ENGL 2322 5-Minute Othello by Mary Mobley

ENGL 2322 5-Minute Othello by Mary Mobley https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74 Each individual will write 1-2 complete sentence responses for EACH of the following. Plot: How well did the group include all of the major events of the play clearly? (Tell them what you like most about the way they presented the action of the play.) Characters: How did the group develop the characters so that their personalities and actions are clear? (Tell them what you like most about the way they developed their characters.) Presentation: How did the group do at presenting their play within the requirements of the rubric? (Tell them what you like most about the actual video.) en-us 2021-11-01 11:21:39 UTC 2026-03-18 04:03:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f1ec-1f1e7.png Group 1 marymobley1 https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1858472923 2021-11-01 11:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1858472923 Group 4 marymobley1 https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1858480456 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1YywqPD3x4IkJdlP_Wtjskn4AJFjhEHv4/view?ts=617f666b]]> 2021-11-01 11:30:12 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1858480456 Group 3 marymobley1 https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1858483869 2021-11-01 11:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1858483869 Group 5 marymobley1 https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1858486141 2021-11-01 11:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1858486141 Group 1 Feedback- Stephanie https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859057497 The main events were well described and included with the images. The characters were well drawn and I could tell what drawing represented who. But I do wish that there could be movement provided for the characters. The characters not having movement and having to stare at the image for a period of time did really grab my attention. Also the presenting was very nice I could hear every one clearly and the rubric was well followed. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:13:42 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859057497 Izzy’s Group5 Feedback https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859057881 The plot was very well done, all the acts were very clear and all of the information was delivered in a direct way. All of the characters were distinct and easy to tell apart and they were played along almost identically to the actual play. The presentation as a whole was very professionally done and clear.]]> 2021-11-01 15:13:50 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859057881 group 5 https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859063640 Plot: How well did the group include all of the major events of the play clearly?
I really liked how they included the images and how well they scripted them. It was very creative and was well written.

Characters: How did the group develop the characters so that their personalities and actions are clear?
The characters were shown very well and the characters were portrayed very well. I like how well they project the characters dramatically.

Presentation: How did the group do at presenting their play within the requirements of the rubric?
Overall, I really liked how well the play was portrayed. I like how the characters were shown.]]> 2021-11-01 15:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859063640 Group 5 Feedback- Stephanie https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859075407 I loved how there was a background and music added. This made the plot understandable and easy to keep up with. The characters were well done I like how it was a cartoon image of the real characters. There was movement of the characters which made it seem more interesting and more like a movie. Overall, the presentation was great from the details to the clear voices. Everything was shown well and was captivating. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:19:31 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859075407 Izzy’s Group3 Feedback https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859076712 The plot was all there even the small details with their own twist which was a pleasing change to the story. They used pictures on popsicle sticks to show each character and it was really easy to tell all the characters apart that way but it does not show any emotions which I would love to see. The presentation was a little long but it was very entertaining the whole time.]]> 2021-11-01 15:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859076712 Group 5 by LaWayne Sneed https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859083560 Plot: I think that Group 5 did a great job with the plot. They covered the major parts of the play that were essential to the story.
Characters: All the characters felt like themselves and all of their dialogue made it easy to identify who was who.
Presentation: I really enjoyed the presentation with the characters on sticks and the background. It was fun to watch.]]> 2021-11-01 15:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859083560 Group 5 feedback- Pedro https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859084416 I like how your group caught the most important parts of each act. The information that was represented in the script was simple and to the point. Each character has a different popsicle stick to show the differences and to make sure the audience knew who was who. Overall the theme of the video stayed consistent and the theme worked well as a play. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:22:07 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859084416 group 1 https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859085509 plot:
I like how the characters were drawn, it was very detailed. I also like how you can tell which character is who.

characters:
I like how well drawn the characters were. It was creative and very hard not to figure who is who.

presentation:
it was simple and straight to the point. I could understand what is going on.]]> 2021-11-01 15:22:28 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859085509 group 4 https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859091870 plot:
I love how well written the script is. I love how dramatic it is.

characters:
I love how well the characters were written. You could really tell who is who. The characters were very creatively written and portrayed.

presentation:
It was very funny and well written. i liked how it was written in a more creative manner.]]> 2021-11-01 15:24:32 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859091870 Group 5 Feedback ~Ars https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859095152 Small details but all the facts and important phrases were there. Love the background music and the ideas. It was easy to understand.

