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      <pubDate>2016-11-29 09:53:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Pitch Feedback - 1 (Felicia)</title>
         <author>ab92761</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/ab92761/wbbrrjau6v51/wish/140438849</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>What was good about the pitch / ideas presented?<br>- Good use of emaze &amp; padlet.<br><br>What would of made the pitch even better?<br>- Your idea is slightly vague and it just sounds like you're just throwing ideas. The ideas are all over the place.<br><br>Question 1:<br>- Wouldn't having the killer in full black in a party be a big giveaway?<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-29 09:57:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Pitch Feedback- 2 (Esther) </title>
         <author>ab92761</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/ab92761/wbbrrjau6v51/wish/140439057</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>What was good about the pitch? <br>1. The stereotypes <br>2. Everyone contributed <br>3. Very clear on influence <br><br><br>What would have made the pitch even better? <br>- More details about the shots<br><br><br>Question 1: What interesting shots will you take? <br>Question 2: Can I come to the party? </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-29 09:58:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Pitch Feedback - 3 (Kyle)</title>
         <author>ab92761</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/ab92761/wbbrrjau6v51/wish/140439253</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>What was good about the pitch/ideas presented:<br><br>- Flow from point to point without discussion <br>- Presentation is clear<br><br>What would have made the pitch even better?<br><br>- Elaborate on some points (representation)<br>- Pitch should be fast moving, not drawn out too long<br><br>Question 1:<br><br>- What music at party? What genre of music?</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-29 09:59:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Pitch Feedback - 4 (Iqra)</title>
         <author>ab92761</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/ab92761/wbbrrjau6v51/wish/140439473</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>What was good about the pitch?<br>1. Risk blog post was good<br>2. Locations were clear&nbsp;<br><br>What would have made the pitch even better?<br>1.  If we didn't look at blog post when reading <br><br>Question:<br>1. Was your title sequence horror or thriller?&nbsp;<br>.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-29 10:00:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Pitch Feedback - 5 (Iqra)</title>
         <author>ab92761</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/ab92761/wbbrrjau6v51/wish/140444170</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Strengths<br>1. Very clear on influence and reasons for choosing Thriller strong<br>2. Good knowledge on Core and Wider target audience and a clear difference between them<br>3. Audience blog post showed that clear research has taken place<br>4. Institutional Detail was clear <br>5. Sound design blog post was interesting <br><br>Weaknesses <br>1. Not clear who is acting (Party)<br>2. Have no sounds on blog post<br>3. Cinematic ideas are not clear<br>4. Photos of costumes and location <br>5. Have props from a horror conventions <br>6. Have 3 colours in title sequence 1 is usually used<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-29 10:28:57 UTC</pubDate>
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