Revision by Christopher Codispoti https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9 Besides improving your grade, what are three reasons for revising your work? en-us 2018-04-10 11:23:25 UTC 2018-05-01 17:53:25 UTC hello@padlet.com staph knee halberd https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214916 
1. improving your skill
2. seeing your mistakes
3. look smart

]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214916 Bjorn Lee https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214919 1) I need to revise my attention getter
2) I need more coherence when comparing the protests of the two wars
3) I want my blog post to be more interesting to the reader]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214919 Saim Chaudhry https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214934 1. My writing will hopefully be better.
2. It will get a nice grade
3. Revising also helps you learn about writing]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214934 Bella Ocampo https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214944 1. Make sure I am clear
2. Improve my writing
3. Correct silly mistakes]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214944 Jaycee Sansom https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214957 1. Make sure that the work is grammatically correct.
2. Allows for reflection and others to see your work to help you improve. 
3.  Tries to improve the piece in terms of ideas, flow, structure, etc.]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214957 crook https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214988 -So that the teachers don't yell at me for being lazy or give that 'disappointed stare and exasperated sigh' thing that is generally a guilt trip. Like, no one has time for that and you get called to the office if your reaction is in the least bit ""disrespectful"" it's just a waste of time to go through that whole ordeal and everyone knows it.
-The first one but instead just so that a parental unit doesn't get called in because they will go OFF and twist everything out of proportion because for some reason, it is completely necessary to cause an unneeded spectacle over something incredibly simple.
-Revising generally leads to either finding really funny mistakes or ending up on a random Wiki page about deep sea jellyfish which is super rad.
]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214988 Michael Rodgers https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214998 1) It helps me learn where my strengths and weaknesses are.
2) Knowing my strengths and weaknesses in writing will allow me to focus more on those areas next time I'm writing.
3) If I focus more on improving my weaknesses, it will allow me to improve the quality of my writing.]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250214998 Look educated https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215013 2018-04-10 12:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215013 alaina https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215016 1.To fix any mistakes 
2.To reorganize thoughts
3.To try and make it better than before]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215016 Dean Cannon dacannon https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215023 1. it can help you learn to do better for your next work
2. you could catch what you did wrong
3. it can help you see what others did wrong in there work. ]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215023 Molly H. https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215038 Besides improving your grade, revision is a great process to strengthen you as a writer. When you constantly look over your work it forces you to find your mistakes and make you a greater writer. Revision also allows you to get feedback fro others on your work. You can see how other will react to your work and you can further change and improve based on suggestions. Finally, revision allows you to practice commitment. You can't abandon your work and you are forced to follow through. This allows you to gain helpful skills for your future. ]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215038 Ruthie Reece https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215046 1. Improves your writing
2. Make your points clearer
3. The reader is able to understand or relate to your text more]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215046 Fidel Vasquez https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215052 1. improve ability to write
2. change things you didn't first realize were off
3. make it look more professional ]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215052 Nathan c. https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215083 1. to improve the quality of my work
2. to learn from mistakes
3. Verify that i did not make any silly mistakes.]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215083 gaby https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215101 when you look over your work you can look over any mistakes, increase your writing skills and overlook anything that you can improve ]]> 2018-04-10 12:02:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215101 Dominique https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215126 1.Improve my writing skills 
2.]]> 2018-04-10 12:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215126 https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215127 1. to improve my writing skills
2. to look very smart
3. to make sure my spelling in all right and spelt corretly]]> 2018-04-10 12:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215127 Madison Hayes https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215155 1. to check my spelling 
2. to make sure it's how it needs to be 
3. it helps you with your writing ]]> 2018-04-10 12:03:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215155 Victor Soria Flores https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215209 1. Look educated
2. So people can see that you are serious and know what you are talking about
3. So people could understand what you're saying and get your point across ]]> 2018-04-10 12:03:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215209 Dylan R https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215290 to make it better
to fix your errors
fix puncuation]]> 2018-04-10 12:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215290 Alex https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215599 1. To look back and improve.

2. Correct typos and errors.

3. To catch any mistakes you may have originally missed.]]> 2018-04-10 12:04:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215599 cmalndborough https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215617 
1, so your friends compliment your essay 
2, because it makes me look more perfect, which I am, but people gotta Know that, yknow? 
3, because imagine if you write an essay better than like, a president did. How rad would that be? You probably wont, but what if? It gives you a better chance to one-up presidents if you revise your work yeah? 
]]> 2018-04-10 12:04:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250215617 dacannon https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250216471 2018-04-10 12:07:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/250216471 Taj https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/256891507 Its good to revise because...
1.  you could have thought you typed something but really messed up.
2. Improve your writing]]> 2018-05-01 15:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ccodispoti/vytpybtatjz9/wish/256891507