Elevator Ending 7/8 by Brent Flynn https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq Write an ending to "The Elevator" en-us 2016-10-31 18:42:59 UTC 2025-10-01 23:25:49 UTC hello@padlet.com The best ending to "The Elevator" sc395685 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134338915 She pulled out a knife and started stabbing all the elevator buttons and cutting all the wires while saying, “We’re both gonna die in this elevator!!!”. I quickly try to grab my phone out of my pocket, but she grabs it and slams it on the floor. She grabs my arm and slowly starts slicing me open. A pool of blood starts forming around us. I start to get woozy. She stops and says “GOODNIGHT, YOUNG ONE,” while shanking both of us alternating which of us is getting stabbed. Then, it’s silent.]]> 2016-10-31 19:27:17 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134338915                           DEATH COMES TO LIFE!!!                         The fat lady felt she finally had her chance to kill that little boy. She took out a hatchet and tried to hit the boy. The boy moved out the way with the little space he had. She misses the hit and slips. Her body falls down on the boy. A loud scream is heard a second later. He felt his body was numb. He was crying in pain due to the weight being so heavy. He screamed for help, and suddenly the fat lady moved. She stood up and hit the boy repeatedly. The blood was turned from a puddle to a pool. He tried to escape as the doors opened, but she pulled him in.This was the last time anyone heard of him. zm335690 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134338969  ]]> 2016-10-31 19:27:32 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134338969 Traumatizing year for him mm312502 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134339867 Martin's father got off the elevator without hearing him. He reached over to press floor nine, being scared and lonely he waited for the moment when the fat lady would show up. It stopped. The fat lady had appeared. This time she didn't even stare at him but she had a creepy vibe. Martin got off when he reached his floor and didn't really think much of it. The next day is when he actually started thinking about that moment and the thought could not escape his mind. A day passed and he didn’t see her, even more days passed by, weeks by weeks and she was never seen. Had he just gone crazy then? Who knows, it was probably just his imagination. Martin tried telling people but no one believed him, October 31st came, she was waiting for him. She had appeared once more. This time he was with his dad but he couldn’t see her, only he could. Most days after this were spent inside, never to go out. The fat lady was never seen anywhere else by him.

]]> 2016-10-31 19:31:30 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134339867 Martin was terrified. Not only did she know his name, but she laughed in the creepiest way possible. The lady just stood there staring at him with a smile plastered on her face. Martin wanted to get out of the elevator as fast as possible, but that wouldn’t happen. They were barely on the 12th floor and suddenly the elevator stopped. Martin couldn’t believe that this was happening to him. The lights flicked twice then stopped for three seconds and flicked again. Martin was too scared he forgot about the fat lady, so he looked back to make sure she was there. She wasn’t. He felt his heart stop and looked around for a way out. Although it was hard to do with his crutches, he paced around the small space and looked for anything that could help. He found nothing and the elevator started moving again. It wasn’t going up and Martin soon knew that he was falling. The last thing he heard before everything went black, was the fat lady's voice saying, “Goodbye Martin.” gr315608 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134340792 2016-10-31 19:35:58 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134340792 Death to Martin ma324127 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134340886   As soon as the doors shut the fat lady turned with a big smile towards
Martin. All of a sudden the elevator came to a stop with a huge jerk sending Martin flying right into the fat lady. With  the blink of an eye martin was swallowed by the fat lady.  
]]> 2016-10-31 19:36:28 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134340886 The End for Martin ss321322 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134341473 The fat lady grabbed my arm and slammed me into the elevator wall. She then started to laugh evilly as she tried to choke me and everything started to spin. I tried to scream, but no words came out and that's when I blacked out.]]> 2016-10-31 19:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134341473 As martin screamed at the top of his lungs and banging on the elevator wall the fat lady put her hand around his mouth but somehow he managed to push the unstop button and pushed floor number 11 the fat lady didn't even notice when the door open to the elevator there was a police officer standing right outside he we screamed out stop she turned around and started eating him martin ran as fast as he could with his cast on he was ran straight to a corner and hide when the fat lady was done with the officer she said out loud ‘’ martin come out come out wherever you are as the turned the corner martin hit her with one of his crutches the fat lady screamed as she was bleeding from her nose the fat lady lifted up martin and she cried he all the way to the elevator and just throw him in there when she gets in the reaches for the top of the elevator when martin looked where she was reaching he noticed a button it said sf when she pushed it the went down all the way down past the lobby martin said where are you taking me the fat lady started laughing as soon as the doors to the elevator he saw torturing tools he picked up the first knife and ran back to the elevator he pushed floor 17 the fat lady was running full speed causing earth quakes very where and ran right into the doors of the elevator when  got to his floor it was pitch black outside he father was by the door waiting for hem when we walked in he told his father every thing   ic323056 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134341941 by nathaniel

