Idea 1: Young people

• sHOPPING CENTERS ARE USUALLY CONSTRUCTRED BY WIDELY-ACCLAIMED CORPORATIONS -> TO MAINTAIN PRESTIGUE, Shopping malls feature renowned or giant brands which draw much attention from the young (because they provide a sense of social recognition)

• The young are likely to LACK THE PATIENCE TO CAREFULLY CONSIDER OPTIONS BEFORE MAKING DECISIONS (e38)

→ This CAN TEMPT THEM TO BUY THINGS THEY DO NOT REALLY NEED (e28) → which CAUSEs THEM INTO DEBT (e28)

Idea 2: Local market:

• Shopping malls: offer a wide array of products and recreational activities, which makes going to shopping centers become a leisure activity and a pleasant outing

→ A burgeoning number of shopping-mall goers means that the purchases from local markets will drastically reduce

→ Leave small domestic businesses (that cannot afford to present at shopping malls) unable to maintain their businesses → Go bankcrupt. -> MASSIVE LOSSESS OF EMPLOYMENT OPPORTUNITIES FOR LOW-INCOME CITIZENS

THE POSITIVE EFFECTS OF AN AGING POPULATION ( = DÂN SỐ GIÀ)

• Idea 1:

NUMEROUS YEARS OF HARD WORK + REACHING RETIREMENT AGE -> The old often feel more comfortable financially and find pleasure to give back to communities

= the elderly ENJOY THE RETIREMENT (e22) by contributing MASSIVE FUNDS free labour to community and government projects after retirement (2 CÂU NÀY LÀ 1, GIỮ 1 TRONG 2)

→ Increase volunteers

→ CUT ALL KINDS OF COSTS RELATED TO (e37) hiring crews. (GIÀ RỒI VẪN BẮT ĐI LÀM LÀ SAO ????)

-> MORE FINANCIAL RESOURCES ALLOCATED TO ESSENTIAL FIELDS SUCH AS ......AND ......

-> SUSTAINABLE NATIONAL DEVELOPMENT

• Idea 2:

LIFE ASSOCIATED WITH/ EXPERIENCE CULTURAL EVENTS AND MILESTONES OF NATIONS

-> The elderly: HAVE A BROADER VIEW OF LIFE AND BETTER PERSONAL RESOURCES (e9) than younger people

→ Share PASS PAST stories, pass life experience and knowledge ONto the next generations (e15)

→ SEE COMMON TRENDS PASSED THROUGH GENERATIONS (e04) + The young: learn more about THE FAMILY’S BACKGROUND AND ORIGINS of TRADITIONAL events (e04)

→ Promote and instil culture identity into the youngsters .

CHỌN 1 KHÍA CẠNH VÀ PHÂN TÍCH SÂU THAY VÌ LAN MAN:

KNOWLEDGE ---> EXPERIENCE FOR JOB + ECONOMY

STORIES IN THE PAST -------> CULTURAL IDENTITY

Idea 1:

As THE POPULATIONS OF COUNTRIES GROW OLDER (e30), public facilities such as public parks, roads, hospice and buildings are modified to account for more senior citizens -> For instance, governments could build more pedestrian lanes and develop public transportation since elderly people are no longer able to control the vehicles. -> This CAN/COULD/ MAY/ MIGHT help lower the GREAT amount of carbon dioxide that private vehicles emit into the atmosphere -> As a result, this lessens environmental air pollution.

VIẾT ĐOẠN:

To begin with, there is a certain reason why aging population has a positive effects on society/ THERE ARE SEVERAL POSITIVE EFFECTS ASSOCIATED WITH ....... . In fact, as the populations of countries grow older, public facilities such as public parks, roads, hospice and buildings are modified to account for more senior citizens. For instance, governments could build more pedestrian lanes and develop public transportation since elderly people are no longer able to control the vehicles. Hence, this could help lower the great amount of carbon dioxide that private vehicles emit into the atmosphere. As a result, this , lessenING environmental air pollution.

Idea 2:

Seniors may have more spare time after they retire, WHICH can assist working parents in caring for their younger children. -> Working parents will have more time to focus on their professions, and children will still receive sufficient care and love. -> Since everyone in the family is sharing and supporting each other, this helps to enhance family ties.

AGED CITIZENS ARE USUALLY TIME-RICH MEMBERS OF FAMILIES DUE TO ..............

