Exploring brackets in a play script by Nagalakshmi Gajendra

Exploring brackets in a play script by Nagalakshmi Gajendra https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1 I can identify the role of parenthesis in a play script. I can evaluate the correct use of brackets in a play script. I can create a scene with parenthesis. en-us 2021-06-15 04:15:25 UTC 2021-06-16 06:19:13 UTC hello@padlet.com Hamdan https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606884096 Brackets are when some one is speaking you use brackets in a play script for an example:he gave me a bonus (500).

Rating 5/10. Linking Hpl because I am referring to the last lesson]]> 2021-06-15 06:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606884096 Ghazal ghazalalseid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606888970 Parentheses are use to add more information to a sentence and the parentheses are put in the brackets. If you remove the parentheses in the sentence the sentence will still make sense because the parentheses are just used to add more information to a sentence.
HPL
I have used linking because I have used my previous knowledge about parentheses.
Rate : 6/10]]> 2021-06-15 06:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606888970 Jana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889090 Parenthesis: you use it for adding n]]> 2021-06-15 06:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889090 Avnita KM avnitak_gfs https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889108 Parenthesis helps to add more information about a topic. In a play script parenthesis are used to add stage directions.

Linking HPL: 4/5

I rated 4/5 because I have used linking by connecting what I have learnt in the last lesson.]]> 2021-06-15 06:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889108 Zain https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889318 Parenthesis are brackets that you add extra information in.So you wright one bracket then write the sentence you want to wright then put another bracket .
Linking=6/10
I said 4 because I think I remembered and recapped what we learned about parenthesis and because I feel like I did a good job for the beginning of the lesson.]]> 2021-06-15 06:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889318 Nishit https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889338 Parentheses is like a sentance in () or “” example: he returned home (after 8 hours of school)]]> 2021-06-15 06:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889338 Joanna https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889707 Parenthesis is form of punctuation to add more information in scripts,paragraphs and more.Parenthesis can be found being used in play scripts to show what the character is doing or their current emotions.

I have used linking and analysing.
Linking:I have explained where you can find parenthesis.
Analysing:I have told the correct use of parenthesis.]]> 2021-06-15 06:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606889707 Sowmya https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606890068 parenthesis are brackets and we use brackets in a play script so that we can tell some information in them as they can help the performer to have a better line.

Rating for using the HPL contributes 1-5:

I have used linking because I have linked parenthesis from my previous lessons.

Rating of my HPL contribution:
I rate myself 4]]> 2021-06-15 06:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606890068 Losana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606890163 Parentheses are words or phrases that are marked of by brackets,commas and dashes

Rate:4⭐️Practice HPL]]> 2021-06-15 06:19:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606890163 sara https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606890178 I know that the parenthesis are used in play scipts because they will know what they are doing and they add extra detail and information.]]> 2021-06-15 06:19:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606890178 Asher https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606890844 The () is using for relative clause or describing aperson felling or what they are doing or action]]> 2021-06-15 06:20:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606890844 fateh parentheses are known is non chronological report and is 2 and extra information I rate me 4 fakekullu https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892246 2021-06-15 06:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892246 Lana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892384 I think we use them to separate sentences and to give more information.

Rating 3/5 Linking HPL]]> 2021-06-15 06:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892384 Zeineldeen https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892514 They add more information
Linking hpl level=4 because I only remember 1 thing about them,if they were 2-3 things it would be 5 rating]]> 2021-06-15 06:21:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892514 aanshul https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892532 parenthesis is used to give ore information brackets could be left out but it just gives more information about the text if the writer

]]> 2021-06-15 06:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892532 Tanzeel https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892765 Time in () for example and I think places as well.
(After 20 minutes)
(School)
HPL: Linking]]> 2021-06-15 06:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606892765 Vali https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606893000 Parenthesis used to separate words that are similar to the topic example- our teacher(who loves science)whose name is ms Lakshmi.

My HPL linking is 4 because I use most of the past HPL linking but not all of them.