The characters were understandable and I like how it was cartoons.

The presentation was easy, clear and understandable.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:25:34 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859095152 Group 5: Alexa https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859098623 Plot: The group showed each major event of the play by explaining the importance of each act and just moving the stick figures as if they were actual people performing. I really enjoyed how the characters' actions had sound effects.

Characters: They developed the characters personalities and actions to be clear by illustrating their inner thoughts as well them just speaking really clearly with no background distractions. I really like how they showed Iago and the development of Iago’s personality.

Presentation: The way they present their video was by using stick figures and a background for each different scene. I love how it showed them walking, dancing and even the facial expressions shown in the stick figures.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859098623 Group 1 - LaWayne Sneed https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859102149 Plot: Overall the main events of the story were covered very well
Characters: All of the important characters played their parts well in the story and their dialogue showed.
Presentation: The voiceovers were good but I do wish that all the other drawings for characters were like the first two.]]> 2021-11-01 15:27:56 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859102149 Group 4 Feedback- Stephanie https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859105476 I really loved how the script is written in our generation language. But it still showed all of the plots very well and it was entertaining. Also I really liked how you were the ones that played the characters personally. The captions that were added to understand what characters were being played was nice. I liked how the characters were dramatic made the presentation interesting. In conclusion, all of the important events were included. But I do recommend to speak louder since it was difficult to hear what you were all saying sometimes. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:29:02 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859105476 Group 5 Feedback - Smriti https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859105698 Plot: The major events were well presented in their video and the dialogue was to the point so it was easy to understand.

Characters: I really liked how they added the extra details on the characters like the handkerchief and swords. The characters personalities were clearly displayed based on the character images they choose.

Presentation: I liked how their presentation wasn't fast paced and the way they changed the backgrounds and added music was also entertaining. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:29:07 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859105698 Group 1 Feedback ~Ars https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859108741 I like how this group shows every details and everything was covered.

Characters were simple and clear.

The presentation was good and enjoyable for me.
Overall good presentation ]]> 2021-11-01 15:30:09 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859108741 Group 1 -Brian M https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859109647 Group 1- There were some missing major events in the video, act 3 was not in the video but the acts that are in the video do have the major plots of Othello. The characters in the video clearly show their motives. I like how Othello is presented in drawings.]]> 2021-11-01 15:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859109647 Group 5 - Ariana https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859111396 I like how this group added depth to their play. Adding music and different backgrounds really caught my attention. The script was very well written and organized. Their characters were very expressive in their tone. Y’all weren’t just reading the script, y’all were actually acting.]]> 2021-11-01 15:31:08 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859111396 Group 3 - Pedro https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859115385 Group 3 included all the major events of the story and clearly added some of the smaller details as well. Each character had a different popsicle person to represent them and when the characters would talk that popsicle person would move. The presentation overall was great, the background changed to help with the flow of the story and it was a good condensed telling of the story othello.]]> 2021-11-01 15:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859115385 Group 3 - Samantha Rivera https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859118788 Plot:
I like how they made popsicle sticks to show their characters and from their movement to demonstrate their character’s personality and character. Another thing that I like about how condensed they made their script and the major events of the story because it really helped me fully understand what is going on in the story than the original.

Characters:
I like how they made their characters act briefly and clearly to understand what is going on in the story. For example, when we came to Act 5, where Othello attempts to kill Desdemona, they came straight to the point where Othello kills her, which made it obvious how Othello’s character developed based on Iago’s lies.

Presentation:
I like how they presented their script/video with popsicle sticks because it gives the audience an idea of who is who and you can add more characters to the story with some movements. Another thing I liked about their presentation is the acting of each character because it shows clearly who the character really is and the development of it as each major event goes on throughout the story. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:33:40 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859118788 Group 4 Feedback ~Ars https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859122301 I like how it was written like in our generation language and the background also the music.

The characters were played personally and I think they did good. It was dramatic but nice:)

Overall all the details and the characters were there included. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:34:50 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859122301 Izzy’s Group1 Feedback https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859123569 The plot was all very clear and the information was direct. The characters were all drawn out so they were easy to tell apart even though some part just show the script. The presentation was a little poor, like I said before, some parts were pictures of the script and other parts were drawings and it was a bit lengthy other than that it was pretty well.]]> 2021-11-01 15:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859123569 Group 5- Brian M https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859124025 Group 5- I like how the video shows all the major events of Othello as a more condensed version. I like how the characters talk in different ways than the original but it is still clear as to what their motives are and what they are saying. I like how it was presented with the multiple jump cuts and difference in dialogue between the original.]]> 2021-11-01 15:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859124025 Group 1: Alexa https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859128531 Plot: The group showed each major event by illustrating where each act is in the play. I really enjoyed how clearly the play was easy to comprehend.