]]> 2016-10-31 19:41:48 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134341941 The 2nd best ending on here and ya'll should read it even though it's long! cm416284 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134342546 Martin began panicking.  The fat lady glowered at him, her beady eyes like a snake looking upon it’s prey.  There was no way for Martin to get out of the small cubicle elevator.
“How.. how… how do you know my name?”,Martin heard himself stutter and mumble. He didn't expect the lady to reply. He just hoped he could stall her enough to have a few more seconds of life left before the fat lady would hurt him.
The fat lady’s breath was deep before she answered his question  “I’m the manager of this complex.”,she said briskly.  “I tend to learn everyone’s names whenever I come to pick up rent.”
“What?”,Martin asked confused.  
Was this lady really not out to hurt him?  Was she really the owner of the building? If so, why did she press stop? These questions filled his brain, her answer giving not ease to his nervousness.
The fat lady seemed to catch on to his panic.  “I haven’t talked to you before because I haven’t learned your name.  Just yesterday, I talked with your dad. Not much a conversationalist, is he?”  She laughed. “How’d you break your leg?”
“Oh, I fell down the stairs.”, Martin muttered.
“Sorry to hear that.”
The elevator was silent. 
“Why isn’t this darn thing moving?”, The fat lady muttered.
“You pressed the stop button…”,Martin trailed off.
“Oh! I did?”, she examined the elevator buttons. “My bad.” The fat lady pressed the start-button and the elevator began its steady climb up.
The ride was silent, until the cubicle reached the 17th floor.  The fat lady moved out of Martin’s way as he hurried out of the elevator, and held the door open so it wouldn’t shut on him.
“Martin!”, she called as he began his way toward his apartment.
“Yes?”, he replied, turning around.
“Happy Halloween.”, she said the doors closing.
“Yeah, happy Halloween.”, he said to the empty hallway.
Not everything is as scary as it seems......

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Happy Halloween, everyone! Hope ya'll get lots of free CANDY!   ;)

]]> 2016-10-31 19:44:44 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134342546 By John Dinh jd312594 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134343141 As she had laughed in the unmoving
elevator, my face had fell into despair as my heart was racing. There must be a reason why she is after me, this must be some sort of joke! But no she was here, she was really here. He reached out for the buttons on the elevator, but her mushy body kept squeezing my hand. He looked up, only to see her face, she grinned. He wanted to know, he wanted to know why she was here when he’s alone! As he had try to say something, my mouth quivered in fear as his thought of what to say, but before I could say anything, she said “ I am after you Martin.” All the words he could spit was “Why.” She laughed at him. As the elevator had started moving again he had been scared covering himself trying to make her think he is not there. As it had finally went to his floor he tried to rush past her, but lost his crutches. Now on the floor tears running down his eyes, the elevator slowly began to close as her eyes were staring straight at him. “Martin, what are you  doing on the floor and where are your crutches!” his dad yelling with fury. “I’m sorry” Martin had said in a quivering manner as tears were running down his eyes. “Please don’t leave me in there alone anymore” Martin had said looking down at the ground to avoid his father’s gaze. “Fine, let's get you up” his dad said in a disapproving manner.]]> 2016-10-31 19:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134343141 Demonized jf311294 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134344578 Martin was pale.He couldn’t believe it. Martin was panicking and trying to figure out how could he get help .The fat lady was staring at him with her small red eyes.The elevator light was blinking as if at any moment the lights would burn out.Now Martin was defenseless. “Wait a minute,i can just call my dad”, Marvin whispered to himself. He pulled out his phone out of his back pocket.He tried turning on his phone, 3% of battery left. It would be no use calling his dad now.His dad wouldn’t do anything.The woman laughed. She started yelling curses at Martin. All of a sudden martin felt a drop of something warm on his shoulder.He reached for his shoulder and on his fingers was blood. He looked up but there was no blood on the ceiling. Martin jumped,the elevator was moving with jerked motions. Then the woman started laughing with dark red blood coming out of her mouth and her eyes bulging. Then as he knew it would, the lights went out.Last thing Martin heard was “I’ll see you soon”. Then the firefighters opened the elevator doors.Martin was shaking. He was taken directly to the hospital and was assigned to a mental asylum. No one ever believed his story be cause his father always denied his story.

