https://padlet.com/26fnanton/wlw06omb984w Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 18:36:43 UTC 2026-01-14 14:08:51 UTC hello@padlet.com https://yt3.ggpht.com/-_BWT93A--ik/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAAAAA/uwqDkpnsAn0/s900-c-k-no-mo-rj-c0xffffff/photo.jpg 26scastillomedina https://padlet.com/26fnanton/wlw06omb984w/wish/420937963 The strength of “The Brightest Star in the Middle of Nowhere” is that LeBron James finally stands up for himself. I love the details you make. It´s so good! A suggestion I might add is: Don´t name your characters after celebrities. (I don´t know Jamal. So I guess that´s okay.)]]> 2019-12-06 18:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/26fnanton/wlw06omb984w/wish/420937963 https://padlet.com/26fnanton/wlw06omb984w/wish/421678690 Realistic Narrative comment  

I like how the details you added in the start of your story, I like how you described it by using the desert and how LeBron was feeling like he was in the middle of nowhere and didn’t know where to go. This part of the story and strong and it gave a good idea of what to do. I like the descriptive words you used and the creativity in what you wrote. It helped me better understand what you were saying to the reader. I also liked all the different forms of writing you typed like similes Ect. If you add this into all of your pieces it will help you get the reader's attention like it did to mine. A suggestion I can give you is to reread your story, I found a couple spelling mistakes and punctuation mistakes. If you reread your story multiple times it will have all the punctuation and spelling mistakes you missed.   ]]> 2019-12-09 16:09:08 UTC https://padlet.com/26fnanton/wlw06omb984w/wish/421678690 26scastillomedina https://padlet.com/26fnanton/wlw06omb984w/wish/421778127 I like the action in “The Brightest Star in the Middle of Nowhere.” It´so epic. When the teachers know somethings wrong with LeBron James. It´s really inspiring because I come from a school where the teachers didn´t care about the students. A suggestion I might add is to add more story detail and the right grammar.]]> 2019-12-09 18:34:23 UTC https://padlet.com/26fnanton/wlw06omb984w/wish/421778127