Partner Paragraph by Christopher Jelderks

Partner Paragraph by Christopher Jelderks https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo 1. Write as a complete sentence 2. Give Evidence 3. Give Reasoning for your evidence en-us 2017-11-01 17:32:47 UTC 2017-11-14 21:56:09 UTC hello@padlet.com Juliana J. https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202635588 There are multiple details that show that the spirit has been affected by Mr. Scrooge's words. In between lines 28 through 30 the passage explains that during Scrooge's last plead the spirit had a change in heart and the spirit's (kind) hand had faltered and the spirit had collapsed and shrunk into a bedpost. I believe that Scrooge's words had convinced the spirit because, after the stressful acquaintance between the spirit and Mr. Scrooge the spirit had left Mr. Scrooge alone and gave him one last chance.]]> 2017-11-01 17:45:35 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202635588 Mr. JellyD cjelderks https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202636461 1. Write as a complete sentence
2. Give Evidence
3. Give Reasoning for your evidence]]> 2017-11-01 17:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202636461 Alex Millwood https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202636516 Scrooge's repeated questions help shape the spirit's decision of whether or not to let Scrooge turn his life around. At the ending of the paragraph the spirit withers away into the form of a bedpost that Scrooge is grasping. The spirit's hand falters in a way that makes me think that he is thinking whether or not to let Scrooge turn his life around or not.From this I can infer, after this occurrence Scrooge changed his ways and turned his life around.]]> 2017-11-01 17:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202636516 Amelia Griffin https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202637646 The details that show the spirit is affected by the words scrooge is saying are that "the kind hand faltered". This happens right after Scrooge says "...'assure me that I yet may change these shadows you have shown me, by an altered life.'" I think these words touched the spirit's heart and that why his hand faltered. In my opinion these words could affect anybody with even the smallest bit of love and compassion in the heart.]]> 2017-11-01 17:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202637646 Eve Reel https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202638241 I can show that in the text the spirit was affected by what Scrooge said because in the text it states "Holding up his hands in one last prayer to have his fate reversed, he saw alteration in the phantom's hood and dress. it shrunk, collapsed and dwindles into the bedpost." This shows the spirit was affected by his words because the spirit let him live and gave him a chance to make everything right and keep Christmas happy.]]> 2017-11-01 17:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202638241 Brock Drury https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202638356 Since the spirit does not speak in the scene I believe that scrooge's words are actually worth something to the spirit because it is listening to him. The spirit just stands there and does nothing but point, however after a few minutes the hand gets kinder and starts to listen to him. I know this because on page CR35 it states "For the first time the kind hand faltered". And plus the ghost let him go so there is no way he just changed his mind so scrooge must have made him. For these reasons I know that scrooge's words affected the spirit.]]> 2017-11-01 17:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202638356 Evan Miranda https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202638376 I can infer that the spirit was affected by what Scrooge said for many reasons. For one, at the beginning of the story, the spirit kept bugging Scrooge to change his ways, but at the end of the story the spirit shriveled down into a bedpost. He also kept giving hints to Scrooge that he still had a chance. I know now that Scrooge's wish has been fulfilled since he was teleported back to his room.]]> 2017-11-01 17:50:51 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202638376 Tucker Neville https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202639032 The details that shows that the ghost was affected by what Scrooge said was that his hand faltered. I know this because in line 23 it states,"For the first time the kind hand faltered." This proves that the hand was affected because the spirit's hand was immovable in line 10 because it said," Still the ghost pointed downward to the grave..." but when Scrooge said that he was a changed man the ghost faltered and then became a bedpost.]]> 2017-11-01 17:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202639032 Ella https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202640480 The spirit is affected by what Scrooge said because the Scrooge is repented for what he's done and the spirit is giving him a second chance. It says in line 23 , ¨For the first time the kind hand faltered." It said the kind hand, proving that the spirit was affected in a positive way. At the end of the passage the spirit altered, shrunk, collapsed, and dwindled into Scrooge's bedpost. I can infer that the spirit was affected by what Scrooge says,because if he was not affected by what Scrooge said, Scrooge would not be safe and back in bed.]]> 2017-11-01 17:54:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/202640480 Jozey https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204480392 There are multiple details that prove/show that the spirit is affected by what Scrooge says. The spirit shows his thoughts throughout the story and opinions of Scrooge’s questions. The first piece of evidence is on line 11, when the spirit says. "Men's courses will foreshadow certain ends, to which if persevered in, they must lead." To me this is one of the most important saying the ghost says because, the spirit is talking about if Scrooge doesn't persevere to change and become a better person his life will forever continue to be miserable, until he does. Unless he changes his way and becomes a better man. Another piece in the story that shows the phantom is affected by what scrooge has to say is when Scrooge says, "I will honor Christmas in my heart, and try to keep it all the year". Scrooge gets on his knees begging desperately how he can "Sponge away the writing on the stone". You can tell the spirit was affected by what Scrooge said because, as Scrooge was gripping to his hands. Scrooge woke up holding the bedpost as the "spirits" hand and gets his wish. Even though the story didn’t say that Scrooge really got his wish I believe that Scrooge woke up getting his wish because, the spirit saw how desperately Scrooge was asking and how he was determined to change his ways.

