The Soul Crushing Student Essay - Annotate THIS! 1b by Professor Tanisha Neely https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo Make at least 3 notes for each bullet point and share your annotations (for each assigned section of text): Names - People, Places and Things (@ and make marginal notes about who or what they are and why they are important to the text - Who is part of this conversation? When, Where and Why is this conversation taking place) Main Ideas (Underline and make marginal notes) Interesting Words (Circle and make marginal notes or define the term) Important Ideas or Events (Asterisk and make marginal notes) Supporting Evidence (Check Mark and marginal notes) Questions About the Text (Question Mark and marginal notes with your specific questions - Who? What? When? Where? Why? How? Gut Feelings About the Text (Emojis with marginal notes about how you feel) en-us 2022-01-20 19:55:28 UTC 2022-01-20 21:44:29 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f913.png 5y9kbvsqk7 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003865916 Names 
·         Grace Paley- writer
·         John McPhee- writer
·         Barry Lopez- Writer 
·         College Freshmen
Places 
·         Beach
·         Florida
·         California 
·         School/College
Things
·         Father’s death
·          School Shooting 

 

]]> 2022-01-20 21:28:26 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003865916 Students should not fear using "I" in text to better convey their experiences. People's personal experiences are what make their writing interesting. pgondeck01 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003866583 2022-01-20 21:28:59 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003866583 A current trend is students studying to pass a test pgondeck01 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003868450 2022-01-20 21:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003868450 tbaylor429 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003868779 Value the lives and complexity of the youth.]]> 2022-01-20 21:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003868779 Weird Words 5y9kbvsqk7 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003869399 ·         Queer devotions
·         Peculiarities
·         Waterfront characters 
·         Consolidate 

]]> 2022-01-20 21:31:23 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003869399 Frontier edging, pgondeck01 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003870677 2022-01-20 21:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003870677 Students can't see themselves as peculiar unless they have survived something. https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003870815 2022-01-20 21:32:36 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003870815 I felt this writer seems kind of out of touch or aloof. pgondeck01 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003872250 2022-01-20 21:33:42 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003872250 5y9kbvsqk7 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003873364 The narrator feels towards the end that the youth should better express themselves because they are the voices for the future.]]> 2022-01-20 21:34:38 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003873364 tbaylor429 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003873594 This text made me go to sleep...🤥]]> 2022-01-20 21:34:48 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003873594 abenjamin267 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003873782 His experiences with his students.]]> 2022-01-20 21:34:58 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003873782 abenjamin267 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003875303 I couldn't relate to this text because in my own writing I've never had a problem using "I."]]> 2022-01-20 21:36:14 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003875303 tbaylor429 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003875794 Honestly what was the point of the author writing this?!😍]]> 2022-01-20 21:36:37 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003875794 abenjamin267 https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003876099 What University did he teach at?]]> 2022-01-20 21:36:53 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003876099 I feel like the writer was a little dramatic. https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003876200 2022-01-20 21:36:57 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/wjzybw1a6zue6mvo/wish/2003876200