B3 Persuasive Writing Examples by Julie Stauffer https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su Below are examples of each of the seven potential persuasive writing categories you could choose for your portfolio project. With your group, read your assigned examples and following the directions. This will also be available to you as a resource throughout this project. en-us 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC 2026-02-03 05:45:43 UTC hello@padlet.com Movie Speech: "We Are Marshall" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825152 Watch the following clip from the movie "We Are Marshall".  List THREE APPEALS that the coach uses in his speech, with text evidence. Why would he choose those specific appeals for his audience? ]]> 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825152 Awareness Campaign Video: "Know the Signs of Human Trafficking" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825154 *use headphones* Watch the video below. Comment TWO APPEALS that this video utilized in order to get their message across. Explain how each appeal is used, whether or not you thought they were effective, and why. ]]> 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825154 Song: "Farmer Refuted" from Hamilton jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825155 *use headphones* This song has two sides being presented. Give two rhetoric devices that each side uses, and explain who you think was more effective in their argument and why. ]]> 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825155 Open Letter: "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" by Martin Luther King Jr. jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825156 Reading the section from the letter given to you. As a whole class, decide what two appeals King uses most effectively in this passage. Then, each group must identify two additional rhetorical devices in the paragraph and LIST THEM BELOW this column. ]]> 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825156 Article: "The Argument Against Headphones" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825157 Read the following article and identify two things that made the author's argument strong, and two things that made it weak, citing text evidence to prove your point. ]]> 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825157 Short Story: "The Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin. jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825158 Read the following narrative and comment below what the focus statement behind this piece could be. Provide three pieces of text evidence that backs up your predicted focus statement. ]]> 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825158 SW: "Explaining My Depression to my Mother" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825159 *use headphones* Watch the following spoken word and comment below THREE PERSUASIVE STRATEGIES about this spoken word that were effective. Think beyond just the words that are being said. ]]> 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825159 Names of Group Members jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825160 Response to directions]]> 2018-05-01 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256825160 Brooklynn, Lexi, Stef https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256870617 Amplification ~
"if you were to watch them push and curse old negro women and young negro girls; if you were to see them slap and kick old negro men and young boys ; if you were to observe them," 
Appositive ~
"unarmed nonviolent Negroes"

]]> 2018-05-01 14:31:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256870617 Yeet https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256907053 2018-05-01 15:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256907053 Gabe, Hunter, Raegan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256929154 https://hcps365-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/gabrielbeach_student_hcps_org/EcILBQTYQQZGn2ZaOCXWg
TQBiMyfKsvyxyJXdg08uO_C-A?e=QFFlzB]]> 2018-05-01 16:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256929154 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256931645 appeal to emotion and appeal to trust . the appeal to emotion is used because how the human trafficking is being used to tell people who have those issues that says in the video should call the number provided in the video. it is appeal to trust because they want you to trust them with your'e issues and to move on from the struggle that you are going through as a human ]]> 2018-05-01 16:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/256931645 Gabe, Hunter, and Student gabrielbeach1 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257700083 https://hcps365-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/gabrielbeach_student_hcps_org/EcILBQTYQQZGn2ZaOCXWg
TQBiMyfKsvyxyJXdg08uO_C-A?e=QFFlzB]]> 2018-05-03 15:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257700083 Matt, Romi https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257702572 1.She says she doesn't want to confront the empty side of her bed. She is physically scared of being alone at night and during the day.
2. She bluntly states that she reliased that everyone will someday die. This blunt statement puts a worry into the audience.
3. Appeal to emotion is used when she crys and screams]]> 2018-05-03 15:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257702572 1. She raises her voice when she explains how she feels https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257702887 2. She uses hand gestures to explain her story
3.She used an appeal to emotion
Jada and Emma
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]]> 2018-05-03 15:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257702887 Amiya Hudgins, Michael Bellamy https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257705315 -amplification
-hyperbole
-simile]]> 2018-05-03 15:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257705315 Michael Bellamy & Amiya Hudgins https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257705763 appeal to emotion and appeal to 
its appeal to emotion because they're trying to get their point across by showing videos of distressed cities and communites. This sends a powerful message about the conditions some people may be involed in with human trafficking. By seeing these images people may feel angry and may want to make a change ]]> 2018-05-03 15:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257705763 Hank, Tyler, Bryan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257706149 Appeal to Emotion
"Final resting place for six people."
Appeal to authority
The man talking was a coach and he was encouraging his players to be better men
Appeal to trust
"we've seen it here, on the field."]]> 2018-05-03 15:22:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257706149 Matt and Romi https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257706790 the point of this story is to not let anyone tell you or control you. she even mentioned about something about being free, she doesn't want anyone to control her]]> 2018-05-03 15:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257706790 jeremiah, adam B3 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257708021 scared of being in the dark and she tells them her emotion and how she feels.]]> 2018-05-03 15:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257708021 Alli and Ashley https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257710155 don't let one person control you're  entire life . it proves this in the story by when she says  ''Free! Body and soul free!" she kept whispering''.  she felt  ''she carried herself unwittingly like a goddess of Victory'' when she found out her  her husband was still alive . when she found out that she lost her freedom '' When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease--of the joy that kills''. ]]> 2018-05-03 15:30:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257710155 Jada and Emma https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257711673 Appeal to emotion because this video made me feel something. It took a very big societal problem and explained it in such a horrible manner. Human trafficking is terrible thing and is very upsetting. Another appeal is appeal to trust because the person that is controlling the human trafficking is getting the kids to "trust" them and that they will do good things with them. ]]> 2018-05-03 15:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257711673 sam and dalton https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257711775 she raised her voice to emphasize key elements