]]> 2021-06-15 06:21:52 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606893000 Safeer https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606893370 parentisis or brackets in a play script help further explain what is really going on or a narrator explaining

linking 4/5 ]]> 2021-06-15 06:22:09 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606893370 Hajar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606893480 HPL:I used linking because I linked my example to dubai

Parenthesis

Another word for Parenthesis is simply :brackets
We use them to specify somthing or add details for example :
We are going to burj khalifa(also known as burj dubai).]]> 2021-06-15 06:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606893480 Vandita https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606897671 So parenthesis are like brackets and parentheses could be like saying a action but in a word kind of form

]]> 2021-06-15 06:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606897671 Sara https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606941661 2021-06-15 06:55:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606941661 Nishit https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606941826 2021-06-15 06:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606941826 Fateh fakekullu https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606942690 2021-06-15 06:56:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606942690 aanshul https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606943505 2021-06-15 06:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606943505 Vali https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606944291 2021-06-15 06:57:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606944291 Zaid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606944671 2021-06-15 06:57:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606944671 Vali https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945105 It is because to show what emotion the character is doing in the act while speaking.]]> 2021-06-15 06:57:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945105 Zain https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945167 Parenthesis is important because the actors would just say their line and they don’t know what to do example:(quickly gets out of the room)where is it ?
If there were no parenthesis the actor would just say where is it ? But it will not make sense .
Linking =4/5
I used my past knowledge and I remembered and recapped what we learnt about parenthesis.

]]> 2021-06-15 06:57:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945167 aanshul https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945186 parenthesis are important because they contain stage directions and they stage direcions tell the actors how to act and brackets also tell the actor not to say how they are supposed to feel

i have used meta thinking to show how parenthesis is a important part of a play script

]]> 2021-06-15 06:57:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945186 Zaid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945546 It’s important because the actors would just say there line but the parenthesis shows that you need to refer to the writing in brackets ]]> 2021-06-15 06:58:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945546 Losana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945574 Parentheses are important because they tell how the actors are acting and feeling example: Gorge (angrily threw his book across the room)]]> 2021-06-15 06:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945574 Joanna https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945676 Parenthesis is important in a play script as it tells the actor what their characters stage directions,emotions and how they have to say their lines.

HPL:I have used linking because I have used my previous knowledge.]]> 2021-06-15 06:58:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945676 Sara https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945769 Parenthesis is important for actors because they will understand what to do and if there was no brackets they will not understand.

3/5 Linking.]]> 2021-06-15 06:58:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606945769 Sowmya https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606946076 Parenthesis is important in a playscript because it tells the actor how you should act on that sentence just like a stage direction. But if that wasn't there then the play would not have some reactions and it would be people just talking their lines.

HPL Skill:
I have used linking in in this challenge because I have linked my learning of playscripts and parenthesis

Rating: 5]]> 2021-06-15 06:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606946076 safeer https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606946526 unable to upload]]> 2021-06-15 06:58:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606946526 Ghazal ghazalalseid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606946645 Because the parentheses help the actor with the stage direction and the how they should act and information in the play script.
HPL : Linking.]]> 2021-06-15 06:59:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606946645 Joanna https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606947094 I agree with Miss.L because play script A has used parenthesis at the wrong place and has less lines, but play script B has included a good amount of lines and has used parenthesis at the places which needed to include parenthesis.Parenthesis are used to show the stage directions,emotions or how their character is supposed to say their lines.

I think I have demonstrated linking by using my knowledge from parenthesis for this task.
I rate myself 5.]]> 2021-06-15 06:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606947094 Omar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606947752 Cannot upload

]]> 2021-06-15 06:59:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606947752 Avnita KM avnitak_gfs https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606947956 The Parenthesis is an important part of a play script for the actors because the parenthesis show the stage directions. Stage Directions are the actions that the actors have to do.

HPL Linking : 4/5

I have used linking by connecting what parenthesis in a play script are and the stage directions for the actors and I came up with my answer.]]> 2021-06-15 06:59:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606947956 Nishit https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606948394 It shows how they should act]]> 2021-06-15 07:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606948394 Abdullah abdullahm1_gfs https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606948903 Parenthesis is important because without it the actors and actresses won’t know want to do for Example: (Smiles) I would have cleaned the floor.

