https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go Made with a curious mind en-us 2018-02-19 16:03:55 UTC 2025-12-18 05:55:44 UTC hello@padlet.com ramirezh2 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233359007 F: Change this to which- sentences 29 and 30 needed a comma if you used which WRONG
G: Change save to safe- safe means something else WRONG
H: Change later to latter- latter has a double consonant WRONG
J: no change needed- RIGHT]]> 2018-02-20 16:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233359007 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233825498 A: Subway Cat seemed to be happy to be on his own once again.]]> 2018-02-21 16:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233825498 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233825588 A,B,C It  did  no  really  fit-WRONG
but D no the other hand - RIGHT

F,G,H, did  no sand really-WRONG
J is -RIGHT]]> 2018-02-21 16:19:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233825588 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233825608 What change if any should be to sentence 13?
A:Chang grinning to gring-No you need double concenets-WRONG
B:Change brought to brung-They did not brung it to mom they brought it to mom-WRONG
C:Change are to our-its not are cookies its our cookies-RIGHT
D:No change needs to be made to sentence 13-there was a change that was needed-WRONG]]> 2018-02-21 16:19:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233825608 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826025 a insert a comma after planned write because before but you need a comma 
b wrong because it would not sound write without but
c it is only talking about one person d a change needs to be made                                                                          ]]> 2018-02-21 16:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826025 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826059 A.yet,RIGHT
B.in some why,WRONG
C.for example,WRONG
D.therefore,WRONG
B,C,D are all wrong cause they dont fit the sentence ]]> 2018-02-21 16:20:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826059 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826162 1.a after sentence 10 wrong b after sentence 11wrong c after sentence 12 wrong d this sentence should not be added to this paragraph right 2.f my mother shrieked about approaching animals that warned me wrong g my mother shrieked . as she warned me about approaching strange animals wrong h my mother shrieked about approaching strange animals,she warned me j    my mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals right

]]> 2018-02-21 16:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826162 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826435 F:My mother shrieked about approaching Strange animals that warned me-It does not have any comma or transition it keeps going on.WRONG!
G:My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching strange animals.-There is a transition word but not a comma.WRONG!
H:My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals,she warned me.-It does have a comma and is a complete sentence.RIGHT!
J:My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching Strange animals.-it would be a better sentence without and but add a comma and put she after it.WRONG!

]]> 2018-02-21 16:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826435 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826600 F: Delete the comma-you need the comma to separate sugar and I. WRONG
G: Change grabed to grabbed-grabbed is spelled wrong in this sentence. RIGHT
H: Change it to that-That would be grammatically incorrect. When it was time to get the sugar vs When that was time to get the sugar. WRONG
J: No chane should be made-there should be a change grabbed is spelled wrong.



]]> 2018-02-21 16:21:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826600 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826731 F:The sentence needs a comma.WRONG
G:The comma is put in the
right pace and it makes since.RIGHT
H:Which does not make since in the sentence.WRONG
J:The sentence is the same they just added a comma.WRONG]]> 2018-02-21 16:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233826731 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827055 F- delete the comma, you need the comma because its 2 different thoughts WRONG
G- change grabed to grabbed, grabbed is spell with a double concedent RIGHT
H- change that to it,it does not replace that because it will not make sense WRONG
J- no change should be made WRONG]]> 2018-02-21 16:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827055 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827059 A:change grinning to grining
B:change brought to brung
C: change are to our
D:no change should be made in sentence 13. the right anwser was C:change are to our.]]> 2018-02-21 16:21:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827059 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827101 F:  Delete the comma after mom-No, because it is listing names.WRONG. G:  Change Me to I- Yes,because I is in the predicate.RIGHT                        H:  change looked to looking-looked fits in looking does not fit in. WRONG                                                              J:  Sentence 24 should not be changed-No,because the ME needed to be changed to an I.......... WRONG .
                ]]> 2018-02-21 16:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827101 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827287 A-add yet to the beginning-RIGHT B-add in the same way.To the beginning-WRONG bc the transitions do not match C-add for example to the beginning-WRONG bc for example at the beginning it did not give a example d-add therefore to the beginning WrOng bc therefore is another way to say so.]]> 2018-02-21 16:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827287 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827359 Which is the best way to revise sentence 19?
F-WRONG-It dosn't really make scince.
G-WRONG-There is a . in the middle of the sentence.
H-WRONG-There dosnt need to be a , in the middle of the sentence.
J-My mother shrieked and warned me about strange animals-WRIGHT ]]> 2018-02-21 16:22:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827359 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827384 a-subway cat was happy to be on his own again RIGHT because its for the end                                                    B -he was the subway cat and now he was worried about finding his own food again            

]]> 2018-02-21 16:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827384 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827551 F:He turned and his golden eyes to me toward me almost embarrassed.WRONG,because needs a comma and does not make since.
G:When he turned his golden eyes toward me,he almost looked embarrassed.RIGHT,because a comma is used and makes since.
H:Turning his golden eyes toward me,which almost looked embarrassed.WRONG,because  who is embarrassed.
J:He turned his golden eyes toward me ,he almost looked embarrassed.WRONG,because it does not make since

]]> 2018-02-21 16:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233827551 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233828693 F:My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me.It doesn't have a comma it keeps going on.WRONG.
G:My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching strange animals.There are transitions but no commas.WRONG.
H:My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals,she warned me.It does have a comma and it is a complete sentence.RIGHT.
J:My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.WRONG.





















