Distinction - Showcase a proficient level of capability in their use of technical and interpretive skills and show a full and logical understanding of how to apply relevant skills in a

project scenario.

Merit - Showcase a secure level of capability in their use of technical and interpretive skills and show a secure understanding of how to apply relevant skills in a project scenario.

Pass - Showcase an appropriate level of capability in their use of technical and interpretive skills and show a clear understanding of how to apply relevant skills in a

project scenario.

This could be based upon the physical and vocal performance of the individual, or from the delivery of a theme/issue/topic.

This could be a brand new idea, or something you feel that has been overlooked/needs reviewing.

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Are we supposed to hear the ukulele over the music?

Love the vibe and the singing

I feel the yukilaylay is not needed

Be more loud

Like the original concept

Add more movements

- Maybe take it an octave higher?

- Projection.

Music a bit too loud

Nice idea

Could be louder

Looked under prepared.

For what it was, 4/10.

Funny.

Learn to play feloot.

Like the interactive element

Love the energy

Video editing was good

You look cute

Not the Keira knightly shade

Interactive.

Enthusiasm.

Make sure to fully keep the energy up if that is you character

Loved the confidence

- Over the top (good thing)

- Great memorisation

- Brilliant preparation

- Great use of different skills

A lot prepared

good energy

very enthusiastic.

also good interactivity with the audience.

Maybe edit the video voice to your own or something a little less ai to make it more realistic

One thing is looking up more instead of looking down at the ukelele

Maybe show more of the things in the box and have a little more funny with it

But really good though just don't break character

stay in character.

from just that it was very creepy possibly the vibe you wanted which is good.

Don't laugh

Good scream my ears hurt

Excited to see final result

Dont know a-lot about what you’re gonna add but maybe try and get close and personal with people

Ok aesthetic

Good quality photos

Would you want to explain what the piece is in the actual show or will you do something with tech to explain for you?

Fill the screen more with photos!

Maybe have them all ready in place so people can walk around

Maybe some printed out for on the stage (on tables, bluetacked to a fake wall, etc)

Make the photos neater on screen possibly

Throughout the performance there was many instances of breaking character.

Amazing scream, unexpected.

I am shaking in my boots rn

Scary

Make the writing abit bigger

Maybe but the film in landscape instead

Can’t really see what’s going on at some points

Thought there was gonna be a jump scare

Like how it was mysterious

So cooooollll !

Scaryy

- It can be seen as too dark at some points where we can’t see what’s going on to understand it.

- I can’t wait to see what you come up with.

Looked really good

Looks like a trailer to a bigger bit

Would look good projected like at a cinema

- Try to present it like it’s coming from your own knowledge.

- Connect to the audience

- Slow down when talking. It’s hard to capture what is being said.

Add a better background then white

Maybe videos

I like the use of pictures

Just double check spelling

A lot of information

Slow down reading pace

Good important topic to focus on

You were a little fast and maybe a little less reading off the screen and make the slides a little more funner and easier to read

More enfusianum

Learn your slides look more at the audience present it not read it

Stop swaying

I don’t think there is much to it

Are these confirmed facts.

Please keep the computer out of your face

Belive what your reading

Don’t admit to spelling things wrong

Present as if your interested and less like you don’t wanna be there

If it is something your passionate about be passionate.

I don’t think that your power point is effective as you are just reading.

I like the amount of information you provide

Yes spreading awareness

doesn't give an effect on the audience much,

take your time with your words.

Add colour

Use a pointer to see where you're reading (like at an office meeting)

Don't say what you "stole from the internet"

Be more serious, don't say "because I like them" "I spelt that wrong" etc

Maybe look at other bits like dogs who are tortured so they can be eaten

Good presentation, very informative

Exited to find out

Creepy

Stayed in character well

Make it look like your playing it adds dramatic effect

You look like a puppy that just messed up the house and tries to play innocent

Stayed in character

Are you acting as if your playing the piano at the start of the song?

Stayed in character

Possibly learn the piano if you can?

