FAMILY WRITING PRODUCTION by Johana Marcela Grisales Alvarez

vgalvislondono — 2024-02-09 00:11:39 UTC

His full name is Diego Mauricio Galvis Arboleda, He is my dad . He’s an engineer of systems for example he fix computer, work with “Domótica” . He is a forty-two years old . His birthday is on June five . He’s from Dosquebradas ,it is a city in Colombia . He’s Colombian . His hair is short, wavy and dark brown, he is tall and a little chubby, his in a middle aged , his eyes are brown and a little big . He has a beard and he is a ver very handsome. He likes a video games and playing pool. He is hardworking

Pretty good paragraph Valeria, most of the text is very accurate. I suggest reviewing ordinal numbers and HE'S vs HIS.

2024-02-09 00:30:33 UTC

My aunt, her name is Maria Galindo, ___ is my dad's sister. She's a Doctor in her hometown, Bogotá. She's a very beautiful and cheerful Colombian who was born in Cundinamarca on April 12th, 1985. Currently, she's 39 years old. Maria is a stunning woman with medium height, white skin. Maria's hair is long, straight, and black short (check here, long or short?). She has big and brown eyes. Her face is oval-shaped, adorned with cute freckles on her cheeks. She's slim, has several tattoos on her body, including delicate floral designs on her arms, and a nose piercing that adds a touch of edginess to her appearance.

Outstanding writing skills Dania, you use very advanced vocabulary. Just keep an eye on the small corrections made.

isabellaroro516 — 2024-02-09 00:33:22 UTC

In this paragraph I talk about a person in my family. His full name is Rubén Darío Rodríguez Quiceno, and his my dad. His from Colombia, specifically from a town that it’s called Santa Rosa de Cabal, that’s mean that his nationality is Colombian, his age is forty-four and his birthday is on August 15^th, also his occupation is manager or director of Bancolombia. (add a connector here) His physical appearance, his skin is white, his corporal mass, really, I don’t know, __ is like a combination of well-built and a little plump, but just in his belly, the type of his face is like a circle, his bald, but that’s not means that his hair don’t have a color, his hair ~~color~~ is black, the size of his eyes is normal, the color of these is brown dark, his mouth is thin and sometimes he has a little bit of beard.

Nicely done Isabella, very complete and elaborate production. Keep an eye on aspects like position and he's vs his.

2024-02-09 01:40:12 UTC

I will tell you about my cousin, Her full name is Valeria Osorio Ramirez. She is a cousin on my father's side, she is 22 years old, this year she turns 23, specifically, December 7 is her birthday, that is, she celebrates the first day of candles. She is from Dosquebradas, a Municipality that is in Colombia, she is a psychologist and has her own office called “Catharsis”. Physically speaking about her, She has average height, She is thin, her hair reaches a little above her waist and her hair color is brown, her skin tone is not very white but not very dark either. Her face is round, she has a very sweet smile and her eyes are brown.

Ximena, thank you for submitting your paragraph but please make sure to use AI wisely next time.

His name is Jean Carlo Ocampo Serna, he is my Brother, he is an english student, he is a seventeen years old. He's From Pereira Colombia.

2024-02-09 01:51:40 UTC

My brother, his hair is short, curly and dark brown, he is tall and slim, his eyes are dark brown and he wears glasses.

My brother likes to eat hamburgers, he likes to read and play the Peruvian cajon.

He dresses very nice and has good taste, he is an excellent leader and loves helping people, he also likes to travel, draw, listen to music, talk and he likes to drink chai tea.

He is ver intelligent and very skilled at technology.

Very well written Laura, remember to include information about his birthday.

AlejandroCardona

2024-02-09 01:54:29 UTC

I will talk about my mother. Her first name is Blanca and her last name is Molina Sanchez, she’s 41 years old and her birthday is in july 29th. She lives in Balboa, she is from Colombia more specific in Pereira, she is Colombian. Her occupation is business in a make up store. She is short and thin, she is middle aged, she has dark brown eyes, her hair is long,straight and dark brown.

Good composition Alejandro, you used the topics studied in class very nicely; however, remember to comply with the minimum number of words.

Juan Camilo Marín

2024-02-09 01:55:59 UTC

I want to write about my dad, his full name is Lidiverg Marin Ardila and he’s 60 years old. He is married with my mom and his birthday is tomorrow on February nine. I’m so happy for him.

