https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq Let's take some time to honor our work and celebrate our writers! We will be hearing clssmates arguments and will be spending some time together in class to notice and note what AMAZED you and what you think could be done better as we continue to write our arguments! en-us 2021-04-23 18:50:39 UTC 2025-12-30 19:26:36 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f973.png skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459833172 * good job introducing the situation.
* I like the way you talked about Alex's grandpa it made it very personal and that made it easy for me to engage.
* Excellent use of text evidence.
* Finally, you made some good common sense statements. ]]> 2021-04-26 14:43:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459833172 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459834259 like the way you tell the detail and the main idea.]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:10 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459834259 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459834353 i like the little picture and your ]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:11 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459834353 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459834679 I really liked the emotions she used while reading.I also really enjoyed the reasoning behind her statement. The only thing i would change was the use of the word I and I'm]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459834679 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459834939 good job]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:17 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459834939 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459835603 it was very good i liked the picture on the video u had

]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459835603 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459835745 from grayson]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:27 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459835745 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459835903 I really like how you express when you are reading, I also enjoyed the information in the essay. :)]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459835903 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459836406 Very good gob I enjoyed it because it was very informational yet entertaning ]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459836406 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459837499 you did an amazing job and never quit writing your amazing at it]]> 2021-04-26 14:44:47 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459837499 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459847343 2021-04-26 14:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459847343 oa2000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459857054 Alesia,
You did really good
~I liked how u used texted evidence
~I liked how u talked about his grandpa and made it more personal
~You made some pretty good sense statements 
Well done>>>>>>
Also great job on the flip grid


]]> 2021-04-26 14:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459857054 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459857419 Janaya,
When you make the point that the lessons are unnecessary it is a good point. It is not like he is quitting something that his life depends on.
Your essay was well written. Thank you for volunteering to read it in class! ]]> 2021-04-26 14:48:24 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459857419 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459859122 i loved your paper you really explained why he should quit amazing job]]> 2021-04-26 14:48:41 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459859122 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459861088 good job!]]> 2021-04-26 14:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459861088 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459864549 like the way you tell us the story and the way the way you write the story was beautiful]]> 2021-04-26 14:49:41 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459864549 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459881012 Extremely informational to me. I enjoyed all the little details you had too. Good job! ]]> 2021-04-26 14:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459881012 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459881702 good job i love it]]> 2021-04-26 14:52:49 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459881702 oa2000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459882745 Janaya, 
You did excellent. 
~I liked how u brought up facts that scientist have said
~I enjoyed how you brought up text evidence  
~I like when u made the point that the lessons are unnecessary and its not like he is quitting something huge that his whole life is depending on this one change. 
well done:::}}}}}]]> 2021-04-26 14:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459882745 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459884142 Janaya, you did an AMAZING job, I really enjoyed how you included text evidence. ]]> 2021-04-26 14:53:16 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459884142 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459885089 lots of information and resaoning good job]]> 2021-04-26 14:53:26 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459885089 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459888102 I really loved how you talk Alex's POV and how it could damage his mental health and drain him]]> 2021-04-26 14:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459888102 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459888401 i think u did an good job on righting this i liked how u wrote all of that for this essay :)]]> 2021-04-26 14:54:00 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1459888401 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1460631214 you did an amazing job!]]> 2021-04-26 17:06:28 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1460631214 https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1462543399
I think you did such a good job how he should quit and putting the words together.]]> 2021-04-27 03:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/wj5sxk111jlofdzq/wish/1462543399