Thesis Statement Redrafts by Kelsey Pichery (DHSZ) https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p en-us 2023-03-16 03:59:07 UTC 2025-10-27 04:44:21 UTC hello@padlet.com Zitong-Thesis statement zitongwang241 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777022 As women increasingly become more active and independent, this advertisement appeals to anxious men struggling to attract women, presenting the book advertised as a solution in order to convince them to make the purchase. ]]> 2023-03-16 04:00:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777022 Brian - Thesis Statement brianwong24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777612 Throughout the text, the author uses synthetic personalization, objectification of women, and the appeal of toxic masculinity to persuade desperate men into buying their book]]> 2023-03-16 04:01:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777612 albert thesis 24alberty https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777688  | The text markets a book produced in the 90s that teaches men in 90s how they can interact with women successfully.]]> 2023-03-16 04:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777688 zuya - thesis zuyashi24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777720 this 1996 American advertisement promotes the sale of various books and cassettes about attracting women to male readers via using a conversational and friendly tone

this text utilises the insecurity of American men in the feminist era of the 90's to advertise their products to them

through the use of toxic masculinity, references to women and false comradery.

]]> 2023-03-16 04:01:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777720 Konstantin - Thesis konstantinmoll24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777902 This persuasive text plays with the struggles of single men in order to sell a solution to them.]]> 2023-03-16 04:02:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777902 Help me nathanchang241 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777927 2023-03-16 04:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518777927 Nicole - Thesis statement https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518778409 The advertisement utilizes the perceived vulnerability of men to getting in and maintaining a romantic relationship set against the background of third wave feminism, achieving the effect of appealing to them.   ]]> 2023-03-16 04:02:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518778409 jonah's thesis jonahlee24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518778591 This advertisement capitalises on the insecurities of impressionable men as feminisim is slowly becoming more prominent]]> 2023-03-16 04:03:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518778591 Endora- Thesis Statement endorayuan241 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518778936 The text stereotypes and overgeneralizes the role of women inside a relationship in order to persuade men into becoming their customer, shaping stereotypes of women while generalizing them, condensing their personalities into one, through using persuasive techniques.]]> 2023-03-16 04:03:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518778936 jimin - thesis jiminbae24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518779431 the text conveys an advertisement to attract young, insecure men who wish to attract women's attention in the era of third-wave feminism.]]> 2023-03-16 04:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518779431 Thesis and roadmap https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518780155 The deceptionally logical text touches on the vulnerabilities of young men in the 90s where women's’ independency was increasingly becoming prevalent, engaging them to buy into their product through the use of logos to sound reliable, portraying women as product, and the change in the dynamics of relationship.

]]> 2023-03-16 04:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518780155 NICK nicholaswang241 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518780838 This advertisement attempts to persuade a male reader to purchase its copies during the 90s in New Jersey

 by enticing insecure young men with the possibility of attracting girls with ease in the era of third-wave feminism

, using synthetic personalization, objectification of women, and the appeal of toxic masculinity.  ]]> 2023-03-16 04:06:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518780838 jonahs roadmap jonahlee24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518781412 generalisation and objectification of women through the use of social constructs, enticing audience using toxic masculinity and appealing to the ethos and pathos of the reader]]> 2023-03-16 04:07:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518781412 Max-thesis https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518788862 This advertisement aims to attract single males to purchase its copies during the 90s in New Jersey by using persuasive language and the chances to attract girls with ease in era of third-wave feminism.]]> 2023-03-16 04:17:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518788862 Ethan 24ethanm4 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518788939 The advert persuades male readers in the 90s using a variety of literary devices.]]> 2023-03-16 04:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518788939 Henry henryzhengbj https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518791956 The advertisements attempts to promote its book to male readers during the era of third-wave feminism in New Jersey. 


By providing male readers with a false sense of confidence to ease their stress of communicating to females

Using a variety of devices such as objectification of women, persuasive tone establishment and toxic masculinity.]]> 2023-03-16 04:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2518791956 Zitong zitongwang241 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526636198
  • Main body paragraph 1 topic sentence: To begin, the text utilizes synthetic personalization, creating a false sense of comradery and expertise. 
  • Main body paragraph 2 topic sentence: Furthermore, in addition to creating a false sense of closeness, the advertisement makes over-generalization of women, presenting them as products to make picking up girls seem more feasible. 
  • Main body paragraph 3 topic sentence: Finally, the advertisement didn't just present women in a stereotypical way, but men as well, categorically presenting a kind of 'aggressive men' and trashing their approach, appealing to toxic masculinity as well as manipulating men's anxiety to present the opposite way of attracting women that it advertised as the best. 

    • ]]>     2023-03-22 05:57:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526636198     boop zuyashi24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526636853 Topic 1 sentence starter: Firstly, throughout this advertisement, elements of toxic masculinity are present, as it is utilised to target the insecurities of 90's men.