HPL USED Linking= 5]]> 2021-06-15 07:00:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606948903 Omar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949170 To show emotions and
How he should act. Hpl level linking 3 I did not really link back to the lesson ]]> 2021-06-15 07:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949170 Zain https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949369 Ms.Lakshmi is correct because the brackets are put where the actor is doing something or like showing a facial expression so the actor knows what to do .
Analyzing =4/5
I used analyzing to analyze who used parenthesis better.]]> 2021-06-15 07:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949369 safeer https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949602 parenthesis gives actors directions of how to act the emotion example Mr gamfield: (desperately) "come on everyone you are being hard on me" so desperately is the parenthesis

realizing 5/5]]> 2021-06-15 07:01:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949602 Hajar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949733 Cannot uplode]]> 2021-06-15 07:01:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949733 Jana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949796 Parenthesis helps the actors to explain how to say and act]]> 2021-06-15 07:01:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949796 Ahana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949913 2021-06-15 07:01:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949913 Vandita https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949925 It adds some extra information and firm stage directions.
HPL:linking
Rate:4 because I made it quite clear but I could've added more info.]]> 2021-06-15 07:01:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606949925 Hamdan https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950221 Unable to upload ]]> 2021-06-15 07:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950221 Vali https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950612 Miss.L is right because her the option B placed proper bracket in the proper area unlike A.

4 out of 5 because I used most of my past knowledge here but not all of it ]]> 2021-06-15 07:01:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950612 Asher ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950633 because it show more information about the actor or the feelings of the actor 5/5]]> 2021-06-15 07:01:57 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950633 Avnita KM avnitak_gfs https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950790 I agree with Miss Lakshmi because B has used the parenthesis for the stage directions when A has used parenthesis for the dialogues.

HPL Analysing : 4/5

I have used Analysing to Analyse which play script has used the Parenthesis correctly.]]> 2021-06-15 07:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950790 Ahana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950798 To Show some emotions ]]> 2021-06-15 07:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606950798 Hajar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606951680 a bracket is used in a play script when you are doing the stage directions.]]> 2021-06-15 07:02:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606951680 Vanessa https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606952773 A parenthesis helps the actors to explain how to say a diolouge or act a scene

5stars as it is how parenthesis work in a play script and I have used linking to link it to a play script

]]> 2021-06-15 07:03:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606952773 Ahana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606953032 Ms. Lakshmi is correct because miss has had many more information than miss Jessica ]]> 2021-06-15 07:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606953032 Hamdan https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606953114 To act out the words for the bracket s for example:when someone said to act out like a lion you have to act like the lion

Rating:5 level
Hpl=linking ]]> 2021-06-15 07:03:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606953114 fateh The play script is inportant for da actor because then without it the actor won't no what 2 say fakekullu https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606953549 2021-06-15 07:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606953549 Ghazal ghazalalseid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606954212 I agree with Miss.L because the actors shouldn’t say these thing it’s just to help the actor act and how does the actor say something example : firmly or sternly. But Miss Jessica didn’t put these in brackets in the correct place. So, Miss.L is correct.]]> 2021-06-15 07:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606954212 Ahana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606954569 Mr.Limbkins (whisper ) do you really want him
Man ( sits to talk ) yes he can be my cleaner
Mr.Limbkins ( stands and laughs very hard ) means you can’t do any chores hahahahaha

HPL 3/5

]]> 2021-06-15 07:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606954569 Hajar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955232 I think that Ms lakshmi is correct because she used it to show what the characters are not saying but doing .Ms Jessica's is just random brackets.]]> 2021-06-15 07:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955232 Fateh fakekullu https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955411 agree with Ms L because she put the parenthesis in the right order and she used lots of features]]> 2021-06-15 07:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955411 Jana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955491 2021-06-15 07:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955491 Lana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955569 2021-06-15 07:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955569 Losana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955579 Miss Lakshmi is correct because it doesn’t make any sense when you put brackets on ha ha ha or narrator or even I’m fast because you can only put parentheses on how a actor is acting or how there feeling on a play script example:Amiy (happly walked to school)
Rate:4⭐️ Because I think I have understood parentheses in a play script well enough 😊
HPL:thinking skill because I thinking on where to put parentheses on a play script ]]> 2021-06-15 07:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955579 aanshul https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955596 i would say that play script b has used parenthesis more effectively because they have used parenthesis in all of the stage directions and i rate it a 5/5

