Period 4 by Carrie Raiyawa https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj Please write two different notes about what parts of your speech with which you need the most help en-us 2017-01-29 17:42:19 UTC 2017-02-01 14:45:22 UTC hello@padlet.com I need help with the length of my conclusion https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150642361 2017-01-31 18:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150642361 I need help with making my speech shorter https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150643490 2017-01-31 18:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150643490 I need help making my opinion stronger in my conclusion https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150644875 2017-01-31 18:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150644875 I need help making my speech longer. https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150645059 2017-01-31 18:49:34 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150645059 I need help bringing out my thesis https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150645448 2017-01-31 18:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150645448 I need help making my speech shorter https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150645604 2017-01-31 18:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150645604 I need help making my speech fuller.\ https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150645696
]]]> 2017-01-31 18:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150645696 I need a stronger introduction https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646002 2017-01-31 18:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646002 i need more emotion in my conclusion https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646190 2017-01-31 18:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646190 Use less be verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646250 2017-01-31 18:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646250 eliminating be verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646264 2017-01-31 18:52:15 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646264 word choice https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646524 2017-01-31 18:52:49 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646524 catch readers attention in the opening https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646809 2017-01-31 18:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150646809 Add more interesting info without making speech any longer https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150708136 2017-01-31 22:38:20 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150708136 Use a lot less be verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150708375 2017-01-31 22:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150708375 I need to take out my be verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150710971 2017-01-31 23:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150710971 I should probably use stronger word choice https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150711100 2017-01-31 23:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150711100 gpai8700 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150719306 I need to add more emotion and get rid of a lot of 'is' words]]> 2017-02-01 00:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150719306 I need help adding in a more clear thesis ashe4080 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150730262 2017-02-01 02:36:52 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150730262 I need my speech to be longer. https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150730263 2017-02-01 02:36:52 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150730263 I need a better title. https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150730372 2017-02-01 02:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150730372 I need to add in more research already collected to further develop my speech ashe4080 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150730415 2017-02-01 02:38:42 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150730415 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731145 I need help making my speech more interesting for the audience.]]> 2017-02-01 02:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731145 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731209 i need to make my opening statement draw in the readers more.]]> 2017-02-01 02:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731209 Im not confident in my first paragraph https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731360 2017-02-01 02:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731360 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731467 Taking out "be" verbs]]> 2017-02-01 02:54:33 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731467 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731551 i need help bringing up my thesis more.]]> 2017-02-01 02:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150731551 I need help making my speech more interesting. https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150843858 2017-02-01 14:43:47 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150843858 I need help making a better title. https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150844512 2017-02-01 14:45:03 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/wkz1zwgsmtgj/wish/150844512