He‘s from Santa Rosa de Cabal, in Colombia, he is a businessman, he work with my mom in a hardware store.

He has a very short hair, curly and black, he is tall like me, his eyes are dark brown and his eyebrows are big.

He is so kind and he love helping other people he has a beautiful heart.

He likes watching tv, listening to catholic music and being with our family.

Great job Camilo, very fluent and organized writing, just pay attention to the position of the adjectives when describing hair.

Greissi Olaya

2024-02-09 01:57:17 UTC

Her full name is Elizabeth Salazar Zapata, her are sixty-two years old, her birthday is ___ April 28th, her is my grandma. Her is ___ housewife. Her is from Colombia, specifically from Pereira. She is Colombian.

Her Hair is shoulder ______________ straight and dark black, her is a medium height, her is elderly, but physically she seems to be of a middle age, her eyes are brown, her face is oval, her is slim, her is very beautiful and ~~her~~ is very kind.

You wrote a complete paragraph Greissi but you should practice the difference between subject pronouns (I, you he, she...) and possessive adjectives (my, your, his, her...) and identify when to use each of them. Keep practicing.

Jean Carlo Ocampo

2024-02-09 02:10:35 UTC

Her full name Is Diana Janeth Serna, her are forty years old, she Is Winehouse (what do you mean?). Her birthay is ___ September 24th, her Is my mother, she Is from colombia Pereira. She Is colombian.

She studied psychology and gastronomy. She Is mother of Two children, she Is married.

Her hair Is short, curly and dark Browne, her Is a medium height,

her eyes ___ Browne, her Is very beautifull, her face is round, she Is plump, she Is very creative, her skin color Is white.

Very elaborate paragraph Jean Carlo; however, you should pay attention to spelling and capitalization. Also, practice the difference between SHE and HER.

Andrea Barrera

2024-02-09 02:56:50 UTC

I am going to talk about my grandmother, her full name is Rosa Albina Valencia Rosero, she is married to my grandfather, she is a merchant, she is 63 years old, her birthday is ___ January 30.

She likes sweets, flowers and sharing with her family, she is very affectionate.

She is from Colombia, specifically from Tambo Nariño. She is short, she is thin, her hair is long, wavy and black, her face is oval, her eyes are dark brown, her skin is brown, she is beautiful.

Amazing job Andrea, it's a very cohesive paragraph. Remember to include the preposition ON for dates.

Mariana Guapacha

MaryGuapacha — 2024-02-09 03:02:26 UTC

I'm going to talk about my mom, her full name is Juliana Raigoza Cardona, she is a very pretty and intelligent woman. She is forty-two years old, she has a medium age, she was born in Pereira on June 27 in 1981, she is Colombian (Where in Colombia?), she is a psychologist at a school, she likes to read and meditate, she is not married but lives with her boyfriend. She is a small and thin woman, her hair is medium length , wavy and blond, her skin is a medium tone, her eyes are small and hazel, her face is oval and her lips are small.

Excellent job Mariana, just revise the phrase has a medium age.

Description of my father

2024-02-09 03:45:38 UTC

His full name is Jose Ediberto Echeverri Restrepo. Ediberto is Vanesa´s father. He has two children and their names ____ Marisol and Vanesa . My father is sixty-four , his birthday it´s on January 11th. He 's ____ businessman , he has a cafetería in Leticia - Amazonas, he works with my mother. He´s from Santuario, a municipality of Risaralda. He 's Colombian. Ediberto 's hair is short wavy and dark brown. His eyes are brown and little. He's tall , plump and elderly ~~old~~. He´s sideburns. He likes to play billiards with friends and family. He's the best father , he supports a lot my sister and me.

You have a beautiful paragraph Ligia, it contains all the necessary information and details. Pay attention to the difference between the verb BE and the verb HAVE.

Ana Sofía Orozco

2024-02-09 18:49:26 UTC

I will describe my mom

Her full name is Jenniffer Torres López, she is thirty-five years old, she is middle-aged, she was born on April 2, 1982 in Pereira, her nationality is Colombian (where in Colombia is she from specifically?), she is a housewife, she is a very beautiful woman, she is married and has two daughters.

She is a woman who has long, straight, blonde hair, she has dark brown eyes, she is tall and thin, her skin is white and her face is round.

She is a very good mother, a good friend and likes to spend time with her family.

Fantastic Ana, you wrote a very organized and complete composition.