play script b has used parenthesis in the dialogue of the characters
and i rate it a 2/5. i think i used my demonstration 4/5 i think i have used meta thinking to think about which play script was good ]]> 2021-06-15 07:05:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606955596 Zeineldeen https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606956057 Parenthesis (brackets) are important because they tell the actor the stage directions and they also tell them how to say the line example:(Angrily)I will not talk any more. Another example: (Leo picks up the robot confused)”What is this doing here?”

Hpl leve linking level=5 Because I linked back to the beginning of the lesson]]> 2021-06-15 07:05:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606956057 aanshul https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606956189 2021-06-15 07:05:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606956189 Jana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606956849 Play script a has used the parenthesis more ofecctive so I will give it 4/5
Playscipt b did not use the paranthisis effectively so I will give it 0/5]]> 2021-06-15 07:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606956849 Lana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606958349 Parenthesis is important because the actors who is playing the script would just say their line and they don’t know what to do.]]> 2021-06-15 07:07:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606958349 Layaal https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606959608 2021-06-15 07:07:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606959608 Vanessa https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960077 I agree with Miss.L
As she used the parenthesis when the text is explaining how to act but miss Jessica has no pattern in her parenthesis

Analising what is wrong and right]]> 2021-06-15 07:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960077 Sowmya\ https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960158 2021-06-15 07:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960158 Layaal https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960352 Parenthisis is important because if you don’t add any brackets the people wouldn’t how to perform the script]]> 2021-06-15 07:08:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960352 safeer https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960367 I agree with miss lakshmi as scriptB is correct as it uses brackets in the right place
analizing 3/5]]> 2021-06-15 07:08:30 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960367 Tanzeel https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960651 2021-06-15 07:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606960651 Lana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606961418 2021-06-15 07:09:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606961418 Zaid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606963433 Mrs Lakshmi was better because she placed the brackets correctly

I used analising
4/5
Because i analised which script Is better]]> 2021-06-15 07:10:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606963433 Zeineldeen https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606964977 I agree with miss L. because her script was using brackets properly because it made more sense and the brackets were not put in the script randomly.
Hpl linking level=5 because I linked back to what we learnt.]]> 2021-06-15 07:11:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606964977 Ghazal ghazalalseid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606965018 Mr. Gamfield : ( sits down to talk to gentlemen) I need that boy to do floor polishing.
Mr. Limbskin : ( not persuaded) I do not need you to take him from me.
Mr. Gamfield : ( whispered to man) Can you help me persuade him?]]> 2021-06-15 07:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606965018 Omar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606965210 I agree with miss lakshmi because script b used it properly and script b uses brackets anywhere is the script hpl linking level 5 because it shows the proper parenthesis]]> 2021-06-15 07:11:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606965210 Joanna https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606965444 Man:(looking bored) Fine, we will accept your offer,but we would like 5 shillings to go with it.
Mr.Gamfield:(Joyfully happy)Thank you gentlemen.
Mr.Limbkins:(Looking gloomy)I suppose that is a lot.
Mr.Gamfield: Ok,now can you take me to him.
The Man and Mr Limbkins take him to the Boy

I think I have used the HPL Creating as I have created another scene for the play script.
I rate myself 4/5 because I have used parenthesis but I think I needed to add a bit more.

