Share a Line You Loved by Julia Lowe _ Staff - HeritageHS

"a nation that isn't broken, but simply unfinished"

2021-01-29 15:55:28 UTC

Marley Welch

Amanda used very good pace throughout the whole speech as she didn't go too fast, nor too slow

2021-01-29 15:57:13 UTC

Marley Welch

Amanda used honesty throughout her speech by being real with the audience of where our country stands as Joe Biden is being inagurated. She says that we have a lot of work to do, and it is impossible to be perfect, but we should have a purpose within our nation. This shows her honesty with the audience but she doesn't address the reality of our nation too harshly either.

2021-01-29 15:58:29 UTC

Marley Welch

She spoke with power

2021-01-29 15:58:52 UTC

"we learn that quiet isn't always peace"

sfklingensmith — 2021-01-29 15:59:31 UTC

Sophia Klingensmith

Ben Taylor

2021-01-29 15:59:36 UTC

"Quiet isn't always peace"

"A nation that isn't broken, but simply unfinished".

2021-01-29 15:59:51 UTC

She used great amounts of authenticity and you could tell she meant every word she said

sfklingensmith — 2021-01-29 16:00:09 UTC

Sophia Klingensmith

Her rhythmic patter and prosody

sfklingensmith — 2021-01-29 16:00:28 UTC

Sophia Klingensmith

She is speaking with a lot of power, she is confident in what she is saying and is strong with it. Her tone is very bold.

2021-01-29 16:00:52 UTC

Smith Burt

She had confidence in what she was talking about.

2021-01-29 16:00:59 UTC

She regulated her volume raising it in the right moments and going quiet as well

sfklingensmith — 2021-01-29 16:00:59 UTC

Sophia Klingensmith

She was honest about the nation and her feelings about it.

2021-01-29 16:01:27 UTC

She projected her voice, and spoke her words very clearly. She also spoke with a lot of confidence and addressed her words with good facial expressions and hand motions to keep the audience engaged.

2021-01-29 16:01:54 UTC

Marley Welch

She had good pace and spoke louder and powerfully.

2021-01-29 16:02:32 UTC

Ben Taylor

2021-01-29 16:02:58 UTC

She exaggerated certain words to make us know they're important

"Democrasy can be periodicly delayed but never defeated."

2021-01-29 16:03:06 UTC

jake pereira

She kept a very good pace and spoke very powerfully

2021-01-29 16:03:53 UTC

jake pereira

"we have learned that quiet isn't always peace."

2021-01-29 16:04:38 UTC

Smith Burt

"For there is always light,if only we're brave enough to see it If only we're brave enough to be it" I liked this line because it appliend not only to our nation but life itself.

2021-01-29 16:04:39 UTC

Kaliey Ybarra

She didn't stutter. She said everything with good pace, not too fast or slow. She raised her voice when needed.

2021-01-29 16:05:11 UTC

Smith Burt

She had a good consistent pace that emphasized the necessary words and phrases.

2021-01-29 16:05:13 UTC

Kailey Ybarra

Everything Amanda was saying was real. She was genuine about what all she said. She was also extremely honest, she stated how she felt the country and what is happening right now. She is honest with the audience and telling us what we need to do to improve our country/nation.

2021-01-29 16:05:56 UTC

Smith Burt

She was honest about the country and very powerful but authentic at the same time.

2021-01-29 16:06:00 UTC

jake pereira

The way she spoke and her facial expressions showed that she was being honest and completely meant every.

2021-01-29 16:06:30 UTC

Kailey Ybarra

Authenticity

2021-01-29 16:06:35 UTC

She spoke passionately and proudly about the topic.

Jourden Sawyer

AR

2021-01-29 16:06:43 UTC

"If only we're brave enough to be it"

GW

2021-01-29 16:07:24 UTC

"It's because being American is more than a pride we inherit,

it's the past we step into

and how we repair it"

KW

2021-01-29 16:08:05 UTC

For there is always light,

if only we're brave enough to see it

If only we're brave enough to be it

GW

2021-01-29 16:08:06 UTC

She was able to use prosody to make her speech sound even more engaging than it already was.

"It's because being American is more than a pride we inherit."

2021-01-29 16:08:09 UTC

KW

2021-01-29 16:08:40 UTC

She spoke confidently and with rhythm

I think the slow consistent pace could be applied to my speech, as well as the facial expressions and hand gestures. she also projected her voice without making it to loud. This made her words even more powerful without it feeling like she was forcing it on you.

2021-01-29 16:09:21 UTC

Kailey Ybarra

KW

2021-01-29 16:09:22 UTC

She used love in her speech by wishing well for America's future

She had a very good pace not going too fast or too slow.

2021-01-29 16:09:24 UTC

GW

2021-01-29 16:09:40 UTC

The Integrity in her voice made her speech seem more powerful.

KW

2021-01-29 16:09:57 UTC

Prosody and projecting her voice

Pacing myself and enunciating.

2021-01-29 16:10:30 UTC

GW

2021-01-29 16:10:34 UTC

The projection in her voice is a good technique to keep your listeners engaged.

