Doctoral Researcher (PGR) revisions - comments by Jennifer De Lillo https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98 To ensure that we are all happy to teach from the masters, and so researchers have a consistent experience across the year, please feedback your comments on the revisions by 28th September. Thanks! N.B. You will need to scroll across to see the full complement of workshops. en-us 2018-09-18 09:55:22 UTC 2018-10-02 15:24:55 UTC hello@padlet.com Not sure what has changed from the previous version. https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282953745 2018-09-18 14:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282953745 Happy with this though slides that reference the Scholarly Comms website might need to be changed once the new microsite is available. https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282954017 2018-09-18 14:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282954017 I'm due to do this and haven't done it for years and was a bit taken aback by how much content there is. There is a query over the Padlet exercise - could an account be created that uses similar logins to the team Mentimeter https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282954446 2018-09-18 14:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282954446 Like the flow. Has nicely linked the practical and theory. From my perspective, just a few tweaks: need to change link on slide 21 to general subject guide index - currently the London guides (just a hangover from where session was first run). Slide 36 - might want to add in a new Google dataset search (currently beta): https://toolbox.google.com/datasetsearch ??? https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282975106

]]> 2018-09-18 15:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282975106 This interesting and a lot of work has gone into it -thank you. I can see how you are trying to deepen the content, which I understand, but I confess that I would struggle to present this as it is 'off the peg', compared with the previous version, especially with all the different types of plagiarism referenced. Sorry for the long comment, which I don't mean to seem negative, but I thought it would help to be specific. Please could you look again at the slides 7, 8 and 9 to explain the colour coding and especially slide 9 where the notes do not seem to relate to the slide. Slide says 'word for word plagiarism' but the notes say 'not plagiarism'. I am confused by these slides - sorry if I am being dim! I would also be wary of using the word 'student' in slide 6, as doctoral researchers can flinch if they think that they are being seen as undergrads - perhaps change to 'these paragraphs'? https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282981942 Slide 15 - Notes don't match the text on the slide - would be great to have an example of this. Is this may be what the references on the slide relate to?
Slide 22 - Petty point but need opening quotation marks for the definition of schol comms
Slide 25 - Has the wording been checked with Naomi and Katie as IR Managers?  The act of submitting the e-thesis does not make the thesis open access; the default is to make it openly available but there can be an embargo, so they might have some wording to reflect this.    The wording as it is a bit dramatic and could worry the PGRs unnecessarily, especially if they view the slides without attending the session.
Slide 26:  petty point, but missing an 'it' in the title of the slide
Side 27:  accrediting the journal or another place of publication is not enough to cover you in plagiarism/copyright - journal usually wants to be the sole publisher of a work.  Might need to re-word slightly?
Slide 40 - Need rewording?  Don't think we offer training on Cite Them Right.
Slide 44 - Needs reformatting as copyright details look like the AL contact.]]> 2018-09-18 15:33:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/282981942 Agree with comments above. Latest thought is Research Support website will be out at the end of Sept. Thanks https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283006348 2018-09-18 16:08:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283006348 Looks fine to me. Thanks. https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283008377 2018-09-18 16:12:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283008377 Looks fine to me. Thanks. Just one petty point about Slide 43 - Not sure we officially call the data repository Loughborough's figshare (even though that is what it uses) - may be check this with Gareth so we are consistent? Thanks. https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283009921 2018-09-18 16:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283009921 Looks fine to me. Thanks. https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283010875 2018-09-18 16:16:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283010875 Looks good. Like the new slides and examples. j_de_lillo https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283362322 2018-09-19 11:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283362322 I really liked the new Boolean operator image. The proximity slide is much clearer now. Also, very useful to include search tips for Google Scholar. j_de_lillo https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283364902 2018-09-19 11:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283364902 Good spot on the London link! I've changed it now. j_de_lillo https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283367587 2018-09-19 11:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283367587 Have added bullet point on Google dataset search j_de_lillo https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283369106 2018-09-19 12:02:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283369106 Thank you for the feedback about Slide 43, yes you are right. I've updated this now. CG c_greasley https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283786786 2018-09-20 08:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283786786 I'm due to teach this session so I was pleased with the clean fresh visual appearance of the sides and selected new images. So glad you have used the Marx* example instead of Analyse. Due to the length of this session I think the number of slides is about right. Thanks CG c_greasley https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283787965 2018-09-20 08:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283787965 Something that strikes me straight away. The width of the presentation slides are wider than the format usually used and the L'Boro logo looks stretched. Thus, the slides may not display correctly. CG c_greasley https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283789941 2018-09-20 09:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283789941 Visually there is a lot of text, which is quite small, on the first few slides (3-5) and slide 21. Perhaps use larger text over more slides or edit. Also if the text could be made bigger on slide 30. Perhaps a few more images to break up the text on the slides mentioned above. CG c_greasley https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283791626 2018-09-20 09:09:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/283791626 Ditto the previous comment about needing to know what has changed. If there are wholesale changes then a note to this effect would be