TIME-RICH (adj): dư giả thời gian

>< Time-poor (adj): = busy

- the old have A wealth of experience in work. >For example, BECAUSE many jobs require the level of knowledge and expertise, the old share for the next generation ABOUT skills they have.

FOR EXAMPLE, young generations LACK THE PATIENCE TO CAREFULLY CONSIDER OPTIONS BEFORE MAKING DECISIONS, therefore old people teach them to think carefully before doing something.

- because of the developing country, young people have busy schedules > grandparents can take care of grandchildren > It is helpful for busy parents, it can reduce stress levels and HELP PEOPLE MANAGE THEIR DAILY LIVES BETTER( E 41) and gain a high salary

Idea 1:

Older people have lived longer, so they are more experienced (FORMALIZE) →They are not RESTRICTED IN TERMS OF GENERAL KNOWLEDGE AND EXPERIENCE OF THE WORLD (E09)→ the elderly can teach the youth about IMPORTANT LIFE SKILLS that ARE NOT BEING TAUGHT at school. -------> .........................

Idea 2:

......REASON............ -> Older adults can provide support to family members, particularly through childcare and financial assistance= They can also help look after their grandchildren, which is A GREAT BENEFIT FOR WORKING

PARENTS (E22) →For example, in Vietnam many grandparents would take care of their grandchildren during the working hours to support the full-time working parents. -> ....................

Idea 1: ECONOMIC GROWTH(E04)

FROM AN ECONOMIC PERSPECTIVE( E19), the old people ACQUIRE A RANGE OF SKILLS AND EXPERIENCE(E21) related to economic sector which they gained throughout their working life-> Aging population can PLAY A ROLE IN PASSING KNOWLEDGE ON TO THE NEXT GENERATION(E15)->help them work more effectively and productively->ECONOMIC PROGRESS(E09)

Viết idea 1: Firstly, from an economic perspective, an aging population play a role in economic growth of the country. Indeed, the old people USUALLY acquire a range of skills and experience related to economic sectorS which they gained throughout their working life. Therefore, they can pass their knowledge on to next generation which helps them work more effectively and productively, INCREASINGLY DEVELOPING NATIONAL ECONOMY . Consequence, the country's economy will increasingly develop.

Idea 2: Maintain cultural identity

The lives of old people are often associated with cultural and historical events in the past.----> On a cultural level, the elderly have extensive knowledge about cultural practices , customs and TRADITIONAL VALUES( E21)of the nation-> They can provide this kind of knowledge for young generations and help them better understand the origins and meanings of those customs-> preserve and promote cultural identity.

INDEED = IN FACT : THẬT VẬY/ QUẢ THẬT .......

THEREFORE/ HENCE: VẬY NÊN

AS A RESULT/ CONSEQUENCE (-): KẾT QUẢ LÀ ,,,,,

Viết đoạn idea 2:

Secondly, on a cultural level, AN aging population also makes a contribution to maintaining cultural identity. ...In fact ,Old peole have extensive knowledge about cultural practices , customs and traditional values of the nation because the lives of them are often associated with cultural and historical events in the past .Hence, they can provide this kind of knowledge for young generations and help them better understand the origins and meanings of those customs. As a result, cultural identity of the country will be preserved and promoted.

The positive effects of an aging population ( = dân số già)

Viết đoạn idea 2:

On the other hand, due to reaching the retirement age, aged citizens have a great deal of time-rich. Therefore, they will supports their family members, particularly in childcare responsibilities. Hence, working adults will have full time to focus on working and handsome salaries can be more achievable. As a result, this enhances their standard of living.

Idea 1:

The old are more susceptible to NUMEROUS MEDICAL CONDITIONS SUCH AS heart disease The increase in THE amount of old people means A RISING IN THE DEMAND FOR HEALTH and social services -> That creates a..great.... number of job opportunities for the younger generation in medicine.

CARDIOVASCULAR DISEASES: bệnh về tim

THE NUMBER OF N countable

THE AMOUNT OF N uncountable

BE MORE/ LESS SUSCEPTIBLE TO ........:

Idea 2:

After retiring/ DUE TO REACHING THE RETIREMENT AGE , aged citizens have A GREAT DEAL OF free time.

