Unfortunately, The Eggs by Gerald Kay

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geraldkay — 2023-10-31 03:23:12 UTC

"Unfortunately, the eggs......."
Puns/silliness
Similes: Like/as
Fronted Adverbials
Showing NOt Telling
Sumin the Dragon and up to 6 Magic Eggs
Direct and Indirect Speech
Personal pronouns: I, We, they (1st person)
Editing for spelling, punctuation and grammar

Beginning

geraldkay — 2023-10-31 03:28:00 UTC

While you were away, we began to get hungry. Naturally, we looked in the fridge, and saw two eggs. This was not enough for us, as everyone knows that the minimum egg requirement for a meal is two eggs. Unfortunately, the eggs also fell from my shaking grasp as I pulled them out of the fridge, and fell to the floor like, well, eggs, bursting on impact. After cleaning up the mess, we decided to ......

1. Noemi Schöningh

2023-11-01 03:15:30 UTC

Mum was away to a conference, dad was out shopping and we were left alone. We were starving. I thought maybe there is something in the fridge. We opened the fridge and. Peered inside there were two eggs left. I took them out of the fridge but I accidentally dropped them “Oh no!” My sister cried. After we cleaned up we eggslaimed “Finally!” Then I said “Let’s go to the shops.” “But were are we going to get the money from?” My sister asked. From dad’s pocket! It’s over here.” So we took some money and went to the shop hoping not to land in the same shop as dad was in. We had luck although we past the shop dad was in. We bought the eggs. On the way home though we past a dragon. The dragon looked fat and had red scales, most of the scales were broken. I had the feeling he wanted to kidnap us and I was right “Aaaaahhhhh!” We eggs-claimed the dragon had taken us into the air and flew away.

6. Saahraa

2023-11-01 03:15:34 UTC

They finally managed to get into the volcano and crept into the volcano like the wind . They walked into the theater. It was a nice theatre. It was enormous, orange with lots of banners inside. "Hey do you feel like something feels different in this theater ," I whispered. Suddenly, a booming voice said, "Welcome to the show of the only

magical theater in the world". "Oh so cool can we act I have always wanted to act," exclaimed my sister. Then she imediatally walked over to the derctor and said "Mr magically amazing person who's name we don't know, can we join the play?" she asked. "Okay but there is only space for two more people" he exclaimed. My sister started to bounce on the spot as a smile broke across her face. "Perfecto" my sister joked. Unfortunatally ,I had to keep the eggs on one of chairs.

THE DRAMATIC SCENE

Suddenly, a actor threw the one of the precious sparkeling eggs on the floor . "Oh no, I don't think we should stay here for long" I whispered . "Yep I agree though I do want to act for a bit longer" my sister whispered back. Then to our surprise a big egg portal(eggortal) opened . It was shaped like an egg and it was glowing as if it wants them to jump through it. They jumped through and disappeared...

5. Emilia

2023-11-01 03:15:36 UTC

Looking up, we saw there was a giant volcano as big as 20 asteroids put on top of each other. ”do you hear that?“ said my sister. It sounds like music, it’s coming from the volcano “what are we going to do “said my sister as a worried quiver came over her face. I sat down and thought after hours of thinking “wait a second! why did I not think of this, if there is music then there are people so we need to get inside the volcano” . “How ,we need a ladder”said my sister .”we can make it out of Dragon skin”I explained while I was talking my sister had found old dragon skin. “Here I found some “. We built a ladder out of old dragon skin and leafs .While we were climbing the ladder the eggs slipped out of my hand “splat “on the floor I thought for a moment ,unfortunately the eggs I mumbled under my breath.While I was thinking my sister had climbed down.

I joined her after ,luckily only one egg had cracked we climbed up and we were at the top of the volcano.we could not figure out how to get in .Time was egg-enst us, a cloud as big as a three football fields hit .It started to rain though the clouds are red not grey it is was still scary we needed cover.

19. Yuri

2023-11-01 03:15:55 UTC

But before the egg toilets came close, Sumin dragon came flying above the egg toilet’s and than Sumin the dragon.