Characters: The group developed the characters personalities by illustrating their actions at the end of the play. I really enjoyed how they viewed Othello in the end and just how his actions were being proteger over all.

Presentation: The group presented the play by having illustrations and a voiceover to explain each scene. I really enjoyed how well and entertaining the illustrations were.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:37:01 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859128531 Group 1- Ariana https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859129288 The plot was easy so follow and was interesting especially with your different adaptations. I like how y’all took a different approach with drawing your characters. I felt like your characters could’ve have a little more depth to them especially with their tones but overall y’all did great. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:37:17 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859129288 Group 4 - Pedro https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859133243 I liked how group 4 created a version of the story Othello that felt like it was more from a modern age. Their version was even able to include all of the major events. Each person had a different character and as an example Izzy had a different way he would act when he was Desdemona. Overall the project was a good condensed version of Othello with a modern twist to it. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:38:37 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859133243 Group 3 - LaWayne Sneed https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859135595 Plot: Overall I would say that everything covered was important to the play and was done fairly decent.
Characters: I really enjoyed the characters and how the language felt true to the source material.
Presentation: The presentation was done well and the pictures of the characters were very nice.]]> 2021-11-01 15:39:22 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859135595 Group 1 (Leva) 22leva_mokhtari https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859138050

Plot: Each scene was an appropriate time to get the point of the act across. The story was carried out swiftly and according to the set time, each scene was short sweet and to the point.

Characters: There could have been more insight or development to Iago’s intentions, as there’s a sudden shift in his motives and plans without any perspective to his character directly. Othello’s shift in character was very sudden but all characters made their standpoint clear quickly per scene.

Presentation: Taking the digital art approach was creative, but I wish there were more pictures if not any animation. Having a larger variety of visuals would help the audience follow along with the audio and carry out the plot.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859138050 Group 4 Feedback - Smriti https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859141127 Plot: All of the major events from the story happened and it was played clearly. It was easy to understand what was happening based on the characters acting.

Character: All of the characters were played well and their personalities were clearly shown. I especially liked the character design of Desdemona.

Presentation: I liked how dramatic the actual video was and the music also added to that part. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:41:14 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859141127 Group 3 (Leva) 22leva_mokhtari https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859144425

Plot: The writing and stage directions correlated with the setting changes separated each scene and act in an organized manner. Easy to follow and connect back to the original play.

Characters: Included characters that had minor roles and drove plot forward such as Bianca and Lodovico. All other major characters had comedic yet informative commentary and played an insightful part in the reenactment.

Presentation: The puppets and writing is cute and funny, and worked well with throughout each scene to tell the story. The settings and color was also very fitting to the feel of a time-period piece.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:42:24 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859144425 Group 3- Brian M https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859144706 Group 3- I like how the video has all the major events of Othello and some things that aren’t as important to the plot. I like how the characters' motives are clearly portrayed and their relationship with other characters is made clear. I like how the video is presented in black and white and the backgrounds match with the scenes.]]> 2021-11-01 15:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859144706 Group 3 Feedback ~Ars https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859144875 Love how they include all the major events of the story.

I like how the characters were shown. They were brief and simple to understand.

The presentation was little long but not boring to watch. The background change everything and help to go through the presentation. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:42:33 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859144875 Group 4 (Leva) 22leva_mokhtari https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859145372

Plot: Hit all the major components of the play. I really enjoyed the reactions and comedic remarks in the revised writing because it modernized everything that took place in the original piece.

Characters: Each essential character was included for a proper amount of time. Though their personalities could’ve been developed more, their intentions and place in the piece was clear.

Presentation: Impressive that you guys were able to recreate your parts by actually performing it. The writing was humorous and appealed to the use of language of the audience, group members doubled up on characters accordingly.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:42:43 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859145372 Group 5 (Leva) 22leva_mokhtari https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859146240

Plot: Pivotal plot points were neatly and promptly included throughout the course of the reenactment. Each scene had a very balanced amount of time, nothing felt rushed or dragged out.

