Week 4 Article by Merve Elbirlik Tülek

Ertugrul Parlar

2019-10-14 15:01:40 UTC

Watts, (2018) ,in his article, 'We have 12 years to limit climate change catastrophe' warned / warns people to realize ~~about~~ climate change and global warming . Watts starts with the fact that global warming will increase between 1.5 -2 C and it / this ~~its~~ importantly worsens the risk of extreme heat, disasters and floods. He then moves on to underline the fact that world has already become 1 C warmer than past and disasters starts to happend and any more possible dissaster would worsen the impact of what? you need to be specific here. The last but not least fact is his suggestion about how people can find pathway (be specific here, what does he suggest?). Watts concludes by expressing his worriesd ~~ideas~~ to inform and shows people to how they can prevent these disasters (what does he hope?).

Thank you for the task, but make sure you state the important point about the supporting ideas and make the author's argument and attitude clear at the end of the summary by using the reporting verbs.

Best,
MET

Tuana Özten

tuana_ozten — 2019-10-14 15:07:02 UTC

Watts (2018), in his article, "We have 12 years to limit climate change catastrophe, warns UN" is concerned about that global warming that it will be a serious problem in the near future.

Metin Köker

2019-10-14 15:09:22 UTC

In the article entitled with "We have 12 years to limit climate change" Watts (2018) ~~the author~~ is worried about the climate change, and he warns that the rising tempeture is a great danger for world. The author emphasizes that many scientist have conducted ~~made~~ research~~ments~~ about temperature change, and agreement; however these attempts were not ~~works didn't~~ enough to create a conscious generation. The diseasters which come out because of change in temperature is not too far away if we keep going like this. the author warns people that this is ~~not~~ inevitable until needed precautions are taken (be specific here, what precautions does he suggest?). The author is cautious about the world. He aims inform (you can use hope here as it reflects the author's attitude better) people that can be conscious after reading this report and ~~make somethings~~ (do not use something in academic context as it is vague in meaning) try to prevent these disasters.

Thank you for the task. You were able to cover most the supporting points, but make his suggestions clear. Make sure you use stronger reporting verbs that can reflect the author's attitude and make sure you use linkers so that the reader can follow the stated ideas.

Best,
MET

Selale Ozcan Week 4 Summary

2019-10-14 15:15:18 UTC

In the article ‘’ We have 12 years to limit climate change catastrophe ,warns UN’’ by Watts (2018) the author focuses on increasing ~~the~~ temperature and possible negative events.The writer primarily indicates as negative events that the possibility of a decrease in the population as the temperature rises (does the writer state a possible decline in population? Please check this.).The writer then points out the other put to be (check grammar here) affected is nature. He also states that most insects may lose their habitat due to the increase in temperature. He claims that the sea-level may increase and that at least 10 million people will be affected by 2100. In addition,to the possibly of rising waters,the writer also indicates that fishing may also end because of damage done to the oceans. Besides ,the writer points out the importance of reforestation and carbon pollution which must end %45 by 2030 (what are his other suggestions to fight against climate change?). The writer concludes that climate change is developing very quickly and that the situation is at a dangerous level and he hopes it (be specific, what is this "it"? Is it climate change, politicians or the report?) will be taken seriously.

Thank you for the task. Please go over my comments. Make sure you state the supporting ideas to the full and you stick to the author's ideas.

Best,
MET

Zulkufcan Akyildiz

2019-10-14 15:15:29 UTC

The article entitled "We have 12 years to limit climate change catastrophe,warns UN" Watts (2018) s

Ataberk Emül

2019-10-14 15:23:33 UTC

Watts, (2018), in his article, ' we have 12 years to limit climate change catastrophe' warned people about climate change and global warming. First, Watts states time and timely action are so important in dealing with climate change crisis as ~~some~~ global warming aeffects (affect v. / effect n.) ~~destroy~~ the world ~~such as~~ with increasing temperature (state what are these effects?). Therefore, the author warns that ~~they~~ people should take action. The author suggests that government should make some changes such as electric transport system and reforestation so that these important changes cut carbon pollution and stop ~~about~~ increasing temperature rise, . The author is concerned about (to be concerned about) increasing temperature which is too harmful and threatens our world so he hopes that people should take ~~consider~~ the UN's report seriously.

Thank you for the task. Make sure you use linkers to guide the readers and make sure you state the writer's attitude and main argument in a clear manner.

Best,
MET

Ahmet Ortaç

2019-10-14 18:48:51 UTC

Watts (2018) , in his article, “We have 12 years to limit change catastrophe, warns UN “ discusses the climate changes and global warming and their possible results for future. Watts starts with global warming than and warns that people will encounter the risk of scarcity, climate change overheating and poverty because only 1 Celsius is enough to create a global warming. According to the writer example is that hurricanes in the US and forest fires in the Artic like are these examples  that the world is affected badly as well. He then moves on to underline the fact that sea levels rise and it is another extra warning.  This is because of It will become  due to 0.5 degree warmth extra warming in the future .On the other hand, he underlines that latest technology can provide solutions which is electric transport system thanks to that rate of carbon emissions in the air will become less (make sure you state what does Watts suggest other than electric transportation). All in all, global warming is dangerous for  the world. It is an important way that early diagnosis is important to take immediate precautions because this problem will increase day by day. Therefore, timing is important. The writer is  has both cautious and hopeful. Climate change is dangerous but it can be solved with developing technology (and state the other solutions the writer stated).

Thank you for the task. Please go over my comments and corrections.

Best,
MET

Savaş Oğuzhan BAYRAKTAR

2019-10-15 20:03:41 UTC

In the article entitled with "We have 12 years to limit climate change" Watts (2018) the writer is worried about the climate change because of natural disasters ~~these events~~.World's issues are increasing every year step by step.He focuses on ~~want to give information about~~ how can people prevent to these problems.' (Start expressing supporting ideas) ~~Moreover,~~he starts by explaining the bad results of climate change ~~types~~.Then the author warns that if people do not give / attach importance , it will affect to our next generation a lot more easily.

You need to state the supporting ideas and the main argument. Make sure you use reporting verbs.

Best,
MET