cst 7 traffic by Melisa McDermott

alp

2022-01-25 10:46:50 UTC

Traffic jams is are one of the biggest problems in the world. Some people are still trying to find a solution to this problem but traffic jam may be a lots of things' reason. Traffic jam affects many things such as drivers cities and envoirnment.
Firstly drivers are affected by traffic jams. For example this problem makes people angry and nervous. Being nervous and angry are bad for peoples' social and job life. The reason people fight on the roads is because of traffic jams. Because waiting is a waste of time for people and if they get angry they can start to argue. (I would suggest separating "time" and "being angry" because they are two different supporting ideas)
The second thing that is affected by traffic jams is cities. Traffic jams make that city a bad ~~choise~~ place to live in and crowded cities are not the best choice for people. The noise problem is also an effect of traffic jam. Istanbul is a good example for this. Istanbul may be a good city to live in, in terms of its history ~~historical~~ or some other reasons but Istanbul has a the biggest traffic jam problem in Turkey. Drivers have to wait for hours to get somewhere.
Another thing that is affected by traffic jam is the envoirnment. Why? Because cars are the biggest cause of the air pollution. So polluted air is a cause of lung problems. Another thing is that there are many buildings in big cities. So there are not enough tree or green areas. It means O2 oxygen is also a problem for that city.
To sum up, traffic jam affects everything but I think drivers ~~mostly~~ are affected the most by traffic jams. So maybe these things can show us that why we should live small town.

yasmin

2022-01-25 10:50:02 UTC

Traffic jam is a problem which lots of people have to deal with all over the world. This can happen due to lots of things such as ~~being~~ having too many cars on the streets. Also this affects our lifes lives. Drivers, cities and the environment can be affected by traffic jams.

First of all, traffic jam affects the people who drive a car. For instance, people usually feel stressful in ~~the~~ traffic. They think that they cannot come their jobs or schools on time. Also not just being stressful, they can get angry due to traffic. They have to sit and wait the other cars and this might be unbearable for some people.

Secondly, cities can be badly affected because of traffic ~~badly~~. To exemplify, traffic is a reason of noise pollution. Many people do not like noisy places so they do not want to live in there. This can lead to the decrease~~ing~~ of cities population. Besides, traffic jam can be an obstacle for emergency services to reach people. There are lots of cars when traffic is formed i~~s happened~~ so they can't move.

Finally, the environment also can be affected ~~from~~ by traffic jam. For example, There are too many cars in the traffic and this means they release too much carbondioxide into the air. It pollutes the air. Also, it brings about lung cancer. People who are in the traffic or living in a big city, breathe this air and their health can be affected in a bad way.

In conclusion, there are too many effects of traffic jam. In my opinion, people can reduce traffic by using public transport. We have to reduce traffic because if we don't do that it always affect us badly.

lidya

2022-01-25 10:58:16 UTC

We encounter many problems in traffic nowadays.Most of these problems are due to traffic jams.The effects of this traffic jams can be on the drivers, city and environment.

First, people start to get angry over time because they wait too long in traffic.This ~~nerve~~ emotion can evolve in traffic and turn into a fight because tiredness and stress during the day begin to show themselves.This traffic jams also ~~effect~~ are a waste of time.Employees are late for their work, students may be late for school, those who have an appointment may be late for the meeting, which affects people badly.

Another effect is staying on the road for long hours due to traffic jams.Many cars emit toxic gases ~~to the~~ outside,also many cars make a lot of noise when they come together. The longer you wait on the road, the more they spread.By the way cars with emergency, such as firefighters and ambulances, may be late to their destination. (Use linkers to separate your supporting ideas)

Finally,Exhaust gases affect the environment negatively in many ways. (what releases? What is the subject of this sentence?)Releases carbon dioxide gas into the environment, which can poison people's lungs in the long run.Not only humans, all living things in the environment are affected by it.The increase in this gas causes the greenhouse effect.For this reason, global warming begins over time, and the living conditions of plants and animals are endangered.

To sum up.traffic jam has an effect on all living things on earth.I think to reduce this, we should either use more public transport or make electric cars easier to access.The roads built should also be arranged according to the crowdedness of the cities.