]]> 2017-11-07 17:31:53 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204480392 luct https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204481338 There are many details that show that the spirit was affected by what Scrooge says. After Scrooge said many things to support him having a second chance. On line 23 it said "For the first time the kind hand faltered." Which I'm guessing that means that the ghost was feeling a change of heart toward Scrooge. Also it shows that the spirit was affected by what he said when he shrunk and disappeared after what he had said.

]]> 2017-11-07 17:33:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204481338 Sarah Wiltrout I know that Scrooge’s words affected the Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come for many reasons.One way I know that the ghost was affected by what Scrooge said is because when Scrooge held up his hands to pray only one more time, he tried to reverse his feight. Immediately the fantom shrunk and his dress fell. Holding on to the fantoms dress, he woke up gripping a bed pole. In this way the I know that his his fate is reversed because he woke up not harmed. https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204481700

]]> 2017-11-07 17:33:58 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204481700 Ha https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204482263 Details in the story show the spirit is affected by what Scrooge says. The text says"For the first time the kind hand faltered." Which shows that the spirit is affected by what Scrooge is saying. The text also says " The spirit was immovable as ever." Which also shows that the spirit is affected by what Scrooge is saying. For these reasons I know that the spirit was affected by what Scrooge said.

]]> 2017-11-07 17:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204482263 Aniko. https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204482479 There are several that details show that the spirit is affected by what Scrooge says. One detail is, the text states on line 29, ",he saw become an alteration in the phantom's hood and dress. It shrunk, collapsed, and dwindled down into a bedpost.",by this I can tell that the spirit has sent Scrooge home in one piece and safely on his bed, to live another day. Another detail on line 24 is that, Scrooge said,"I will honor Christmas in my heart, and try to keep it all year. I will live in the Past, the Present, and the Future.",by this I can tell or see why the spirit had gone, he believes Scrooge will be a better man. The spirit probably thought Scrooge had learned his lesson if he will beg on his knees, and say, he will be a better man and “honor Christmas”, the spirit let him go and let him live his life. Scrooge has proven himself to all 3 spirits and gained their trust]]> 2017-11-07 17:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204482479 Juliana Jeffery https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204483859 Q: Which details show that the spirit is affected by what Scrooge says?

A: There are multiple details that show that the spirit has been affected by Mr. Scrooge's words. In between lines 23 through 30 the passage explains that during Scrooge's last plead for mercy the spirit had rethought about Mr. Scrooge’s fate and on line 23 the text says,” The kind hand faltered,” meaning that the spirit had a change in heart. And later the spirit had collapsed and shrunk into a bedpost that Mr. Scrooge was left holding in his arms. I believe that Scrooge's words had convinced the spirit because, after the stressful acquaintance between the spirit and Mr. Scrooge the spirit had left Mr. Scrooge alone.

]]> 2017-11-07 17:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204483859 Evan Miranda https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204486541 I can infer that the spirit was affected by what Scrooge said for many reasons. For one, at the beginning of the story, the spirit kept bugging Scrooge to change his ways, but at the end of the story the spirit shriveled down into a bedpost. He also kept giving hints to Scrooge that he still had a chance. I know now that Scrooge's wish has been fulfilled since he was teleported back to his room and he has a chance of fixing his mistake.

]]> 2017-11-07 17:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/204486541 Tucker and Ayden https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/206373666 The difference between reading a drama of "A Christmas Carol" and reading the book is that you get to see the actions of the characters. I know this because lines 34-36 shows how Scrooge begged to the ghost. This makes it easier to understand because it shows us the scene and what happened during it which makes it easier to understand.]]> 2017-11-13 17:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/206373666 mhm https://padlet.com/cjelderks/weupaswah6jo/wish/206986759 mmmmhhhhhhmmmmmmm

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