How I've grown as a writer: by Micaela Kazanowski https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz What am I doing now, that I didn't attempt with my on-demand piece? en-us 2017-09-26 16:44:22 UTC 2017-09-27 19:33:05 UTC hello@padlet.com Micaela emmottm https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191353230 I notice that in my on-demand piece, I didn't think about how I could elaborate on my story and add detail.  I tried to add specific descriptions like, "Snuffles eyes looked like two chewed up raisins, but to me, he was still perfect."]]> 2017-09-26 16:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191353230 Jackson M https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191755712 I noticed that I added dialogue and I had paragraphs. I also noticed that I stuck to the main part of the story and didn't say something that didn't go along with the main theme.  I did a lot of short sentences that made my story more interesting and I did more dialogue. ]]> 2017-09-27 16:30:23 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191755712 landon b. https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756347 i noticed that i have better hand writing than i did then i added more dialogue ]]> 2017-09-27 16:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756347 Brooklyn https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756454 I noticed that in my on demand, I was not descriptive at all and in my new piece I was really descriptive. I also had no dialogue in my on demand and I had  
dialogue in my new piece. I was only focused on the main point in my new piece.
]]> 2017-09-27 16:31:42 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756454 Claira https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756484 Before I had no paragraphs and very little dialog. Now I have paragraphs and lots of dialog. ]]> 2017-09-27 16:31:46 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756484 Sophia https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756743 I noticed that how much I've really grown in my writing because its sad of how much this writing suck, but my other one i think i did really good >3. And other than that i think more of explaining the details and what I or ]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756743 Nathaniel https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756751 I notice that I said driveway but I didn't change hill to driveway.]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756751 RYAN https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756762 I NEED more periods I dont have to add McDonalds in my story because its not important I got kinda side track from my story I am adding more descriptive words and attributes. I'm adding too much capitals that's almost all you can see.]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756762 was ayden Hilsabeck https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756824 I was more descriptive and i am i used dialog.

]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:28 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756824 Trevor https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756918 so befor i thought]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756918 Of The Viggos s63902 https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756922 I have grown in my writing by adding more dialogue and spacing with commas periods. I break up my writing by using more paragraphs. XD :D]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756922 Allie https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756949 In my super fanatic writing peicenow I used more feelings and emotions then my last peice !]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756949 Autumn https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756966 I that I left in a tone of stuff in my first time writing, My second time I didn't need all of the stuff that I had in before. I didn't have things like a movie that had nothing to do with my writing. ]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756966 Alexia https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756993 I noticed that I did not use as much run on sentences. I also noticed that the structure of my writing was way more easy to read. ]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:50 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191756993 Maia https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757003 One thing I noticed was a had a really bad introduction on my on demand.Now i have a great intro now]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757003 Charli https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757045 I noticed That I made my writing more easier to read and that I had paragraphs ]]> 2017-09-27 16:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757045 Austin https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757061 i need to put spases after .... I have grown as a witter]]> 2017-09-27 16:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757061 Tyler https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757119 I had to add more paragraphs to my story so then it wasn't a really big chunk of text  and so there was a break in the text]]> 2017-09-27 16:33:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757119 Landon W https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757167 I noticed that In this writing I have one piece of dialogue. When I made my begging it did not collaborate with the story. ]]> 2017-09-27 16:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757167 Tucker https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757641 I have grow as a writer for my intro In my last piece I had no intro at all. I also had no detail at all and on my Narrative I have about a full page of description. In My first piece I was leaving out a lot of important parts of my story.


]]> 2017-09-27 16:34:16 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757641 Rabia https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757830 I have grown as a writer to be better at describing things and describing my actions.]]> 2017-09-27 16:34:39 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191757830 Alliosn https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191758615 I added a lot more detail]]> 2017-09-27 16:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191758615 Benny https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191759324 I used more describing words like my face got red hot red. I thank my reader got more interested in the story when I added more things like that.]]> 2017-09-27 16:37:41 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191759324 Finn Wenta s52940 https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191759887 My first had to be edited a lot! There wasn't a lot of dialogue, and i didn't explain who someone is. ]]> 2017-09-27 16:38:45 UTC https://padlet.com/emmottm/wh9hmthccktz/wish/191759887