]]> 2021-06-15 07:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606965444 Asher https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606965502 BScript better than A Script
Because the script B is correct using the parenthesis in the script writing but A script is not correct because they put anywhere but it need to be in the feeling and action of the actor 3/5 hpl ]]> 2021-06-15 07:12:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606965502 Zain https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606966085 Mr.Gamfield :(sits down to talk with the gentlemen)I need that boy to do chimney sweeping so is that okay?
Mr.Limbkins:(Not persuaded)I do not need you to take him from me .
Mr.Gamfield:(whispers to man)Can’t you try to persuade him?
Man:I don’t know …I don’t think we will agree.
Mr.Gamfield :Please ,Please ,Please I need him ,I need that boy.
Man:(annoyed from mr.Gamfield)Fine,fine,fine .I will do it just stop moaning .
Man:Well, sir Limbkins just give him the boy .The boy isn’t doing anything to us.
Mr.Limbkins:(Listens to what the man said )Fine ,he can take him now.
Mr.Gamfield:(Whispers to man)Thank you soo much.
Mr.Gamfield:(happy)Thank you soo much Mr.Limbkins.
Mr.Limbkins:Your welcome
(Mr.Gamfield takes the man and exits to get back with his donkey and the boy )
End
HPL:Hardworking=4/5
I think I was hardworking because I wrote a whole scene using parenthesis correctly but maybe with some mistakes .]]> 2021-06-15 07:12:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606966085 Omar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606967705 Mr gamfield]]> 2021-06-15 07:13:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606967705 Sowmya https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606968156 Unable to upload main task but main task is on seesaw.]]> 2021-06-15 07:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606968156 Layaal https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606968450 I agree with ms Lakshmi because the parenthisis was put in the right place of the script

Level 3hpl thinking ]]> 2021-06-15 07:13:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606968450 Ghazal ghazalalseid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606968467 2021-06-15 07:13:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606968467 Tanzeel https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606969119 Parenthesis is important because it helps the actors understand what do.]]> 2021-06-15 07:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606969119 Tanzeel https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606972618 I agree with miss Lakshmi because script A parenthesis is wrong for example from script A: (narrator) so the two friends agreed to race to the meadow. They lined up at the nearby tree.
HPL: linking
Because, I showed on of the wrong sentence from script a.
4/5]]> 2021-06-15 07:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606972618 Nishit https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606973852 I agree with miss.L because In B the extra info and stage directions are in brackets

HPL skill:linking
3/5 because my sentance was very
short]]> 2021-06-15 07:16:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606973852 Hamdan https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606974512 I chose b because the parentheses are in the correct place and it not because it’s long it because it interesting and peeling to the reader

Level 4 Hpl linking ]]> 2021-06-15 07:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606974512 Layaal https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606974907 A script than better b 5/5]]> 2021-06-15 07:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606974907 Lana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606975828 Ms:L because she put the braket]]> 2021-06-15 07:17:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606975828 Zac https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606975830 They are important because they tell the actors what to to or the stage direction
HPL:linking 4/5
Because I liked with passed learning]]> 2021-06-15 07:17:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606975830 Zac https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606976610 I agree with miss L because A is not using it correctly but B is correct]]> 2021-06-15 07:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606976610 Asher https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606976999 Mr.gamfield (talking to the other gentleman) you need chimney sweeper is it okay?
Mr limbkins: im not agree until its a boy going to do it
man: boys as been killed in the the chimney
mr limbkins: but i need to clean my chimney and the others
mr.gamfield: ok im going to give you a boy to be a chimney sweeper is that a deal?
mr limbkins: deal!
hpl 3/5]]> 2021-06-15 07:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606976999 Layaal scene one final descion https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606977535 Mr gamefield: please give me the descion I haven’t got all day for u to nag at me all the time please I don’t want to be rude.

Man:(Nervous)My goodness are you serious i dont want another lecture you have the last chance

]]> 2021-06-15 07:18:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606977535 Vandita https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606978148 I agree with miss. L because parenthesis are used for stage directions or extra information.
HPL: linking
I rate myself:3]]> 2021-06-15 07:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606978148 anas https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606979470 unable to upload]]> 2021-06-15 07:20:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606979470 Sara https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606980725 I agree with miss Lakshmi because I think in script B it was more understanding then script A.]]> 2021-06-15 07:20:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606980725 anas https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606980831 they are important because they tell the actors understand and know what to say
HPL: linking 3/5]]> 2021-06-15 07:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606980831 Zeineldeen https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606981104 Mr. Limbkins:(Starting to get annoyed and devastated with arguing with Mr.Gamfield)I wont say one more word,either three ten or you don’t get him.
Mr. Gamfield:(Starting to cry)Fine then I will take him for three ten
(The play ends)

Hpl linking lvl:5 because I linked back to previous learning]]> 2021-06-15 07:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606981104 anas https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606982545 i agree with miss lakshmi because it gives more information
HPL: 4/5 i said what we learnt ]]> 2021-06-15 07:22:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606982545 Avnita KM avnitak_gfs https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606989408 Scene 1: The Final Decision

Mr Gamfield : (annoyed) Oh, make your decision already! I haven’t got all day!

