I Gave Up by Melanie Orantes https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj I gave up on trying something for the first time. en-us 2017-10-27 12:45:49 UTC 2017-11-05 22:06:57 UTC hello@padlet.com I Gave Up 2021orantesm https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201169122 I Gave Up]]> 2017-10-27 12:49:55 UTC https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201169122 Ms. McGrail mcgrailc https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201682447 I love the dialogue between you and your dad. It is very realistic and makes the story come to life. While this is about you learning not to give up, it's also a great story about your dad helping you to reach those goals and realize that you have to believe in yourself.]]> 2017-10-30 12:38:18 UTC https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201682447 Devin https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201682477 It had a nice moral and the intro gave the setting a nice feel]]> 2017-10-30 12:38:22 UTC https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201682477 Gigi https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201683211 This memoir is very good, I love how this can give a life lesson to others and  how I can picture your struggle of learning to ride a bike.]]> 2017-10-30 12:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201683211 Analise 2020tomoloa https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201685102 I like how you explained your feelings and that you learned a lesson from this.

]]> 2017-10-30 12:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201685102 Kaylee biskaduros https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201687258 I like how u used dialogue and really showed your determination.I love how you showed how this changed you for the future *and present.*]]> 2017-10-30 12:50:04 UTC https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201687258 Eric DeCoteau 2021decoteaue https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201688365 I liked the overall message of this memoir. Its very powerful. This was overall a short and to the point memoir, great job! :)]]> 2017-10-30 12:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201688365 Haley Robles https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201952319 I really liked how you expressed the lesson you learned. Good Job]]> 2017-10-30 22:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/2021orantesm/w069a7wy5hyj/wish/201952319