]]> 2016-10-31 19:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134344578 Happy Halloween!!!!!!!!!    :)     :)     :) mm323533 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134344864 The lights lights flickered and turned off when the fat lady turned off the lights.  Martin’s heart stopped as soon as the lights turned off. She pressed the go button but the lights didn’t come on. Martin started screaming when he felt her inching toward him slowly pressing him against the wall. His breathing slowed as the numbers went up. He was slowly loosing breath. Then all of a sudden the lights came on, and doors opened. He sighed in relief thinking that it was on her stopped, but they both gasped when they saw no opening and just a rusty black wall. They stood in silence waiting for the elevator to start back up again, but nothing moved. Martin stood in shock and pail white when the dead silence grew. The fat lady stood tomato red not saying anything. Then all of a sudden at the 13th floor they fell. They kept on going faster, and FASTER UNTIL! They came to a halt at the 9th floor. The door opened to Martin’s father standing in the doorway of the elevator with a gift and hand. He stepped into the elevator and forced himself inside. Making it impossible for any of them to move. He pressed 17 hoping to go up quickly as he possibly can, but no instead they fell down, DOWN, DOWN! Until they reached the first floor. When the doors opened there stood a dark lobby with 13 clowns at the elevator entrance. Everyone gasped and yelled the clown “HAPPY HALLOWEEN!” ]]> 2016-10-31 19:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134344864 eg311090 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134344878 The elevator lights flickered as it came to a stop, Martin closed his eyes and pressed his body against the wall paralyzed with fear. The fat lady kept repeating Martins name over and over and over again then she took out a knife. Martin opened his eyes and saw the knife coming at him. The knife reached Martin and pressed against his skin and noticed it was a plastic toy knife. The fat lady laughed and said it was a joke and that his dad made her do that, she then pushed the elevator button to start again. Martin was blushing and was furious that his dad pranked him, as he calmed down the elevator stopped and the lights turned off. ¨Ha ha very funny¨ Martin said and the lady started screaming in fear, at this point Martin wasn't sure if it was a prank or not. The elevator made weird sounds that hurt Martins ears, suddenly something in the elevator snapped and the elevator started falling. Martin scared and confused closed his eyes then a sharp pain went through his body and was unconscious. Martin woke to the sound of beeping and and his dad whispering sorry to Martin then a long beep sounded and Martin was back into the dark abyss.]]> 2016-10-31 19:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134344878 By Sean Cruz sc320537 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134345198 The fat lady then opens a hidden panel pressing a button that takes them  to the basement. As they go down Martin freaks out and thinks “How does she know my name, why is she laughing, why to the basement and will she eat me. When they reach the basement the doors open all he can see is his father, a table with tools, and blood. 
“Dad I thought you were up stairs” Martin said. 
The fat lady then speaks “oh that was a clone, so I could trick you”.
Then she kills the dad with a knife found on her table. Martin went into shock giving the fat lady time to get a machete and finish the job.   
]]> 2016-10-31 20:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134345198 THE BEST ENDING IN THE UNIVERSE ad321196 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134345432 The elevator came to an immediate stop, jerking Martin and the big ball of blubber up in the air. Martin was scared for his life. He was stuck in a small elevator with a lady the size of a bus, and he couldn’t do a think. Martin was full of anger and confusion. 
He asked the quadruple chinned lady, “What’d you do that for?” 
“Because,” she responded, “I wanted to have a chance to talk with you since you always run off.” 
Martin replied, “Then if you want to talk, explain why you always follow me on the elevator and never get off?” 
“Because I like the feeling of you being with me in the elevator,” she answered. “I might get back to the building at 2’o clock, but I will wait for 2 hours until you get here so I can ride the elevator.” 
Martin was confused, “Why do you wait for me?” 
“Because I know you have a fear of elevators, and I wanted another fear buddy,” the fat lady said.
“A what?” Martin asked.
“A fear buddy. I absolutely hate elevators and everything about them.”
So for the next hour or so, the two talked and became very good friends, sharing stories about different elevator experiences they have had. Once the elevator crew got there and let them out, they went out and got some lunch with each other.
]]> 2016-10-31 20:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134345432 I think she farted jc325564 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134346016 ‘’Hello, Martin,’’she said,and laughed, and pushed the stop button.I wonder in my head how does she know my name. I just smile and say hello back. Like always the elevator went slow. And then my worse  nightmare came true the elevator stoped. The a.c went off her belly was all over my face I heard her tummy rumbled and then she farted it stank like rotten eggs. But I really think she sarted. The smell didn’t go away. She just smile and laughed. She didn’t even said sorry to me.The elevator started again I finally got the chance to get out. Once I got out my shirt smelled like rotten eggs. That day I try to take a lot of showers but the smell got stuck in my cast. My dad got and said ‘’Martin do you know this fat lady she was looking for you in the elevator?’’. I told him I think she is stalking me. He said ‘’stop overreacting martin She is actually really pretty’’. The nexted day we figured out no one was living in that building with that description.