Man : (glaring) It’s not like we have got all day either.

Mr Linmbkins : (proudly) I will make the final decision as I am the one with the boy.

Man : If it will go fast. I suppose.

Mr Limbkins : (demandingly) 3 pounds and 50 shillings.

Mr Gamfield : I suppose that is fine.]]> 2021-06-15 07:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606989408 Lana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606998372 2021-06-15 07:34:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1606998372 Sowmya https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1607034219 Mr. Lambkins: {sternly} Mr. Gamfield we are are giving a honorable payment and that is all we will give as that is our last agreement for the boy
Mr.Gamfield: {sigh why do I have no choice}

HPL: I have used the HPL creative
Rating: I rate myself 5 because I have used two parenthesis and I used '{sternly} and {I have no choice}'.]]> 2021-06-15 08:01:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1607034219 Omar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609094632 Mr gamfield :{sternly) Mr.Limbking we got in a car accident and you going to pay it. Mr limbkins:why me.:Mr gamfield (similes} hpl linking level 4/5 because i did not add much parenthesis.

]]> 2021-06-16 03:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609094632 aasnhul https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609094835 mr limbkins: have you got him yet?
mr gamfield:yes i have (smiles)
mr limbkins:very well. i have been using creating and i have been using linking to my previous knowledge i will give myself a three out of 5]]> 2021-06-16 03:29:39 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609094835 Sara https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609097294 Mr. Libmbkins: (angry) Where is he! I haven’t got all day!

Mr. Garfield: (scared) he is here don’t worry!

Mr. Limbkins: (happy) very well! Let’s see this filthy little boy!.

HPL 4/5.

I have used the parenthesis to show that the actors will understand what to do and to know what to feel.]]> 2021-06-16 03:31:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609097294 Hamdan https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609098019 Mr limkins:(proudly)ohhh really
Mr gramfield:( happily)mm
Narrator:well they both are not friends I suppose right?
Man:(angry)what is going on hear
Mr gram field:(scared)ummmmm

Hpl linking I give myself 2 out of 5

]]> 2021-06-16 03:31:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609098019 Zac https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609105002 Mr gamfield:3 pounds
Mr lamkins:3 and 5 shillings
Mr gamfield:deal]]> 2021-06-16 03:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609105002 Zac https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609110285 Unable to upload screen shots so task on seasaw]]> 2021-06-16 03:38:45 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609110285 Jana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609111240 Mr gamfield: (tired) gust give me 10 pounds
Mr lambkins: (shocked) that’s to much
Mr gamfield: ( angry) listen do you want the cloths or no

I will give my self a 4/5 because I used the perenthisis]]> 2021-06-16 03:39:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609111240 Reina https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609125152 Brackets are to add more info like (stomach grumbles)

]]> 2021-06-16 03:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609125152 Hajar https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609125442 mr gamfield:(pursuaded)why would you want him?
Man:(firmly )TEN POUNDS
Mr limbkins:yes get him or nothing
Man:deal
Mr gamfield:(confused)i love him i cant give him...so no deals.

HPL:I have used the parenthesis which is linking to english lesson.]]> 2021-06-16 03:48:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609125442 safeer https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609127326 Mr limkins:( firmly) 3pounds only
Mr gamfield: (desperately) come on people
Mr limkins: (firm and angrly) that is final
Mr gamfield: (convinced) very well.]]> 2021-06-16 03:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609127326 Abdullah abdullahm1_gfs https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609127498 Mr Gamfield: (Smiles) Ok, How Much For Him?!

Man:(Thinks) Umm, Five Pounds!

Mr Limbkins:(Enters from right) What’s Going On Here?!

Mr Gamfield: Don’t Disturb Mr Limbkins,! So How About Eight No Ten Pounds!

Man:(Thinks Again) Umm, Ten Is Too Much How About Seven Pounds!

