapped him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized<strong> the "stranger" was actually his uncle</strong>. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and advised him not to stay out late at night,<strong> especially alone. </strong>Ben promised his uncle that he <strong>would</strong> not do it again.                                                                              </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:38:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     Examination is around the corner. One night, Ben went to John's house to do revision. Late at night, Ben waved goodbye to John and hurry bake home. </p><p>Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>Out of the blue, someone patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and realised that it was his uncle. After that his uncle laughed at his silly behavior. He also advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised not to do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     The examination <strong>was </strong>just around the corner. One night, Ben went to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night, Ben waved goodbye to John and <strong>hurried back home.</strong></p><p>      On the way, Ben felt like <strong>someone was following him.</strong> His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>      Out of the blue, someone patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised not to do it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:49:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     The examination was just around the corner, Ben went to his best friend, John's house to do revision together until late at night .Ben  waved goodbye to john . He was heading home .</p><p>      On the way home, he felt someone following him and his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage .He quickened his footstep at once</p><p>      All of sudden ,the strange patted his shoulder and Ben screamed at the top of his lungs and he turn around and realised that was his uncle . his uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and his advice him don't stay at out late at night . Ben promise his uncle do again . </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to his best friend John’s house to do revision, and they studied together until late at night. Ben waved goodbye to John<strong> and began heading home.</strong></p><p>     On the way home, he felt like someone was following him, and his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps at once.</p><p>All of a sudden, <strong>a stranger</strong> patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him<strong> not to stay out late at night. </strong>Ben promised his uncle that <strong>he wouldn’t do it again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Qlowin  Writing Star</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;</strong> The examination was just around the corner.Ben went to John‘s house to do revision. It was already late at night,Ben waved goodbye to John and went home right away.</p><p><br></p><p>&nbsp; &nbsp; On the way back home,he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his rib cage,he quickened his footsteps,hoping to reach at once.</p><p><br></p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; Out of a sudden,a stranger patted his shoulder.He jumped out of his skin and screamed at the top of his lungs.He turned around and saw that it was just his uncle.His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour.His uncle warned him to not stay out till this late.Ben promised that he <strong>would </strong>never repeat this again.<strong>The experience taught him a valuable lesson about being more careful.</strong></p><p><br></p><p> </p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:53:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wong Yu Qin ( incomplete)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  One night,the examinatin was just around the corner,he went to John's house for revision.But the revision asted long until late at night .Ben waved bye to John.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>One night, as the examination was just around the corner, Ben went to John's house for revision. However, the revision lasted long into the night. When it was finally time to leave, Ben waved goodbye to John and <strong>headed home.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 14:05:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Saw Kah Hou Writing Star</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   One ordinary night, Ben went to John’s house for revision as the examination&nbsp;is just around the corner. After a long time of revision, it's late at night. He waved goodbye and went home.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>   On the way home, he felt someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>   Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs and turned around. He realized&nbsp;that the stranger is his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and told him that don’t stay out late at night. Ben promised that he won’t do that again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        One ordinary night, Ben went to John’s house for revision, as the examination was just around the corner. After <strong>a long session of studying, it was already late</strong>. He waved goodbye and <strong>headed</strong> home.</p><p>       On the way home, he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home a<strong>s quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>      Suddenly, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs and turned around. To his surprise,<strong> the “stranger” was actually his uncle</strong>. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and told him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he wouldn’t do it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-09 02:52:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kua Weng Yik corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     One ordinary night,Ben went to john house for revision the examination just around the corner. After a long time of doing for revision,it is a very late night. He say to him goodbye and went his our home.</p><p><br/></p><p>  On the way home, he felt someone have following him. His heart was very thumping wildly against his ribcage, he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Suddenly, a stranger patted hes sholder .Ben screamed at the top of he lungs and turned around.. He realized that  the stranger is he uncle. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    One ordinary night, Ben went to John’s house for revision, as the examination was just around the corner. <strong>After a long time studying, it was already very late. He said goodbye to John and headed home.</strong></p><p>     On the way home, he felt like someone <strong>was f</strong>ollowing him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>    Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs and quickly turned around. To his surprise, he realized that the "stranger" was actually his uncle. <strong>He laughed at Ben for his silly behaviour. His uncle advised him  not to stay out late at night. </strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-09 04:42:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ng Sze Ying corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>               One ordinary Sunday , the examination is around the corner. Ben went to John's house for revision. They do the revision late until at night. At night Ben wave goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>                 On the way home he felt someone following him, his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his foot step in a bid to reach home at once. </p><p>                  All of the sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. He screamed at the top of the his lungs, he turn around and he realized that was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour. His uncle also tell him don't stay out late at night. Ben promise he will never do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>          One ordinary Sunday, with the examination just around the corner, Ben went to John's house for revision. They worked on their revision late into the night. When it was time to leave, Ben waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>        <strong> On the way home,</strong> he felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home<strong> as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>        All of a sudden, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he <strong>would</strong> never do it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-10 08:11:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ooi Zun Khai  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       The exam is around the corner, Ben went to John’s house to do revision with him. At late at night, he waved goodbye with John and hurried home.</p><p>       On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps and he was in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>   Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he realised the person is his uncle. He laughed at his silly behaviour. His uncle advice him don’t stay out late at night. Ben promised he won’t do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The exam <strong>was</strong> just around the corner, so Ben went to John’s house to do revision with him. <strong>Since it was already late at night,</strong> Ben waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>       On the way home, Ben felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps, eager to reach home <strong>as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>         Suddenly, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized the person was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and advised him<strong> not to</strong> stay out late at night. Ben promised he<strong> wouldn’t do it again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 02:24:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jerreth corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The examination was just around the corner,Ben went to John’s house to do revision.They did revision until late at <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://night.It">night.It</a> was late at night,Ben waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>  On the way home,Ben felt someone was following him.His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage.He quickened his footsteps and he was in a bid to reach home at once.</p><p>  All of a sudden,a stranger patted his shoulder.He screamed at the top of his lungs,he turned around and realised that it was his uncle.His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him be careful.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     The examination was just around the corner, so Ben went to John’s house to do some revision. They studied late into the night. <strong>After their study session</strong>, Ben waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>     On the way home, Ben felt like someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps in a bid to reach home<strong> as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>       All of a sudden, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he realized it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and advised him to be more careful<strong>.He had learned an important lesson and promised he would not stay out late again. </strong></p><p>  </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 11:38:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>jin xuan</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   The examination was just around the corner, ben went to John's house to do revision . It was late at night , he waved  goodbye to john and went home right away.</p><p><br/></p><p>    On the way home, he felt someone following him . His heart was  thumping wildly agaisnt  his ribcage. He ran as fast as leopard  on his way home.</p><p><br/></p><p>      All of sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around the  , he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour. He also advised Ben not to stay out late  till this late. Ben promised that he would never repeat this again. The experience taught him a valauble lesson about being more careful.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 14:14:58 UTC</pubDate>
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