    Topic 2 sentence starter: Secondly, through the continuous use of references to women, the readers are constantly reminded of the purpose of the advert.

    Topic 3 sentence starter: Lastly, with the friendly tone of false comradery evident in this text, the writer attracts the attention of the reader in through words that appear genuine on the surface.]]>     2023-03-22 05:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526636853     jonah https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526637785
  • Through the use of social constructs which surround women, women are over-generalised and objectified to attract male readers.
  • The author also entices the target audience by appealing to their inner toxic masculinity which is perpetuated by a fragile sense of ego and pride seen throughout the text.
  • Similarly, persuasion techniques, such as the appealing to the pathos and ethos of the readers, are employed to convince the reader to purchase the advertised product

    • ]]>     2023-03-22 05:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526637785     Brian brianwong24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526639258 In the advertisement, the author creates a friendly, conversational, and comradery setting through the use of synthetic personalization in order to invite the reader into a sense of individuality and importance, as well as luring readers to buying their book. 
    In addition, the author objectifies women in order to attract the audience into believing the ease of attracting women the book can promise 
    Furthermore, the constant connotation of toxic masculinity by the author manipulates male readers into believing that their book can cause them to attract a lot of women. ]]>     2023-03-22 05:59:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526639258     Nicole- Topic sentences https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526641334 Firstly, the author utilizes a friendly tone associated with camaraderie in order to build up a relationship with the audience and persuade them to buy the products.  
     
    In addition, the advertisement also portrays the changing dynamics of male-female relationships in order to capitalize on the social expectations of men, furthering their insecurities and characterizing the products as the solution. 
     
    Subsequently, there are both elements of misogyny, misandry, and stereotypes embedded within the advertisement, working in favour to appeal to the insecurities of men.   
    ]]>     2023-03-22 06:02:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526641334     Endora- topic sentences endorayuan241 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526643672
  • Firstly, the advert overgeneralizes the role of women in order to create the illusion that the gender is identical amongst everyone. Thus, simplifying the process of pursuing a woman for the sake of men's desires. 
  • Similarly to the simplification of an entire gender, the advert overtly uses negative stereotypes of women by pigeon-holing them as aggressive characters. Such an approach gives a sense of fear to the audience, which is then resolved through the solution provided in the book; thus, successfully convincing them into becoming a customer. 
  • Furthermore, aside from the exploitation of women's roles within a relationship, the advertisement also exposes the weak sensibilities of men, manipulating their emotions as an appeal towards the effectiveness of the product. 

    • ]]>     2023-03-22 06:04:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526643672     SOMEONEE nathanchang241 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526650083 The advertising persuades its audience of insecure men who are failing to attract women in the third wave feminism era by using emotional appeals, rhetorical questions, and forceful claims. The wording creates empathy and understanding for this particular audience by spotlighting their concerns, which makes them more receptive to the message. The question "Are you tired of being rejected by women?" is an example of how the use of rhetorical questions stimulates introspection and participation. Bold claims that encourage action and follow-through, like "Discover how to attract women effortlessly," generate a sense of urgency and underline the advertisement's answer to the audience's concerns. It is crucial to think about the possible effects of the advertisement's messaging and to have a critical conversation regarding gender and society norms. Additionally, the use of images and ideas of having these models pose towards the camera and directly looking into the lens makes the connection between the reader and the model more direct and it makes it seem like  the reader is related towards this advertisement. The use of femininity also correlates with the models' age, by using younger and 'purer' women in the advertisements increases the male audience and it highlights the idea of persuasive femininity.]]> 2023-03-22 06:10:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526650083 please helpo me 24alberty https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526652493  | First, this advertisement objectifies women as one whole group that shares identical personalities of aggressiveness when dealing with relationships with men that creates an illusion to men that women is hard to establish a relationship. 
     | Furthermore, the portrayal of women in this advertisement reinforces harmful gender stereotypes and perpetuates the idea that women are solely defined by their interactions with men, rather than as individuals with unique personalities and experiences.
     | The use of such advertisements not only reinforces toxic masculinity by portraying men as dominant and aggressive, but it also perpetuates the idea that women should be treated as objects to be conquered and controlled.]]>     2023-03-22 06:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526652493     jimin - topic sentencesss jiminbae24 https://padlet.com/dulwichcollegebeijing1/wc7x7k5ndz2k818p/wish/2526675916 1. First of all, the advertisement uses sexist language to imply an unjustified sexual bias against women and perpetuate inequality between the two biological genders.

    2. Moreover, the advertisement portrays toxic masculinity to attract young men who feel insecure.

    3. Finally, the advertisement characterizes and objectifies women by using words that implement attractiveness biases.

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