Mr Gamfield:(Confused) Umm, Ok Seven Pounds!

HPL: Hard Working 4/5
Because I have used parenthesis but it is not enough.]]> 2021-06-16 03:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609127498 Reina https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609128691 I can’t upload]]> 2021-06-16 03:50:30 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609128691 Fateh fakekullu https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609130306 Mr gamfield 3 pounds (Mr labkins 2 shells) Mr gamfield (deal proudly) I rate me self 4 because I got the right concept ]]> 2021-06-16 03:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609130306 Lana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609132622 Zain:(Zain will come out and sit on the chair and she will be drinking coffee)
Lana:(will come out and sand up)
Zain:Oh hello Lana
Lana: oh Hi
Zain:( Zain will get up of the chair)
Lana:( will walk to the kitchen to make for her)
Zain:(will go to the kitchen to make breakfast)
(They will eat breakfast then go out for shopping)
The end :)
Rating 4/5 Linking HPL
4/5 because I think it’s not the best but I used is yah.]]> 2021-06-16 03:53:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609132622 Reina https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609134814 It’s important because it can add more information so the audience understands the characters better]]> 2021-06-16 03:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609134814 Reina https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609137895 I agree with miss L because has the proper brakets]]> 2021-06-16 03:57:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609137895 Zaid https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609140240 Mr.Gamfield :(sits down to talk with the gentlemen)I need that boy to do chimney sweeping so is that okay?
Mr.Limbkins:(Not persuaded)I do not need you to take him from me .
Mr.Gamfield:(whispers to man)Can’t you try to persuade him?
Man:I don’t know …I don’t think we will agree.
Mr.Gamfield :Please ,Please ,Please I need him ,I need that boy.
Man:(annoyed from mr.Gamfield)Fine,fine,fine .I will do it just stop moaning .
Man:Well, sir Limbkins just give him the boy .The boy isn’t doing anything to us.
Mr.Limbkins:(Listens to what the man said )Fine ,he can take him now.
Mr.Gamfield:(Whispers to man)Thank you soo much.
Mr.Gamfield:(happy)Thank you soo much Mr.Limbkins.welcome
(Mr.Gamfield takes the man and exits to get back with his donkey and the boy )
End
HPL:Hardworking=4/5
Because

]]> 2021-06-16 03:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609140240 Losana https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609140449 Man:Fine we accept your offer,but I want 4 shillings.
Mr gamfield:(happily) yes thank you gentlemen.
Mr limbkins:(surprised) wow that’s a lot !
Mr gamfield: ok now can you take me to meet him ?
Man takes mr gamfield to Oliver

HPL:Meta thinking 4⭐️
Rate:4⭐️Because I have understood where and show to put parentheses in a play script ]]> 2021-06-16 03:58:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609140449 Vali https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609144343 Mr.Gramfield:( said angrily)I need this boy to clean my chimney.

Gentlemen: ]]> 2021-06-16 04:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609144343 Vandita Raj https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609146045 Miss.Limbkins: true
Man: so here is the boy
Miss.Limbkins : so how are you today.
Man: i am okay but don't you think its a bit hot ( waving his hat at his face).
Miss.Limbkins: actually you are right ( did the same thing that the man did).
Man: lets go inside.
Miss.Limbkins: very well.
HPL: linking
Rating: 3/5 because I could add a bit more information.

]]> 2021-06-16 04:02:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609146045 Vanessa https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/wkym1cnb96tcn0z1/wish/1609149348 Gramfield:(in anger) YOU WANT IT OR NO?!?
Limbkins:(whisper) be quiet
Gramfield: oh ok (really quiet and angry) you want it or no!?!
Limbkins:he does look like a pretty boy I'll take him
Limbkins:(creepy laugh)
Man: (with pitty) let the poor boy go
Gramfield: shhhhhhhh
(Hand over the kid suspiciously and quietly)
Limbkins:how much again?
Gramfield: (with a creepy smile) 100 pounds
Limbkins: (surprised) WHAT!?! 100 POUNDS!!!?!
Gramfield: ya
Gramfield: I'll give ya an offer..... 50 pounds

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