Digital Citizenship - Communication- Non-Growth by Kelly Carter https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl Comments that do not produce a growth mindset when peer revising and editing. en-us 2016-09-22 18:20:52 UTC 2025-11-02 01:02:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png Read this hook, and then add your comment to the writer. carterk3 https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/127097308 Focus on how it engaged you as a reader, but write it in a way that would NEITHER benefit the author NOR produce growth.

  I walked into a haunted house one evening. I heard screaming, and I became scared. I wondered where my friends were. All of a sudden, Paul was right next to me, and he was crying really hard. 

]]> 2016-09-28 19:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/127097308 https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199592 This absolutely was garbage and this is the worst thing i've ever read you are a horrible writer you must give up NNNNNOOOOOWWWW]]> 2016-10-12 16:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199592 this is the wort lead in the world and has no good transitions.Plus it is TERRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199801 2016-10-12 16:51:54 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199801 https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199954 This was so boring I would not read the rest of this story! theres no sensory details and your transitions are really bad!]]> 2016-10-12 16:52:16 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199954 im not impresed  https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199966 2016-10-12 16:52:17 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199966 your bad this is horrible its s https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199995 2016-10-12 16:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130199995 THIS IS THE WORST STORY EVER.I'VE SEEN A FIVE YEAR OLD WRITE BETTER https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200011 2016-10-12 16:52:23 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200011 https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200012 worst!!!! Story!!!!! EVER!!!!!! IN!!! History!!!!!!!!! u r HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!
Trash!!!!!! TRash!!!! TRASH!!!!!
YOU SUCK AND YOU ARE TRASH!!!


]]> 2016-10-12 16:52:23 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200012 https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200057 this was very boring and isn't interesting]]> 2016-10-12 16:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200057 https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200232 2016-10-12 16:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200232 https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200299 This story was absolutely terrible I never want to read a story like this ever again]]> 2016-10-12 16:53:02 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200299 THIS IS THE WORST LEAD EVER!!!!! DONT EVER WRITE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200317 HELP ME
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jsgdscigjvbosadusljgfsd,xchfkdjgbvfdghdskdfdskfhdfkdcvbdsuvdivdvsjdvh]]> 2016-10-12 16:53:05 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200317 this is terrible and so boring ugggh im falling asleep reading it your bad https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200375


]]> 2016-10-12 16:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200375 s https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200394 I think his boring



]]> 2016-10-12 16:53:14 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200394 this is scary  https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200422
this is really scary



im scared


]]> 2016-10-12 16:53:18 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200422 https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200428 This is very, very boring.

]]> 2016-10-12 16:53:18 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200428 scary https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200450 2016-10-12 16:53:22 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200450 Your lead is not grabbing what so ever. https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200604

]]> 2016-10-12 16:53:42 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200604 this story I think can be better and that you need to add more detail. https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200632


]]> 2016-10-12 16:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200632 #  https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200637 2016-10-12 16:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200637 THIS IS HORRIBLE!!!!!!! https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200747 2016-10-12 16:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200747 This is relly bad https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200973 2016-10-12 16:54:39 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130200973 omg it sucks https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130201023 2016-10-12 16:54:49 UTC https://padlet.com/carterk3/wbwfmm8kk6tl/wish/130201023