https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza Share your ideas and storyline/plot here. en-us 2017-10-02 06:55:59 UTC 2017-10-04 02:57:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Send.png helmi_helmi36 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192867734 Hi everyone! I hope that you guys can share your brilliant ideas here, so that everyone can see your opinion which indirectly can help our play to be more interesting! Thank you! ]]> 2017-10-02 07:00:32 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192867734 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192894742 Personally I liked the the first Anastasia premise, but  I think the second premise with the 3 sisters has a stronger plot overall.
 
 First Anastasia premise:
 
 We have intro, catalystic action and its consequences. I think for a thriller, it does not have enough risk/high stakes for the protagonist. Theres also the element of time constraint/limit/time working against you common in thriller genre to consider. 
 
 We know that Rasputin killed the father and plan to steal the fortune through marriage to his niece. He got his hands on her, puts her in an orphanage and proceeded to reveal his future plans. Keep in mind that she is 11 at this time and the lowest possible age to legally marry is 16 in some countries (with parents' permission). 
 
 This should give her at least 5 years of nothing happening except of falling in love, thus removing the element of racing against time. In terms of risk/high stakes for character, the only direct threat to her is her uncle intending to marry her. With the stealing inheritance issue, we have to consider what kind of girl she is: does she care about losing it? If not, then its not an issue for her. She still has her grandma.
 
 This leaves us with only one direct and concrete threat and even that i think is weakened by the lack of race against time. In thriller, it is the protagonist that commonly has to endure threats from beginning to end (whether she wins or loses at the end). So i think it unsuitable for her to be the one committing a killing spree.
 
 I also think having her hallucinate the whole thing takes out the emotional investment in her adventure. Not to mention quite confusing to stage and it may involve too much exposition in the end (to explain and justify her hallucinations) and not enough action.
 
 Things to consider:
 -add more threats to character
 -raise the stakes against her (what more could happen aside from having to commit incest)
 -add element of race against time
 -the age of the protagonist
 -develop the character's motivation/morality/fears and hope for the future
 
 Suggestions:
 Rasputin should be more developed. Perhaps he is greedy for a reason. Perhaps he is jealous of his brother. Perhaps he was once and still is madly in love with anastasia's late mother, eventually transferring that feelings to anastasia herself. 
 
 This is the end of my attempt at persuasion. 
 

]]> 2017-10-02 08:53:31 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192894742 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192980951 Stick to Eunice's story with modification since we already vote for it on the first place. If want to combine no problem but don't combine everything, just some part of it.

Some entertainment to our play wouldn't do no harm since our people loves comedy this might grab their attention more to our play. ]]> 2017-10-02 13:28:34 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192980951 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192986463 This is just my thoughts so far, since we voted for Eunice’s storyline. I just don’t see the point if we need to combine anastacia story in it too. It’s just what I think because it will get messed up for the playwrights later on to come up with solid scripts and scenes if we combine the two story together. ]]> 2017-10-02 13:37:00 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192986463 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192987919 2017-10-02 13:39:08 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192987919 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192989324 Agreed ]]> 2017-10-02 13:41:14 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192989324 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192993605 2017-10-02 13:47:43 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192993605 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192996061 2017-10-02 13:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192996061 helmi_helmi36 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192996364 Then we will go for majority]]> 2017-10-02 13:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192996364 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192998172 I feel that there is just too many people who are getting involve in the story. Majority has voted for Eunice’s story so lets just leave it at that. Lets not confuse things cause i feel it is already kinda messed up. Besides that, all else is fine. And before voting on anything, its better that we give all the information ]]> 2017-10-02 13:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192998172 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192998698 If we combine the story, we already have to scene and story line.. we just have to improve the characters and story line. Put some comedy and romance in it. We cannot take the whole story line exact as the real story.

]]> 2017-10-02 13:55:52 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/192998698 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193013168 2017-10-02 14:20:35 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193013168 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193020040 2017-10-02 14:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193020040 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193051928 Centuries ago, a young boy stood next to a burning village in tears as his father was killed by a group of samurai lead by a masked man. Filled with vengeance, the young boy swore that he would seek revenge on the masked man so he trained for many years earning respect and building up a group of shinobi to fight with him. After a long journey and months of searching, the young man came across the masked man's village. Enraged with anger and hatred, the young man set fire to the village, stabbed the masked man killing him, finally getting his revenge. As the masked man dropped to his knees, through the mist and chaos of the burning village, the young man saw a young boy crying...]]> 2017-10-02 15:24:23 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193051928 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193077537 2017-10-02 16:08:05 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193077537 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193089687 2017-10-02 16:30:19 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193089687 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193090537 Keep in mind that we’re not professionals. At the end of the day, this is all about our marks. So let’s work together 🦄]]> 2017-10-02 16:31:45 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193090537 https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193695237 I agree if we go with classic. how about we remake a scene from movies perhaps P.Ramlee times and pick and remake scenes in any P.Ramlee films. Try to sprinkle humor and musical. because malaysian love to laugh kan? since p.ramlee movies have a lot moral values. and do you know his films can relate to what happen nowadays? ]]> 2017-10-04 02:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/helmi_helmi36/vwnkhyurqjza/wish/193695237