4Q Argument Revisions by Mrs. Copic https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last List Greatest Need en-us 2017-05-05 02:09:43 UTC 2017-05-05 14:40:08 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Hotsun.png https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192643 •fix font/size
•start works cited on new page]]> 2017-05-05 14:34:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192643 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192777 fix citations ]]> 2017-05-05 14:34:59 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192777 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192801 Sentence fluency and overall flow of paper ]]> 2017-05-05 14:35:07 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192801 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192846 Revise lead in and lead outs for quotes/evidence]]> 2017-05-05 14:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192846 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192921 change out and use better wording, use the thesaurus ]]> 2017-05-05 14:35:36 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170192921 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193033 Word choice and then do we need to have the visual in the paper?]]> 2017-05-05 14:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193033 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193112 Cut out excess 
Better word choice]]> 2017-05-05 14:36:14 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193112 Stronger diction https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193188 2017-05-05 14:36:32 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193188 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193225 • organization 
• add stronger counter argument and call to action 
• fix margins ]]> 2017-05-05 14:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193225 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193245 •sentence fluency 
•diction 

]]> 2017-05-05 14:36:41 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193245 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193265 Word choice ]]> 2017-05-05 14:36:44 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193265 Repeated ideas https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193416 2017-05-05 14:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193416 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193425 Revise sentence structure ]]> 2017-05-05 14:37:20 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193425 Sentence fluency https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193477 2017-05-05 14:37:29 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193477 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193535 add visual into paper ]]> 2017-05-05 14:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193535 https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193658 Transitions to each body paragraph 
 ]]> 2017-05-05 14:38:06 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170193658 Add visual to paper https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170194255 2017-05-05 14:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/Mrs_Copic/last/wish/170194255