she made hand gestures to make it more dramatic

she  was shaking to show the unpredictablness of her depression]]> 2018-05-03 15:33:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257711775 Hank, Bryan, Tyler https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257712593 Strong: 
"According to that report, headphone users who listen to music at high volumes for more than an hour a day risk permanent hearing loss after five years."
"The number of teenagers with hearing loss — from slight to severe — has jumped 33 percent since 1994."
weak:
 "The history of headphones has always been one of unexpected uses"
"It’s not incidental that Baldwin imagined headphones first as a way to block out crowd noise and hear sermons." ]]> 2018-05-03 15:34:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257712593 Tyler, Bryan, Hank https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257712731 Hamilton uses hyperbole when he says "My dog speaks more eloquently" which is an exaggeration. 

 Anaphora: when he constantly says "They have not your interests at heart." ]]> 2018-05-03 15:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257712731 Amiya, Michael https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257713008 -]]> 2018-05-03 15:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257713008 adam and jay https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257713163 appeal to emotion by fear and scared and she is scared of her heart problem and she does not want to die]]> 2018-05-03 15:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257713163 Raegan, Gabe, Hunter https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257714689 Mulligan: Hyperbole- "Tear this dude apart"
Liotes- I'd rather be divisive than indecisive
Hamilton: Allusion- "My dog speaks more eloquently than thee!"
Amplification- For the revolution!
 (For shame!)
[Company:]
 For the revolution!
Hamilton was more effective because he got his point across using the rhetorical devices.]]> 2018-05-03 15:38:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257714689 Matt, Romi https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257715096 Video will not load]]> 2018-05-03 15:39:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257715096 Dom and Clifford https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257737893  Alliteration= Sound of screams
 Hyperbole= My dog speaks more eloquently
Anaphora= Who scream revolution

]]> 2018-05-03 16:24:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257737893 Jada and Emma https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257737916 A good focus statement would be 
"Don't be blind to reality" three examples would be: 
"break to her as gently as possible the news of her husband's death."
"Go away. I am not making myself ill." 
"She was young"]]> 2018-05-03 16:24:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257737916 michael bellamy & amiya hudgins https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257739086 appeal to emotion, they use pictures of falling down houses and poor communities to show the living conditions that some human trafficking victims may come in contact with. Some people may feel  ]]> 2018-05-03 16:26:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257739086 Dom and Cliffordd https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257739925 Appeal to trust= You have shown it, you have shown the coaching staff.

Appeal to emotion= There is a plane crash that took their lives so severe that their bodies weren't able to be identifiable, They were buried here together.


]]> 2018-05-03 16:28:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257739925 Dom and Clifford https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257741086 Strong= Refers to past events includes a lot of info. 
Weak= Bringing up history of headphones rather than why headphones are bad.]]> 2018-05-03 16:30:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257741086 jeremiah and adam https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257741687 to appeal to emotion of fear of human traffic and scared of what they do.]]> 2018-05-03 16:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257741687 Alli and Ashley https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257742484 1) she raised her voice to show how she felt of her depression 

2)  she uses appeal to emotion to get the peoples attention and how she feels 
3) she ]]> 2018-05-03 16:34:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257742484 Raegan, Gabe, Hunter https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257742884 Strong]]> 2018-05-03 16:35:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257742884 Alli and Ashley https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257749005 3) she uses her arms when she speaks and she screams and cries ]]> 2018-05-03 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/257749005 amiya and michael https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/258271933 the story is about self control. in the story she is communicating that you are the only one who can control your life and should control your life. if anyone else. 3 good examples are.. "free! body and soul free!" she kept whispering. " go away. i'm nothing making myself ill" and "She was beginning to recognize this thing that was approaching to possess her, and she was striving to beat it back with her will--as powerless as her two white slender hands would have been."]]> 2018-05-06 06:23:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/wa99ed83z1su/wish/258271933