fine. Otherwise, it's helpful to have the changes highlighted and explained. s_d_reid https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/284433641 2018-09-21 15:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/284433641 Activity 1: The Mentimeter code is incorrect (I think it changes each time). I'm also not sure about the value of asking attendees to respond to two questions at once. Maybe better to split them or just ask one question? The code is also wrong for Activity 2. s_d_reid https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/284438489 2018-09-21 15:49:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/284438489 I hadn't realised the session was being increased to 2 hours. Is there a reason for this? s_d_reid https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/284448658 2018-09-21 16:11:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/284448658 I don't see anything about Turnitin and detecting plagiarism. I think this should at least be mentioned. Good that self-plagiarism has been given more emphasis. s_d_reid https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/284460731 2018-09-21 16:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/284460731 Very happy to present this. Really like the changes. Much clearer for students and easier for presenters to follow. Minor typos on slides 9, 11, 22, 35 and 39. s_d_reid https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/285570910 2018-09-25 15:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/285570910 The wording on slide 2 is a bit clumsy. Agree with previous comment about slides 3-5 and the size of the text. Could it be rewritten or just the salient points provided with more detail in the notes field? Slides 3 and 21 have variable font size. Not sure why slide 3 (What is a systematic review) from the previous presentation has been removed / replaced (though there may be a good reason for this). s_d_reid https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/285589748 2018-09-25 15:23:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/285589748 Agree with previous comment a s_d_reid https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/285589898 2018-09-25 15:23:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/285589898 Nicely merged. Will be happy to present this. The number of slides seems appropriate given the length of the session and the fact that it now covers both the theory and the practical. Not sure how the concepts / themes (as opposed to the keywords which lend themselves to this approach) will be tackled with the padlet activity. Will these be discussed and added in by the presenters before the attendees start adding their keywords? s_d_reid https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/285627004 2018-09-25 16:08:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/285627004 Re. padlet activity- yes, have to discuss the concepts and themes before asking them to go on and add keywords. Seemed to work ok in July session. JDL https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286463838 2018-09-27 12:33:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286463838 Here's the link: https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/4ll1np30nl8r jennmarshall https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286466861 2018-09-27 12:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286466861 Quite a few changes - a list would have been useful to work from. I agree with previous comments e.g. re. Turnitin, Cite them right, AL/Copyright blog etc. jennmarshall https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286950272 Not sure about black background creeping in, slides 7-10, 24. Also ordering of slides on reasons and consequences of plagiarism a bit mixed up.  After activity 3 on slide 17 nothing more until 27-. Should a mention be made of different referencing styles (around slide 32)? CRAAP diagram omitted - can we add it in. I find it useful (2017 master slide 42)
Also, do you explicitly cover numeric styles too? That was one of the comments made in feedback. I liked 2017 slides 37-40 but it seems like you go straight to secondary referencing. ]]> 2018-09-28 13:48:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286950272 This looks fine, I like the questions and examples a_j_ashmore https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286952767 2018-09-28 13:52:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286952767 Thanks I'll make the amendments (AA) a_j_ashmore https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286953588 2018-09-28 13:54:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286953588 Happy with changes. jennmarshall https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286960996 2018-09-28 14:06:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286960996 Happy with changes. May just need more slides earlier on for wording but like additional explanations. jennmarshall https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286962224 We may need to add a slide on Nvivo!]]> 2018-09-28 14:09:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286962224 Agree with earlier comments about slides 3-5 and I think it would be good to mention Nvivo but not sure it needs a slide on it's own a_j_ashmore https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286963758 2018-09-28 14:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286963758 I like the flow and happy to present and train on this. On slide 37 it says 'come along to a Mendeley session' . Should this point them to the material on Learn and say we are running DRop-ins if they have problems using it? a_j_ashmore https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286968769 2018-09-28 14:20:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286968769 Happy with the changes a_j_ashmore https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286974432 2018-09-28 14:30:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/286974432 I've not delivered this before and I think the flow needs to be reviewed as it jumps around . As this is for DRs I would definitely include numeric examples and include Latex as one of the Ref Mgt tools as we know this used in STEM. a_j_ashmore https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/287001143 2018-09-28 15:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/287001143 Good point. I will amend accordingly. JDL j_de_lillo https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288045403 2018-10-02 11:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288045403 Typo on slide 32 : 'payed' instead of 'paid' https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288049502 2018-10-02 11:44:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288049502 Examples are clear and realistic. i.e. likely to be faced by the DRs. They should generate some discussion. https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288181482 2018-10-02 15:09:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288181482 Seems a lot simpler than before (NR) https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288186456 2018-10-02 15:16:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288186456 Good comprehensive overview that feeds into other workshops. (NR) https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288192824 2018-10-02 15:24:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jennmarshall/wclfbtb6yx98/wish/288192824