Characters: The included monologues given by Iago gave insight to inner conflicts of his character and made it so the story was told from his perspective directly. Other characters’ personalities and ability to infer their inner thoughts were well portrayed.

Presentation: Setting changes and declared act splits structured the reenactment in an organized manner, and the sound effects and props were cool too! The little cutouts were really nice and easy to follow, even Desdemona had a handkerchief.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859146240 Group 4 - Arian a https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859147231 This group really understood their target audience and did great. Their play was very entertaining and funny. You could each characters personality with how well the actors acted. Presentation was amazing, very well edited and smooth transitions.]]> 2021-11-01 15:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859147231 Group 2 marymobley1 https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859157999 2021-11-01 15:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859157999 Group 3- Ariana https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859160668 Plot was easy to follow and easy to watch. I like how the characters are very expressive and alive, even though they are popsicle sticks. I like how y’all make your presentation in black and white which really suits the time period and sets the tone for the story. Also i like the small detail of how y’all characters are dressed like the old times]]> 2021-11-01 15:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859160668 Group 3: Alexa https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859162882

Plot: The group showed the major events by clearly showing where each act was and they just explained what was important about the scene. I really enjoyed seeing the way Iago was being portrayed in the end.

Characters: The group showed the characters' development by clearly illustrating their actions as the play went on. I really enjoyed how the characters were being portrayed and they all have their personal touch to them.

Presentation: They presented the play and characters by using stick figures and by using different backgrounds to display each different scene. I really enjoyed watching the different characters “act out”.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:48:36 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859162882 Group 4 - Samantha Rivera https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859164289 Plot:
I like how the members acted out the characters to show how the characters were like in the story, which brings the active version of the plot instead of visualizing what was going on throughout the story. The script is well written and demonstrates the physical actions and emotions of characters to understand their point of view.

Characters:
Each primary and secondary character of the story was included and acted very well. The only suggestion I would give is to show more emotion in the character when acting it out because although it was comedic and entertaining to watch the play, I think adding some emotion to the character would make a difference in showing the character’s personality.

Presentation:
The presentation of the video is great, especially of it being acted out. However, it was kind of difficult to hear the acting due to some background noise. But the best thing that I liked about the video was how comedic the acting was because it made it more entertaining to watch and understand the story.]]> 2021-11-01 15:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859164289 Group 2- Brian M https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859169168 Group 2- I like how the video has all the major events of Othello and it is very detailed. I like how the characters are very expressive. I like how the video is portrayed with little figurines, it is unique.]]> 2021-11-01 15:50:41 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859169168 Group 2: Alexa https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859190550 Plot: The group showed each scene very well and accurately by even inserting props to illustrate the different scenes. I really enjoyed seeing the different props and just how they used the characters to illustrate the scene.

Characters: The group showed the development of the different characters by illustrating their actions very clearly. I really enjoyed the choice of words being used to explain the expression of each character.

Presentation: The way the group presented the play was by using little toys to illustrate the different characters. I really enjoyed seeing the characters acting things out.

]]> 2021-11-01 15:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859190550 Group 1 Feedback - Smriti https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859190826 Plot: I like the writing of the play and it wasn't hard to understand what was being said. It was entertaining to listen to the voice changes of the different characters.

Character: I enjoyed the images of the characters that were drawn. I would suggest to add more images so that it easier for the audience to follow the plot.

Presentation: I really liked the illustrations and the voice covers made the video more entertaining. ]]> 2021-11-01 15:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859190826 Group 1: Casey https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859203573 They included the major events by making sure to have different backgrounds for each scene and act with emotion to the most horrific parts. This group well-developed the characters by having different voice changes. Overall, I liked how simple and straight to the point their video was because it briefly summarized the whole play. ]]> 2021-11-01 16:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859203573 Group 2: Casey https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859219697 I love how they strongly portrayed the events by adding background effects and showing how they moved through their scenes. Moreover, they included dramatic figure of speech and spoke as if they were from those times. Their play was very detailed and gave a cinematic experience.]]> 2021-11-01 16:08:27 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859219697 Group 2 Feedback - Smriti https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859223317 Plot: The major events were shown clearly as well as some of the details. I would suggest to add background images to help with the scene changes.

Characters: The toys used to illustrate the characters expressed the characters personalities through their movements. The voice covers really added to the characters personalities.

