https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 16:40:24 UTC 2026-01-16 18:08:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f339.png 26yklieger https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf/wish/420779467 Its Yael and can you upload your story?]]> 2019-12-06 15:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf/wish/420779467 26svanterpool https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf/wish/420862762 I love how much you used descriptive words in the story. It gave me a very good image. I can imagine what Rosie was doing. I can see the picture of what everyone was doing. I loved the beginning when you described the beginning of where you are. I also loved how you described the action of what the characters were doing. I can see what they are doing in my mind. I loved when after Rosie said that we can’t pay for this. I wish that you would have made some grammer corrections though. 

]]> 2019-12-06 16:53:19 UTC https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf/wish/420862762 26sbirck https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf/wish/421802132 I really liked how you described your characters. I could really picture what was going on inside my head. I also really liked how you added yourself and Olivia. I wish that you added me in though. Just kidding. I wish that the story was just a little bit shorter. But overall, AWESOME STORY! :)]]> 2019-12-09 19:07:38 UTC https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf/wish/421802132 26obillingham https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf/wish/422202416 I love in your narrative “Devil’s Reasoning” how the title is a play on words. I think it is really funny that Rosie’s last name is Devil and in the story you show the reason for her being so rude sometimes. I also love how well you captured the picture of Rosie listening to her parents argue in the beginning. It just really shows how real arguments go and really shows what Rosie is thinking while listening. One thing I would suggest is that keep the story equally paced. Some parts that were really important seemed to fly by really fast and then and some of the small parts went really well. But overall awesome story Madelyn! ]]> 2019-12-10 15:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/26mlatham/vur6q8cxeacf/wish/422202416