-> supports their family members, particularly in CHILDCARE RESPONSIBILITIES (e24)-> WORKING ADULTS will have full time to focus on working.

-> HANDSOME SALARIES CAN BE MORE ACHIEVABLE They gain a higher salary

-> They are paid a higher amount

(UPGRADE)

-> This enhances their standard of living

AGED CITIZENS:

Viết đoạn idea 2:

On the other hand, AN AGEING POPULATION CAN BRING SEVERAL BENEFITS. fIRSTLY, due to reaching the retirement age, aged citizens have a great deal of spare time-rich. Therefore, they will , WHICH CAN HELP THEM supports their family members, particularly in childcare responsibilities. Hence, working adults will have full time to focus on working and handsome salaries can be more achievable. As a result, this enhances their standard of living.

idea 1: The elderly people have A RANG OF SKILLS AND EXPERIENCE (E11) BECAUSE ............... -> PLAY A ROLE IN PASSING KNOWLEDGE TO THE NEX GENERATION. -> COUNTINUW A PRODUCTIVE WORKING LIFE(E30)

idea 2: with an aging population WHO ........... , -> increased focus and investment in healthcare research -> advancement in medical technology, treatment, and health care delivery systems -> MEDICAL ADVANCES (E05) positively help people to live better or longer/ ....LIFESPAN

Old people are more likely to have multiple health ailments → Therefore, the elderly are those who have high demand for health care → It will bring medical institutions more funds → Consequently, advances in medical science will continuously extend human life spans. 

Idea 2: The elderly can also help look after their grandchildren, which is A GREAT BENEFIT FOR WORKING PARENTS (E22)

The old people have more FREE TIME BECAUSE of REACHING THE RETIREMENT AGE . And Grandparents and grandchild are HAVE BLOOD RELATIONSHIPS WITH THEIR NEXT GENERATIONS ) -> Many parents WHO have to work long hours and they don’t have enough time to take care of their child CAN →  They have to rely on grandparents to help with child care → Parents have more time on pursuing their career → This may lead to CAREER PROGRESSION, BETTER SALARIES, and therefore AN IMPROVED QUALITY OF LIFE (E4)

Idea1

Elderly people have high qualifications and skills at work BECAUSE They have many years in the job->Support future generations in terms of experience IN VARIOUS FIELDS SUCH AS ECONOMY or politics->Help the country ECONOMIC GROWTH(E4)->The living standards of the people CAN BE INCREASINGLY IMPROVED

Idea2

Old people have more free time Because they have retired.-> Old people help children take care of their homes or take care of their grandchildren->Parents have MORE time to work and their children are cared and Receive love ->The family is harmonious and Fullness

Idea1: Have a good lifestyle

-Because elderly people are more sedentary than younger ones DUE TO ............... , they rarely use transportations such as bus, motorbike -> It can be assumed that the elderly and smaller population >>> THIS will emit significantly less CO2 AMOUNT into the atmosphere-> entails a positive effect on global warming

• ............... --> The elderly usually have a great deal of free time-> they can take care of their grandchildrens-> help family’s members spend their time AND MORE FOCUS on other works -> ..............

Idea2: Improve mentorship for young people

- because the elderly have spent many years working and exploring, They frequently have diverse life experience an valueable knowledge, which younger people often lack-> when the young have diffculty doing something, they can ask about solutions-> help the young broaden their horizon-> have higher chances to succeed in career and life-> get a good salary-> contribute to national economy.

Idea 1: With a longer WORK life, the old have a wealth of experience.= They are not RESTRICTED IN TERMS OF GENERAL KNOWLEDGE AND EXPERIENCE OF THE WORLD (E09)→ the elderly can teach the youth about IMPORTANT LIFE SKILLS that ARE NOT BEING TAUGHT at school→ This has made them INCREDIBLY KNOWLEDGEABLE IN A WIDE RANGE OF RELATED FIELDS (E21) such as economy or traditional values. ----> ......................

Idea 2: PEOPLE OF RETIREMENT AGE (E30) can provide support to family members, particularly through childcare and financial assistance DUE TO A GREAT DEAL OF SPARE TIME → For example, in Vietnam many grandparents would take care of their grandchildren during the working hours to support the full-time working parents→ Working parents will have more time to focus on their professions and CAN CHARGE A LOT OF MONEY FOR THEIR WORK (E40)