Engagement Activity Week 3 by Usic https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6 Made with mirth en-us 2021-04-14 09:53:48 UTC 2021-04-19 02:43:39 UTC hello@padlet.com Kjay kjiang6 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425084543 1. Add an introduction at the beginning of the article
2. Linking topics at the end of paragraphs
3. Improve the persuasiveness of ideas and add content]]> 2021-04-16 12:33:01 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425084543 Yiran Meng ymeng28 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425197898 1. More specialized wording
2. remember to divide into new paragraphs
3. clearer structure]]> 2021-04-16 13:02:48 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425197898 Tao zheng 25707141 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425282331 1. Correct grammatical expression
2. Give more detail in some example.
3. Interpreting more in some paragraph.]]> 2021-04-16 13:21:29 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425282331 Carrie 2582577 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425292710 Problems :
1. no clear discussion of key concepts;
2. Some ideas are not very relevant to the question;
3. the conclusion section is too brief.
Ways to improve:
1. explain the concepts while stating the definitions;
2. Ideas should be selected that are closely related to the question;
3. Conclusion needs to be expanded.
]]> 2021-04-16 13:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425292710 Wenzhuo Li https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425309268 Citations should be in the correct format.
Note the length of paragraphs and start a separate paragraph for new topics.
Do not abbreviate proper nouns that appear for the first time.
Improve grammatical errors.]]> 2021-04-16 13:27:09 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425309268 Bo Yu byu121 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425510682 1. Enrich my English expression.
2. Make a clear structure of what I have learned.
3. Don't focus on one point and try to broaden my view.]]> 2021-04-16 14:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425510682 Yitong Guo https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425537859 Thematic statements are more specific.
 Improve spelling and grammar.
 More logical]]> 2021-04-16 14:13:39 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1425537859 Jiachun Chen jchen1581 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1428106659 1. The analysis of the problem is not comprehensive and the angle of consideration is less
2. The understanding of some definitions is vague, so it is impossible to distinguish two similar definitions
3. The words are not academic enough and the way of expression is limited.]]> 2021-04-17 11:53:04 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1428106659 Jiaxing Tian 2560865 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1428238895 1. Pay more attention to using academic words rather than everyday words 
2. Accurate sentences (more passive voice)
3. Well-organised structure of essay (understand components of each paragraph)
]]> 2021-04-17 13:55:25 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1428238895 Joey yzhou179 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1428764015 Somehow getting off topic

Okay to come up with Title and sub-title, but hard to brainstorm a paragraph structure.

Need twice check for grammar

Terrible time control

in many cases failed to expand sentences longer

]]> 2021-04-17 20:42:48 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1428764015 Nyxia ybai28 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1429724117 1. some topic need more explanation
2. I need to consider the correct meaning of eassy question, and how let my topic related to it.
3. focus my eassy structure.]]> 2021-04-18 11:29:21 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1429724117 Jiayi Cai jcai27 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1430356400 Improve the introduction so that it contains all the information
Consider that all examples are closely related to the Keyword discussed in the article
It should be more comprehensive when explaining opinions]]> 2021-04-18 18:15:06 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1430356400 NaBai nbai11 https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1430661734 1. use PEE format
2. Be sure to pay attention! Write evidence along with your ideas
3. focus on the conclusion and have an emphasis on the main idea]]> 2021-04-18 21:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1430661734 Molia https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1431183331 1.Need to refer to correct reference guide.
2.Improve the PEE, especially express strong claim.
3.more explicit for the argument.]]> 2021-04-19 02:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/wf19sfwktqkzn0y6/wish/1431183331