Presentation: I really like what you used to play the characters. It was very cute and unique as no one else had done the same thing. ]]> 2021-11-01 16:09:49 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859223317 Group 5 - Samantha Rivera https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859234247 Plot:
The writing and the acting of the play are written well and briefly. I like how they used popsicle sticks and used sticky notes and actions to demonstrate the characters’ acting and their personality, which helps the audience to know what is going on.

Characters:
I like how the members made their characters stand out in what they plan to do or what they feel to indicate what to expect. For example, in Act 2, where the video zoomed into Iago to show that he is talking to himself or thinking to himself of what he feels and his intentions are, which shows his true character and villainy.

Presentation:
I like how the video shows when the act is coming before continuing on the story and the sound effects make the play sound like a movie, which is amazing! Another thing that I liked about the presentation was how they acted out the characters and how they inserted additional stuff like sticky notes to their character’s actions and intentions.]]> 2021-11-01 16:13:49 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859234247 Group 3: Casey https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859239760 This group added many background changes as the scenes contained that made it seem like a real play. They spoke with emotion and fulfilled the characters feelings throughout the story. In the end, their story was easy to follow and provided enough details to understand what was happening. ]]> 2021-11-01 16:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859239760 Group 2 - Samantha Rivera https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859260564 Plot:
The major events were presented out well and briefly. I like how the major events were presented out with well acting as it sounds like it is from the audio of the original story.

Characters:
I like how the script is well written to understand where the character is developing to know what is happening and what to expect from the characters. I like how some of the group members acted out with some emotions to add some sound to the characters and the setting to sound like it is a movie.

Presentation:
The presentation is presented well as it is entertaining. The best thing that I like about the presentation was not only the usage of the action figures instead of popsicle sticks to represent the characters, but the acting and the sound effects of the story to illustrate the events.

]]> 2021-11-01 16:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859260564 Group 4: Casey https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859267781 First, I liked how they acted out the play in real-life rather than using props or stick figures. Also, they included fun transitions and drama to show a sense of imagery. They made their characters speak in a way that made us understand the story rather than if it was in modern English. Lastly, I liked how they made the Iago character come to life by showing how MESSY he was!]]> 2021-11-01 16:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859267781 Group 4 Feedback - Kaele https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859973706 Plot: I like how simple and straightforward it was. It included the major plot points of Othello from a more current point of view in order to understand what actually goes on in this play.

Characters: The group developed these characters in a more modern appeal. The way they talked and expressed the characters individually is easier for the current audience to understand but that doesn't stray far away from the original storyline.

Presentation: I like the editing of the overall video and the sound effects that were included. They did a good job putting it all together. ]]> 2021-11-01 22:37:29 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1859973706 Group 1 Feedback - Kaele https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1860009621 Plot: The main points were well interpreted by the dialogue. It was simple to understand and well verbally descriptive.

Characters: I like that there was a different approach when it came to the visual portrayal of the characters. I would suggest adding more visuals to keep the interpretation pleasing in some way.

Presentation: I like that your presentation gives off an audio play concept. It also includes nice visuals to separate the acts that were being interpreted by the group.]]> 2021-11-01 23:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1860009621 Group 1 feedback (saul) https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1863525682
Group 1:

Plot-The main points of the plot were easy to understand but could have used a bit more detail. Although I did like the simplicity of the story.

Characters-The characters seemed to be slowly changing which I like because in the story it is like that as well.

Presentation-The presentation itself was very simple and could have used more but I like how it seemed like a book almost.

]]> 2021-11-03 03:37:31 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1863525682 Group 3 feedback (saul) https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1863529854 Group 3:

Plot-The plot is well explained and I like the way the story is expressed with detail and emphasis.

Characters-I like how the characters are expressed in the video and they are played out well.

Presentation-The presentation was good and simple. I liked how the video was made with pictures of the characters.

]]> 2021-11-03 03:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1863529854 Group 4 feedback (saul) https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1863530758 Group 4:

Plot-It seems really summarized and shortened but I like that because it makes it easy to follow.

Characters-The characters seem pretty much the same throughout but i like how sporadic all the characters are.

Presentation-The video is well put together and easy to follow.

]]> 2021-11-03 03:40:06 UTC https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1863530758 Group 5 feedback (saul) https://padlet.com/marymobley1/wgwm561l4r83eb74/wish/1863532006 Group 5:

Plot-The plot is well summarized and explained throughout the video. I also like all the little details in the story itself.

Characters-The characters do seem to change throughout the story and I like the way each character is played.

Presentation-As for the video itself i liked it because it seemed very fitting for the story and the video itself was well put together.

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