8-1 Mindmap C -- Constructive Criticism by Megan Wilkinson

mwilkinson2 — 2016-09-15 15:19:07 UTC

I liked how you described each subject elaborately. I think you could group your ideas a bit better though.

jtaylor61 — 2016-09-15 16:28:17 UTC

Lots of information on each topic!

jejoiner — 2016-09-15 16:40:38 UTC

JuliannJones — 2016-09-15 16:43:30 UTC

You map is very organized and easy to read. I like how well you explained you ideas.

ndawson1 — 2016-09-15 16:44:05 UTC

I like the solid colors but I think you need to explain more of the info.

cruiz8 — 2016-09-15 16:44:31 UTC

Need more information for some of the branches

You need to explain more about the french writer

cray3 — 2016-09-15 16:45:14 UTC

You only wrote his name, not why you included him.

explaining more on improvement on education would have been better, this is still a great mind map

dnewcomb1 — 2016-09-15 16:48:26 UTC

jvalladolid — 2016-09-15 16:49:13 UTC

I like how you had good info on each topic
keep it

dnoland2 — 2016-09-15 16:50:08 UTC

asingh9 — 2016-09-15 16:50:52 UTC

You explained it perfectly but on some you need to write a little more information and explain in better.

dnoland2 — 2016-09-15 16:55:44 UTC

Very well organized but their could've been more detail. <3

Love it

ndawson1 — 2016-09-15 16:55:53 UTC

Good color and detail!

mcampbell23 — 2016-09-15 16:58:11 UTC

dmartinez5 — 2016-09-15 19:03:14 UTC

i like how u used a lot of color it helped everything stand out

Your organization is really good but you should have included a bit more on education for the different races

dserna — 2016-09-15 19:38:50 UTC

stsosie — 2016-09-15 21:20:19 UTC

I dont like it because of how spread out it is, but its k.

don't like how its spreadout

pehawkins — 2016-09-15 21:37:43 UTC

Under your "Reforming Asylums and Prisons" box you didn't say anything about the changes that occurred. The prisoners were neglected however you didn't express how it changed, what caused it to change, or who were involved in its reform. Incomplete section.

rbamburg — 2016-09-15 23:44:47 UTC

nisidro — 2016-09-16 01:57:52 UTC

too much spread out and more details needed

I really like how it's spread out and it is easy to read also good info.

amartinez46 — 2016-09-16 02:53:53 UTC

wrowan2 — 2016-09-16 03:28:31 UTC

Oh my god such a work of art just beautiful!!!

rvilla1 — 2016-09-16 03:58:43 UTC

You have a lot of good info on some and little info on others.

sdelfin — 2016-09-16 04:29:58 UTC

You had good information but you could have tied them together a little better.

You just need a little more info on some of the topics

skandler — 2016-09-16 06:08:25 UTC

jruiz6 — 2016-09-16 06:30:05 UTC

map was spread to far out and there was a lot of missing information under the second great awakening.