Leyley F. Google Sites Peer Feedback 2020 - 2021 by Leyley Frachia https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-06 15:09:39 UTC 2021-06-21 15:14:14 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f359.png Creative writing peace- 2 stars and 1 wish 27ajuckes https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k/wish/1612837509 Hi leyley it’s Allie, lets start, star #1: i love the way you wrote the log and how you slipped in the vents. #2 star: i like the ending slide because it helped wrap up the store and really helped make if feel complete. Wish: i have no wish. I think the slide show was really good and i have no wish. I really enjoyed reading your slide show. :)]]> 2021-06-17 18:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k/wish/1612837509 creative writing piece 27npilgrim https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k/wish/1614538206 Hi Leyley,I loved your piece 
I liked the Jake from state farm reference you made at the beginning and it was really funny to read keep up the good work. ]]> 2021-06-18 15:33:45 UTC https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k/wish/1614538206 Anshul 27arajadhyx https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k/wish/1614548655 ley ley , this was so funny lol you can turn into a turkey bruh were did you get that front and it was over all very funny.
Addition I just wanted to say that the slide was put gether very neatly Andover all pretty good.But ifeellikebn you could have been way more descriptive and add on to it 
]]> 2021-06-18 15:40:27 UTC https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k/wish/1614548655 2 stars and a Wish Haidyn_B https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k/wish/1617841230 Hey bestiee, i loved your Jake from State Farm Reference. It empowers your piece and its really funny overall. I also liked how you put the warnings and tips. That was a very good idea. Oe wish that i have is that you check for spelling and grammar. But overall i lover it. ]]> 2021-06-21 15:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/27lfrachia/wj4t7yxkyffe5b5k/wish/1617841230