]]> 2018-02-21 16:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/233828693 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234309320 F-Delete the comma-if you took away the comma it would be a runoff sentence-WRONG!
G-Change grabed to grabbed-yes because if we put gabed it doesn't have double consant and would make it sound weird.-RIGHT!
H-change that to it-If you put that it would say when that was time  to put the sugar in I grabbed a canister with white stuff.-WRONG!
J-no changed needed-no because there needs to be a change-WRONG!]]> 2018-02-22 16:14:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234309320 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234309836 f-he turned his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed-WRONG bc needs a comma g-when he turned his golden eyes toward me,witch almost looked embarrassed.RIGHT bc they put a comma in the right spot h-turning his golden eyes toward me,witch almost looked embarrassed -WRONG bc the comma in wrong spot j-he turned his golden toward me,he almost looked embarrassed WRONG-bc it does not go together]]> 2018-02-22 16:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234309836 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234309973 What change if any needs to be made to sentence 33?
A:insert a comma after planned-seperate the two sentences-RIGHT
B:Delete but-but needs to be there-WRONG
C:Change she kew to they knew-it was talking about her not they-WRONG
D:No change needs to be made to sentence 33-there is a change that needs to be made-WRONG

]]> 2018-02-22 16:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234309973 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234310606 A:Delete the comma Mom WRONG,bc it was listing mom,chloe,and me.
B:Change me to I. RIGHT,bc me is a predict and I is in the subject it was subject not a predict.
C:Change looked to looking.WRONG,bc looked at one another sounds better than looking at  one another  in the sentence.
D:Sentence 24 should not be changed.WRONG bc B is right.]]> 2018-02-22 16:16:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234310606 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234310704 2018-02-22 16:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234310704 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234310870 A-change grinning to gining ,grinning is  a double consented word WRONG
B-change brought to brung the sentence does not need to change to brung because it does not make since WRONG
C-change are to our are did not make sence so our should be replace RIGHT
D-no change should be made in sentence 13 there is a chang in sentence 13 WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 16:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234310870 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234311306 A:That sentence sounds right.RIGHT
B:The story talks nothing about food.WRONG
C:]]> 2018-02-22 16:16:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234311306 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234312064 F:Delete the comma,the comma needs to be there because it is two sentences put together if the comma wasn't there it would go on and on.WRONG.
G:Change grabed to grabbed,grabed does not make sense grabbed does make sense.RIGHT.
H:Change that to it,if it changed it wouldn't make sense.WRONG.
J:No change should be made,there should be a change made because grabed does not make sense.WRONG. ]]> 2018-02-22 16:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234312064 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234312312 How should sentence 28 be changed ?
A.change your to you´re its right because your its theres and you´re is theres, RIGHT
B.change attention to atention,attention is spelled correctly its should not be changed,WRONG.
C. change ingredients to ingredient´s, the aposrifi is owning somthing its is not owing anything,WRONG
D.sentence 28 should not be changed,WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 16:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234312312 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234312368 how should sentence 28 be changed? A : change your to you're - YES, because you're is the same as you are and you're sounds and looks better. RIGHT B : change attention to atention - NO, because attention needs a double consenant.WRONG C : change ingredients to ingredient's- NO,because ingredients does not own anything.WRONG D : No change needed.-NO,because your needs to be changed to you're.WRONG ]]> 2018-02-22 16:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234312368 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234313456 A-is RIGHT because it  fit 
D,C,D did not match

]]> 2018-02-22 16:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234313456 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234313620 A-wrong that sentence should not be added after sentence 10
B- wrong the sentence should  not be added after sentence 11
 C-wrong the sentence should not be added after sentence 12
D-write that sentence does not have to be fixted  ]]> 2018-02-22 16:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234313620 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234314591 F was wrong because it didn´t have a comma H was wrong because it had which which didn´t make sense and J was wrong because it didn´t have a fanboy and G was right because it is a complex sentence ]]> 2018-02-22 16:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234314591 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234315226 A. RIGHT Subway Cat seemed happy to on his own once again.
B. WRONG because  it did not have anything to do with the story.
C. WRONG because does not talk about him being happy with no owner.
D. WRONG sentences should not start with and!]]> 2018-02-22 16:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234315226 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234317833 2018-02-22 16:24:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234317833 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234318061 2018-02-22 16:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234318061 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234318637 A-Change grinning to grining  wrong because it should have 2 ns.
B-change brought to brung  wrong because its not past tense
C-change are to our Right because it sounds better then are
D-no change is needed in sentence 13

]]> 2018-02-22 16:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234318637 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234318850 G- grabed-grabbed

]]> 2018-02-22 16:25:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234318850 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234328374 2018-02-22 16:38:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/wm4qsm7zi7go/wish/234328374