Maybe have a louder slam on the piano like putting a sound over it or smacking your hand behind the piano

creepy music, fit well,

Looks good, can't wait for the rest

Spoke to the audience

Learn it off by heart

Carry on if u make a mistake

More hand gestures

Move around abit

Good tone of voice

Good projection

If go wrong, try to stay focused and carry on, liked the monologue

Love the monologue

Original

Very touching

Look up more

Love the context

Don't break character of you mess up

I lovee the concept and is very relatable

Just try and learn the script and maybe have something going on while speaking

Good confidence

Maybe a little more emotion

What tech are you thinking about using? I feel like flood fading to spot and you get more emotional would be great

I love the scary approach of you just sitting there before “dying”??

And the editing

Creative

Stands out because it’s unique which I liked Excited, can’t wait for finished product

Can't wait to see it all

What was on the signs?

Maybe a little more of you in the video would be good

Maybe some form of dramatic flare like a sound effect after each topic the first time they're mentioned

I would like to see where you go with it.

made me sad

Cute animals

Shows real issues

You’ve come so far in ur life, I hope ur proud of yourself

Maybe be louder or turn the video down

Maybe ask for a head mic

Love the deep topic

Trigger warning because its a serious subject

very impactful on the audience, easily made eyes water.

The monologue over the top works well

Work on ending monologue same time with the end of the video possibly

It was so a personal thing to share and it was so brave

I love the editing and video

I loved the monologue

Shows real issues

Maybe you should have a voice over instead of you saying it unless you have something planned

I really felt connected to your story and what it meant for you.

Great projection, great story and over all great characteristics.

real hard hitting topic

I love the confidence from you

Love the glitching

I like the deeper meaning

Love the behind the scenes bits

Love the editing

So good

Maybe try to make it less repetitive somehow

Love the distorted audio

Maybe edit out you pressing play and pause

What was the shadow?

The ribbon around your neck gives off the red ribbon girl, was that what you were going for or coincidence

I loved the emotion at the end

Rly good editing

The editing was really good

Very serious topic discussions

Maybe add a song in the background quietly

Wish you had something to show us tho.

Intrigued to see how you make it into a presentation

I like the monologue that you’ve used

Good topic

Just be more confident

Try and be confident to at least perform a little bit

Sounds very good what you sung so far

Try to be Less nervous

Very descriptive

Very confident.

Amazing projection

It's so good I acc can't wait to fully hear it

Be more confident, you're a good singer

I love the lyrics, feels deep

Think about maybe a mic

Make it a concert? (Build a stage add a hole stage set up: mic, mic stand, lights)

Phenomenal voice

Amazing style of song

I felt slightly connected to what it meant as a person with Anxiety.

Good dance I love it

Be more confident in yourself, its good

I like the flexible skills

good dance style with song choice

Work on learning to stay in character whilst on stage

Keep focus

Who are you performing for? Yourself or the audience?

Try not to laugh

Improv if you forget

FLABBERGASTED

LOVE IT

I know its only a mock but learn the lines

YESS YOU WENT FULL OUTT !!!!!

Good story

I’m curious to see more

Good facial expressions

Body language

Could you add a green screen in the back with ai people in the chairs, that eventually disappear in the end to make that your not schizophrenic not know straight away for a twist

The acting was amazing, learn the lines fully

I like the anger

I like the crazed laugh

It's giving dna 😅

Think about tech? Maybe blue or red lights to help protray the emotions

Maybe items for the people to give something you're talking too

Confident

Write on something better so your not searching for it

Very vulnerable

Maybe do something while speaking the poem

Good poem i like it

Very good, no notes!

Only thing I would say is just try not to get lost in yourself when it comes to reading lines.

Brilliant projection

Brilliant story.

Don't get lost

Add some movement

Think about maybe having something to stand on and have people walking around (like a street performance)

Sometimes can't understand what you say

Be less awkward

Love the chill but chaotic vibes

Turn notifications off

Good idea coming together

What a ratty kid

Add more

Looks like a journey through your life

Think about camera (portrait, landscape)

Try not to leak your address

Good emotions

Try and look up

Maybe use the space more?

Think about tech, maybe make the stage a bedroom because to me it seemed like a crash out in your room (College have a bed if you'd like)

If you didn’t have anything to show couldn’t of you said where you might go if you had an idea

Would've liked to see something

Sounds like a really good idea and I can't wait

I hear the same character again after you said it’s different.

The tone of voice

Is there going to be a video or upfront acting

Try and stay focus throughout

Spoke about serious topics that the certain audience can relate too

Learn those lines

Like how you had a specific audience

Good voice projection

Learn it off by heart