2. 내 summary가 main idea를 잘 잡고 있는지 판단해줘.

3. 너의 판단을 토대로 내 summary를 revise해줘.

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1. 평가 (Topic Sentence, Supporting Details, Concluding Sentence)

• Topic Sentence: Your topic sentence is clear but could be more precise. “Contrary to general belief, multitasking has a lot of challenges” is a good start, but it could better introduce the key idea that research challenges the assumed benefits of multitasking.

• Supporting Details: Your summary touches on two key points—reduced productivity in the workplace and negative effects on learning—but does not mention the dangers of multitasking while driving, which is another significant point in the original passage.

• Concluding Sentence: “It is time to focus to the one, not several.” This is a strong concluding idea but could be phrased more naturally. Also, it would be better if it tied back more clearly to the evidence presented in the summary.

2. Main Idea

Your summary captures the general idea that multitasking has more downsides than benefits. However, it does not fully reflect the original passage’s argument that multitasking was once believed to be beneficial but is now being challenged by research.

3. Revised Summary

Research increasingly challenges the belief that multitasking improves efficiency. Studies show that multitasking reduces workplace productivity, impairs problem-solving, and negatively affects learning by making information more fragmented and harder to recall. Additionally, multitasking while driving has been found to be so dangerous that some countries have made it illegal. Given these findings, it may be more effective to focus on one task at a time rather than attempting to do several simultaneously.