Feedback for "TikTok" Topic by Jessalyn Richter https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q Below, you'll see feedback from your module responses. Add a "thumbs up" to feedback you agree with or you think is particularly important. en-us 2024-05-16 13:29:40 UTC 2024-05-16 23:41:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4f1.png Is TikTok the only reason you're missing out on sleep, or are there other factors in your day causing this? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996036178 2024-05-16 13:33:22 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996036178 What is the actual problem you want to address? Is it lack of sleep, or is it lack of productivity? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996036511 2024-05-16 13:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996036511 The topic might be too broad. Can you reorient what you're trying to say so the problem is more defined? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996037050 2024-05-16 13:33:58 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996037050 If TikTok screen time is the identified problem, what specific methods or solutions are you planning to use to reduce it and reach your goal? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996037300 2024-05-16 13:34:10 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996037300 Consider expanding the topic to reducing screen time on your phone entirely, rather than just TikTok, to provide more information and examples for your audience. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996037575 2024-05-16 13:34:23 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996037575 Are you genuinely motivated to fix this issue? Why? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996038262 2024-05-16 13:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996038262 Set a specific, realistic goal for how much you want to reduce your screen time daily. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996038562 2024-05-16 13:35:04 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996038562 Elaborate on the benefits you hope to gain from reducing screen time, such as being more productive, aware, and well-rested. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996038748 2024-05-16 13:35:13 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996038748 Clarify if you're looking to reduce screen time only before bed or throughout the day, and if other screen uses beyond TikTok are also an issue. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996039105 2024-05-16 13:35:26 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996039105 Provide more details on how much time you currently spend on TikTok and other apps daily. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996039275 2024-05-16 13:35:35 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996039275 Consider the broader effects of high screen time beyond just tiredness and lack of productivity. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996039517 2024-05-16 13:35:45 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996039517 What are you actually going to do to reduce the screentime? What interventions are you going to try? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996041161 2024-05-16 13:36:57 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996041161 This is probably a common topic. How can you add your own "spin" to it? Or give some special insight? Second, This paper as a whole could end up rather bland. It's pretty well known that everyone should limit their screen time and that doing so will free up time to be more productive or sleep more. Unless you can find some interesting angle or method I fear this could become a drag to work on and uninteresting to read. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996043025 2024-05-16 13:38:16 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996043025 What do you mean by "reduce"? Some explanation could be added to how you plan to do this and how you will measure it. Also elaborating on what you're hoping to achieve by reducing screen time would help a reader better understand your topic. Will you only be cutting out TikTok or other forms of social media as well? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996043799 2024-05-16 13:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996043799 Since you mentioned sleeping I suggest a technique I use for my day to day life. Always be off your phone and have it muted an hour or two before bed. Take the time to mellow out, relax by on the patio, have a conversation, stretch, write about what your going to do tomorrow. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996044597 2024-05-16 13:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996044597 What is your goal after the experiment? To spend less time on screens or fix your feeling of tiredness and lack of productivity? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996045277 2024-05-16 13:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996045277 They do mention reducing screen time, but don't mention the methods they are planning on using to help them reach this goal. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996047544 2024-05-16 13:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996047544 How do you know TikTok is really the problem with your sleep? richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996047926 2024-05-16 13:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996047926 These are a selection of the comments you provided in your "feedback" module for today. richterj9 https://padlet.com/GVSUWRT150/w9efnh231c0uoc7q/wish/2996051983 What themes do you see in these comments? Which comments do you agree with? 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