Bursted out with FIRE! Than the egg toilet’s.”WOW!”I and my sister said it at the same time. The egg toilet’s was now omelet’s dragon Sumin brought them back to there house.

14. Juha Lee

2023-11-01 03:16:19 UTC

Unfortunately the naughty egg eggscaped my shocked hand and flew lightning fast to the tiny edge of the window."I guess we need to climb a lot.." I said in small voice,”ok......" My sister said slowly.Me and my sister climbed up the shiny and tall tower tiredly, just the moment that my sweaty hand almost touched the fast and naughty egg.......

13. Maryam

2023-11-01 03:16:27 UTC

All of a sudden we began to fall down like strong wind. Sumin the dragon and all of us.We began to see what looked like the Colloseum and inside it was a strong gladiater who was about to sacrifiçe a thin three haired man. Like a show there was loud cheering when we landed. I almost fell and my face was red. My tummy was rumbling. Unfortunately the eggs and us were no were near breakfast. My sister was complaning over and over again. "It's not my fault " I said. "I want to eggscape from this place! "

18. hojin

2023-11-01 03:17:01 UTC

Whenever we tried to grab one of the eggs a egg toilet appeared. Then they called the entire egg toilet population. One of the egg toilet try to steal two magic eggs from me.

15. Lilly

2023-11-01 03:22:49 UTC

The egg fell on a cushion .The kids needed to climb down with sweaty hands. The gladiater laughed like a monkey. They got to the bottom ! "UFF" we eggslaimed when we got to the bottom. We picked up the egg.

8. Shunsuke Waragai

2023-11-01 03:30:46 UTC

As we were talking to the fairies, we heard a huge bellowing roar, like an angry llama. We turned around to see snotty and slimy green trolls. We were as scared as a mouse as the trolls were stepping towards us. As we looked at them we saw a troll crying. We asked it, “why are you crying?” said my sister. Well we were waiting for an answer then Sumin the Dragon flew in and landed next to us. “Because l’m hungry” troll said “it’s too bad, I want to eat the egg”

“If I give my egg you then I won’t have any eggs, that’s too bad” I said.

11. Vanya

2023-11-01 03:32:58 UTC

So the fairy portal brought them to a plane.And I went to a pailot to asced were is air plane flaing. To Africa the pailot sed. To Africa I riplid!!!!!!!!!!! But after 25 minut after sudenly... Sumin the dragon kidnapped the eggs and I shouted Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But unfortunely the 3 eggs fold.Bicaws dragon was anoyd by mi.

17. Sumin

sumin_lee1 — 2023-11-01 03:44:18 UTC

They are falling to the egg land nooooooooooooo! We landed on egg land egg land was soft as pillow so they didn't got bumped. Egg land was made out of eggs and it was also fluffy. Fortunary they saw a weird cteature like monster next the creature moved to us slowly as turtle. They saw egg toilets whenever they run away egg toilets try to steal magic eggs they saw someting gaint, red and spiky horn with black line, also scary face and big , red and stripy wings and strong and sharp extremly bony feat.

16. Aiden

2023-11-01 04:02:17 UTC

This place is tiring and exhausting. We suddenly saw a portal. The portal opened and we went inside. The portal closed quickly like a train. Unfortunately the egg rolled on the floor. Luckily the door opened and we picked it up. Then Sumin the dragon and us were off to somewhere else. We was following ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! we cried but the ground was soft and Sumin the dragon was right behind us. I said I thought we were going to crash and I waited to my sister to answer. Finally my sister answered I thought were going to crash to my sister look like really scared now. I'm going scared now. Something was behind us now and we’re ready to fight.

9.Kiki

2023-11-01 04:10:08 UTC

Sudenly a blinding light appears. I couldn’t see what was going on. I only could see a fairy. Finally I could see again. In front of me stood the fairy queen she said” let’s vanish These trolls”she was wearing a dress made out of plants curly blond hair. Pink wings. Her face looked as soft as a cloud. unfortunately a eggs escape out of my hand I shouted “the egg is egg scaping we all ran after the egg for about 30 minutes finally we got the egg the fairy queen said “flutter and fly in the sky don’t be scared until you die by pie “a troll said” let us go to trollland so we can eat pies “ we heard a zap. The Trolls were gone. The fairy queen said” I sent them back to trollland and have a present for you and your sister “ she gave me two boxes she open the portal we stepped in.

