https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj All the love! en-us 2022-04-11 03:42:12 UTC 2022-11-07 02:33:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f604.png https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372259161 1) Combining complex sentences and use of cohesive devices
2) Use of grammar, applying topic sentences and concluding sentence
3) Maintaining the use of coherence and cohesion in a paragraph. I noticed my writing 2 was quite weak based on that
4) Still average and alot more to improve on. I would say, about 70%?]]> 2022-11-07 02:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372259161 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372259325 1. Unable to organise my thoughts and the sentences I wrote have no cohesion. Always love to write fragmented sentences. This module helped me to identify the above and provides a clearer example on how to ensure cohesion in sentences. 

2. Wrote more sentences with cohesion and improved the coherent in the paragraph. 

3. Grammars in the paragraph still needs to be improved. 

4. No. Might still need vetting from other people to provide reassurance. ]]> 2022-11-07 02:23:33 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372259325 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372259706 1) grammatical errors. I have learnt how to correct them.
2) my paragraph will now have a topic sentence in it.
3) I need to structure my paragraph more cohesively.
4)yes. better than what I started off in week 1.]]> 2022-11-07 02:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372259706 chengkanglee4 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372259974 1. I tended to be vague whenever I describe anything within my writing, I have learned to focus in on the topics and what I wanted to write during my time in this module.
2. I would say my most improved aspect is my ability to paraphrase and shortened my initial sentences.
3. Probably, I would need to increase my lexicon of synonyms and vocabulary to better articulate my thoughts and reasonings.
4. Don't think so, I have never been proud of what I've wrote, even now I'm still second-guessing everything I have wrote. Despite that, I will always submit my works so I can learn from the mistakes of my past self]]> 2022-11-07 02:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372259974 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372260756 1.Weakness is the content structure, and how to make sentence cohesion. This module help me a lot on both of the aspects.

2.The improved aspect is how to write individually each paragraph and make every of them logical 


3. Improve on obtaining more lexical resources and more conjunctions.

4. Maybe, but indeed more confident compare to the first time answer QET]]> 2022-11-07 02:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372260756 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372260930 1. sentence structure, consultation helps me identify the errors
2. flow of organisation of ideas 
3. do more readings to widen the knowledge 
4. yes, better than the start of the semester ]]> 2022-11-07 02:24:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372260930 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372261136 1.There were many grammar errors in my writing and the expression was not very accurate. But after this module, the quality of my writing improved and the are less errors in my writing.
2.The logic and structure of writing have been improved a lot.
3.I think I still need to focus on grammar and the use of linking words, and try to make less errors. 
4.Sometimes I am confident but sometimes not. Because there are still many problems about my writing.]]> 2022-11-07 02:25:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372261136 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372261779 1. weakness: vocabulary and how to arrange sentences in a correct way. From the module I learnt some of the basic structures of a paragraph and could write in a logical way.
2. the cohesion of the paragraph.
3. How to improve the diversity of sentence structure.
4. I guess so? At least better than before this module]]> 2022-11-07 02:25:28 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372261779 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372262474 1. My weakness is putting my ideas together, as I do not have the flow. This mod taught me to use transition markers to link sentences.

2. Topic sentence, grammar and flow of writing. 

3. How to better write long essays.

4. Yes. Through the writing tasks, I have received comments ensuring I am doing it right.]]> 2022-11-07 02:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372262474 https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372262713 1. Plenty of Grammatical Error, Unable to write a logical paragraph. No logic and is examples are vague.
This module allows me to have a clearer mindset in proper grammar to use(although still not confident), and the flow of the sentence structure. 
2. The sentence structure and confident in writing an essay.
3. How to write a full essay and the use vocab.
4. Yes. At least I have a clearer mindset in the flow of an essay(paragraph). And I would like to write more *if I got the time haha*]]> 2022-11-07 02:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahsom1603/w5abtwaydrnybvpj/wish/2372262713