She spoke with power and autenticity

2021-01-29 16:10:44 UTC

jake pereira

"Even as we grieved, we grew."

2021-01-29 16:11:31 UTC

Ty England

She used a calm and laid back tone but also raised the volume of her voice at the right times.

2021-01-29 16:12:14 UTC

Ty England

"Quiet isn't always Peace"

2021-01-29 16:12:15 UTC

Nate Derwin

"It's because being American is more than a pride we inherit."

gmwilliams3 — 2021-01-29 16:12:37 UTC

She Was very confident with herself and was very well known when she should be a little more silent and a little more invigorated.

2021-01-29 16:13:02 UTC

Nate Derwin

She was speaking with confidence and power which made what she was saying stand out more,

2021-01-29 16:13:04 UTC

She felt very strongly about the things she was saying and you could tell that she really meant it

2021-01-29 16:13:07 UTC

Ty England

Pace and Tone

2021-01-29 16:14:02 UTC

Ty England

She was Authentic and was very non-biased in her speech.

2021-01-29 16:14:24 UTC

Nate Derwin

Amanda used very good control over her voice and raised her volume and changed her tone when needed

gmwilliams3 — 2021-01-29 16:14:29 UTC

She spoke with a pace and did not stutter or pause at all.

jfsmith4 — 2021-01-29 16:14:40 UTC

Her volume was good and she spoke with confidence

jfsmith4 — 2021-01-29 16:15:06 UTC

She had really good pace and had a very fluctuating sound and tone.

2021-01-29 16:15:33 UTC

Nate Derwin

Her confidence.

jfsmith4 — 2021-01-29 16:15:33 UTC

"...yes we are far from polished far from pristine but that doesn't mean we are striving to form a union that is perfect..."

2021-01-29 16:17:36 UTC

Diego Sirit

I noticed that her pace varied, she would go fast on parts that were inspiring and general, then slow down to focus on important parts and things she wanted the audience to focus on.

2021-01-29 16:18:24 UTC

Diego Sirit

She showed love throughout her speech. Not only in expressing her hardships that she faced in the past, but also the hardships that the people as a whole faced as a country. She made sure that the audience knew that they weren't perfect, but we were trying.

2021-01-29 16:19:35 UTC

Diego Sirit

Amanda was very non-biased and gave her opinion on the topic and she showed what she has done to get where she is in her life

gmwilliams3 — 2021-01-29 16:20:22 UTC

She used a variation of pace and used perfectly silent moments to allow the audience to process what she just said. I think I could definitely use the moment of silence while talking for my speech.

2021-01-29 16:21:21 UTC

Diego Sirit

She spoke with confidence and prosody

gmwilliams3 — 2021-01-29 16:21:41 UTC

She was very honest about what she was talking about and said what she said with different tones in her voice.

jfsmith4 — 2021-01-29 16:22:34 UTC

Ben Taylor

2021-01-29 16:26:43 UTC

Her rhythm fit in with the words of the speech making the timing just about perfect

Ben Taylor

2021-01-29 16:27:57 UTC

She was honest at all times talking about our nation

Jourden Sawyer

2021-01-29 16:37:49 UTC

She spoke with confidence which contributed to her having a steady pace.

Jourden Sawyer

2021-01-29 16:39:08 UTC

She believed every single thing that she spoke about, despite the large audience.

cccargle — 2021-01-29 17:09:49 UTC

“Being American is more than a pride we inherit, it’s the past we step into and how we repair it”

cccargle — 2021-01-29 17:11:34 UTC

She kept a good pace and slowed down when she wanted the listeners to really hear what she was saying. She rarely looked down so she was engaged with the audience more.

cccargle — 2021-01-29 17:16:20 UTC

She was rhyming some of her lines and enunciated her words

cccargle — 2021-01-29 17:18:50 UTC

She was showing love and honesty when she talked about America.

"we learn that quiet isnt always peace"

ktbennett — 2021-01-30 03:27:01 UTC

she kept a calm steady tone which made it easier to listen an understand her words.

ktbennett — 2021-01-30 03:27:53 UTC

She was speaking like she meant it.

ktbennett — 2021-01-30 03:30:09 UTC

She spoke with rhythm and kept a good tone

ktbennett — 2021-01-30 03:30:31 UTC

"Quiet isn't always peace"

2021-01-31 04:10:32 UTC

Hannah B

she spoke with a good and steady pace which made it nice to listen to.

2021-01-31 04:10:59 UTC

She was very authentic and honest while speaking.

2021-01-31 04:12:22 UTC

I liked how she spoke with confidence and power.

2021-01-31 04:13:37 UTC

JM

2021-01-31 18:46:28 UTC

"We've learned that quiet isn't peace,"

JM

2021-01-31 18:47:00 UTC

She spoke with a rhythm like she was reading a poem or a song.

JM

2021-01-31 18:48:48 UTC

She was very authentic. She spoke about her personal view of the Inauguration and how she felt speaking there.

JM

2021-01-31 18:50:18 UTC

I could definitely speak in a rhythmic way like her.