2. Mike

2023-11-01 04:18:05 UTC

We looked in the fridge and saw only two eggs then we started complaining that we had two eggs then unfortunately the eggs fell out of my grasp and became undercooked omlets eggcelent said my sister sarcastically then after cleaning it up we decided to go to the shop and buy some eggs then after exiting the shop and buying exactly six eggs we saw a dragon which picked us up then the dragon which was flying to some place which we didn’t even know exactly where it was but we knew it was someplace that the dragon was facing then a few hours of waiting the dragon finally droped us off

3. JayJun

2023-11-02 03:03:13 UTC

They when to the shop and buy eggs but it was not a normal eggs,it was a magic eggs! After we went out of the shop but there was a nasty, dark magic dragon called Sumin. Sadly one of the magic eggs cracked their was a portal that no one seen it was extra shinier than anything in the world.Theywent into the portal.

4. Kabir Aggarwal

kabir_aggarwal1 — 2023-11-02 03:07:29 UTC

Swiftly, Sumin the dragon picked us up and started flying, it took us a long time but we finally managed to escape the clutches of Sumin the dragon, but then we realised we were FALLING!!! “AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!” We both screamed. Soon, we landed in a completely white room with nothing but a black portal in it, unfortunately one of the eggs sliped out of the egg carton and burst, “owwww” said my sister “anyway I wonder where this will take…oh no the egg!!!” I looked down and right and saw one of the egg cracked on the floor, But we decided to just move on from that and we eggsited the white room by going through the portal, which we did, and we ended up in space, unfortunately 1 of the eggs thought “I have had enough of this!!!” and as fast as a cheetah pouncing on it’s prey, jumped out and quickly and quietly ran(or should I say “ flew)” away! “Runaway egg!!!’ My sister shouted, I looked and saw 1 of the eggs was on the move, so we ran after it. Then

we( after a long chase) got the egg and got back to the portal, then we saw the incredibly red mars, as red as can be, so we went over there and

7. Amata

2023-11-02 03:16:31 UTC

as we went through the portal we thought we were in a magic loop. i thought it was fun but unfortunately sissy vomited because she was dizzy. we arrived in a magical natural place with so much plants "fairies " sissy yelled out of nowhere then all the fairies flew to us one of them asked "where did you come from "

12. Nando

2023-11-02 03:20:34 UTC

We were very surprised that the dragon was following us. My sister eggs_claimed"Noooo!"we ran out of the plane to the egg_sits.

18b. Hojin

hojin_song1 — 2023-11-08 02:59:23 UTC

Whenever we tried to grab one of the eggs, a egg toilet appeared and tried attacked us but luckily as quick as a cheetah I grab one of the eggs and also found two egg launcher, egg launcher looks like rocket launcher but it shoots eggs. While I was distrected getting the egg they called the entire egg toilet population . Unfortunately, one of them even tried to take two of our magic eggs. Then we saw Sumin the dragon he was coming to help us get out of this creepy, scary egggland.

10.vedant

vedant_sanathkumar1 — 2023-11-08 03:20:07 UTC

So the fairy portal brought the children to a eggnourmous plane.but the gigantic plane started shaking violently!!What could have caused such a thing to happen?? Just then a huge tornado appeared!!we were terrified!! Then Sumin the dragon appeared and slashed and we screamed!!! Suddenly the plane went into a terrific burst of flames!! Luckily the fierce Sumin the dragon couldn’t handle the fierce twisting twister and got sucked in. Eeeiooooiiiookkang! Went Sumin the dragon as he burst in the clouds.”phew!” Whispered my relieved sister. “I don’t think so” I said “I wonder if dad is home yet?” Suddenly my sister screamed whattttt!!!!!