Conclusions by Alex https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai en-us 2020-05-13 11:51:15 UTC 2021-03-04 11:02:51 UTC hello@padlet.com CONCLUSION FOR PROBLEM SOLUTION ESSAY - STRUCTURE ascott24 https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1264826093
1.General concluding sentence: In conclusion, this essay has discussed.....

2. Focussed summary: The main problems are ...
However, there are solutions such as ...

3. Warning/prediction: Unless, ....

4. Say who is responsible: In my opinion, the main responsibility to solve this issue belongs to.....
]]> 2021-03-03 16:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1264826093 Bosco https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268066500 To conclude, a low pay and the difficulties in teaching such as bad student behavior has caused less people to aim to be a teacher. By government policies and increased moral education from parents, it is widely hoped that the problem can be tackled.


Good Work Bosco :) but maybe you could be more specific about the "difficulties" e.g. "the difficulties related to  student behaviour"]]> 2021-03-04 09:31:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268066500 https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268076308 In conclusion, this essay has discussed the reason for fewer people going into the teaching profession and also some solution to the problem. the main reasons for this problem is that the salary for teachers are low compared to other job and the difficulty in handling students. nevertheless, there are solutions to this problem such as increase in the salary of teachers and parent should teach their children good morals. unless this problem is fixed people would not find interest in teaching]]> 2021-03-04 09:34:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268076308 Omar https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268081503 In conclusion, this essay has discussed why hardly any people are going for the teaching field. The main problems is low payment However, there is a solutions such as raise in teacher's payment. Unless, the government solves this problem their will barley find teachers in the future.]]> 2021-03-04 09:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268081503 Raghad ralhazemi313 https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268083353 In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both side of problem teachers job . I believe that the main causes of the problem is low payment for teachers. However, there are solutions such as rise the payment for teachers. Unless the........


]]> 2021-03-04 09:36:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268083353 https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268089582 In conclusion, this essay has discussed the reasons for the younger people for not choosing the teaching profession. The main reasons for this is not very high wages and the bad behavior of students toward teachers. However, these reasons do have some solutions. Firstly, the wages of the teachers should be increased. Secondly, parents should taught their  children’s to respect their teachers. Unless the teachers teach, our children will not get good education. In my opinion, the main responsibility to solve this problem goes to the government.( Noor)

Excellent work !]]> 2021-03-04 09:38:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268089582 Alzahra https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268097243 In conclusion,this essay has discussed some reason and solution of  problem teacher’s job . The main problems are low salaries and children do behave well in class .However , there are solutions such as rise teachers pay and parents give thier children a sense of respect for teachers .Unless low salary and respect for teahers , the problem will continu . In my opinion, the main responsibility to solve this issue belongs to government and parents.

Good work ! You can improve even further by trying to paraphrase some more words.]]> 2021-03-04 09:41:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268097243 Samantha https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268104032  In conclusion, this essay has discussed how teaching has become a less popular job in many countries, due to reasons such as the salary, working hours and pupil’s behavior. This is a serious problem, unless we get more talented young people to become teachers, the education of our children will suffer. My view is that the main responsibility solving the problems lies with the parents and the government.]]> 2021-03-04 09:43:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268104032 Ahmed Zahrani https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268113888 In conclusion, this essay has discussed the reasons of making fewer people want to be teachers. The main problem are the lower teachers’ salaries and the difficulties in dealing with children. However, there are solutions such as raising the salaries of teachers and encourage parents to give their children a sense of respect. Unless we look into this problem seriously, we will have a huge shortage of teachers. In my opinion, ]]> 2021-03-04 09:47:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268113888 Abeer https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268114006
In conclusion, the education is essential for everyone, as a result should the government be serious and handle this problems soon as possible to create a good community. ]]> 2021-03-04 09:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/w0206ekgfoswmxai/wish/1268114006