]]> 2016-10-31 20:07:07 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134346016 The End ii342798 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134346119 Out of nowhere she had put on this creepy grin at looked like it should have been in a asilum. She reached into her pocket. Afraid of what could be in there I closed my eyes and hoped for the best.She said in a kind voice “so you don’t like candy.” I looked at her as if she was Johnny.Then I realized my mistake.All those days I thought she was a creeper she was actually studying me to pinpoint the perfect candy for me.Turns out she knew I loved Milky Ways. But Just as grabbed it the lights flickerd on and off and when the lights turned back on she was gone and it alot colder to.It didn’t bother me thougth, but what did bother me is that there was a spider on the back and it tried to climb on Martin but he quickly thru it down,and the whole way down Martin was screaming and crying as it crawled all around the elevator.

]]> 2016-10-31 20:07:55 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134346119 The End ii342798 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134347035 Out of nowhere she had put on this creepy grin at looked like it should have been in a asilum. She reached into her pocket. Afraid of what could be in there I closed my eyes and hoped for the best.She said in a kind voice “so you don’t like candy.” I looked at her as if she was Johnny.Then I realized my mistake.All those days I thought she was a creeper she was actually studying me to pinpoint the perfect candy for me.Turns out she knew I loved Milky Ways. But Just as grabbed it the lights flickerd on and off and when the lights turned back on she was gone and it alot colder to.It didn’t bother Martin thougth, but what did bother Martin is that there was a spider on the back and it tried to climb on Martin but he quickly thru it down,and the whole way down Martin was screaming and crying as it crawled all around the elevator.

]]> 2016-10-31 20:13:57 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134347035 By: Claudia Guerrero cg311326 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134347192 Martin couldn’t believe his ears the lady called him by his name,and the elevator had stopped.The lights began to flicker and suddenly it went dark.Martin could feel and hear the lady breathing on his shoulder.His crutches were taken from him and he fell the the ground.The last words Martin heard was “Your father's next.”]]> 2016-10-31 20:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134347192 mm312276 https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134347503 The elevator is filled with silence and curiosity. “What does she want with me and how does she know my name”, Martin wondered. As she drags her hand towards him he shrieks, misunderstanding the big lady. Her hand goes past him, pressing on a secret button that unveiled a passageway. She took him by the ear and dragged Martin through the passageway. As Martin was yelling, he saw another place that looked like the same elevator they were in. The big lady tied Martin up and put him on a chair. Afterwards, her face started to melt revealing something more hideous. It was the same lady, but she was flexible. It was like her mask was repelling her abilities away from her. “Then what does she want with me”, Martin wondered. “I want your physical structure,” said the fat lady. “ I already have the ability to be flexible but it is hard for me now because of my neck blocking my way to look down”. “ I will take your physical structure like I took that little, obnoxious girl’s flexibility”. “Ewwwwww, I don’t want to be chubby like you!” Martin said aloud. With her beady eyes, she gave him the death stare causing him to turn into stone! Then she suddenly took his physical structure making herself look more creepy. After she left, he transformed to a big, chubby boy. On the bright side, his leg got better due to all of his fat. He was left wondering about the not-so-fat lady.]]> 2016-10-31 20:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/brflynn/w8b6y89k5hq/wish/134347503