Period 4 RED: Dystopian Presentation Comments: Read the Directions!!!!! by Donna Camarota

Directions! READ ME!

dcamarota1_1 — 2020-11-23 00:29:38 UTC

Take a look at your peers Dystopian projects on the whole Classroom Sides

1. Make a comment about at least 1 of your peers projects and what stuck out to you about it. Include the name of the creator and title.

and make a comment here about:
- What projects stuck out to you
- What was interesting about their project?
- Pick out examples from their project to comment on.
-Write the student's name and project title first.
-Make sure your name is visible on top like you see my name on the top of this post.
3. Once you finish comment on at least 2 other peers post on this Padlet as well.
4. Press the little + sign in the bottom right hand corner to make a new box.

Sarah Flath-The Oppression

dcamarota1_1 — 2020-11-24 18:30:50 UTC

I like how she pointed out in today's world women are still objectified.

Ceneli Albelo- Dividing Races

flat7552 — 2020-11-24 18:43:33 UTC

I really like how Ceneli showed the importance of racism through separating each race into their own state. I think that was really cool.

Kayleigh Montgomery-Same Face

guzm7203 — 2020-11-24 18:52:01 UTC

I really like the theme and the poster. I think that this is a really unique idea.I also like how the weather can be controlled and how everyone looks the same. But I also think that it is a bit scary to see your face on someone else.

Sarah Flath- The oppression

kerp7648 — 2020-11-24 18:53:07 UTC

I really liked how sarah brought attention to real sexist things that continue to happen in today's society through her dystopia

Teresa Guzman - COVID-29

2020-11-24 18:54:47 UTC

I like how the poster is straight to the point. It is pretty simple and surprisingly startled at it's bluntness.

It shows the problem that wealthy people are sometimes being seen as more important than the rest of the people.

-Kayleigh Montgomery
(it kept putting me as anonymous so ill just say I did it)

Teresa Guzman-Covid-29

ebne7392 — 2020-11-24 18:57:10 UTC

I like how she showed an extended version of the current virus that is controlling our daily day lives today.

Sarah Flath- The Oppression

albe7474 — 2020-11-24 18:57:48 UTC

I really like how Sarah showed that women are being mistreated, and unequal.

Ceneli Albelo-Dividing Races

ebne7392 — 2020-11-24 18:59:26 UTC

I like how she/you embraced the importance of what could happen if we do not resolve the current racism issue that we are dealing with today.

Melanie Kerper- The Flask

flat7552 — 2020-11-24 19:09:40 UTC

I loved Melanie's idea and concept! You killed it girl <3

Quolauni Logan-Hughes / The World we've become

kerp7648 — 2020-11-24 19:09:52 UTC

I liked the diversity she used in hers and how she made seem people blind to what was going on in front of them

Carleigh Morris-The Cooties

flat7552 — 2020-11-24 19:11:52 UTC

I loved Carleigh's artifact. It is so crazy and definitely is shocking to read lol :) love you Carleigh <3 Great job!!

Nathan Ebner- The DS

morr7236 — 2020-11-24 19:11:54 UTC

I liked the imagination you used. I liked how you said the houses were blocked on top of each other and were called batteries. Good job!!

Same Face- Kayleigh Montgomery

loga7234 — 2020-11-30 16:40:25 UTC

I loved how in the artifact it tells you right then and there what you are getting yourself into.

Same Face- Kayleigh Montgomery

barr7476 — 2020-12-10 20:42:41 UTC

I love how in her presentation she throughly explained everything. Convinced me as if it was real life and everyone had the same face.