Paragraph Writing by Adibah Mutalib

Paragraph Writing by Adibah Mutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl Causes of corruptions en-us 2017-01-19 05:25:05 UTC 2017-07-06 05:05:35 UTC hello@padlet.com In-class Task adibahmutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/147996797 Instructions:

1. Write a topic sentence based on these causes of corruptions:
a) low job opportunity
b) abuse of power
c) poor quality in service

2. Write in three (3) supporting sentences that further elaborate the topic sentences.

]]> 2017-01-19 05:26:45 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/147996797 One of the causes of corruptions is influenced by someone or environment ( Yap Kien Ming,Darshan jimmyyap99 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003012 Supporting sentence :
1. Raised in a greedy environment such as parents encouraging the said trait since they are young.
2. Cultural environments that condone corruptions to the society, such as defending or even admiring crooks or rationalizing false arguments with no moral basis.
3. Mainly per state of situation can lead to greediness to someone.

]]> 2017-01-19 07:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003012 Megan! meganneng https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003308 Topic sentence: One of the many causes of corruptions is lack of job opportunities.

Supporting sentence:
1. People are willing to pay a large amount of money just to get job offers to higher officials.
2. Many people could face problems such as troubles in paying rent, which may lead to homelessness. ]]> 2017-01-19 07:23:40 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003308 One of the causes of corruptions is greed. (Jun, Chong Ling) ryosaeba555 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003546 Supporting Sentence:
1. Some people will do anything if someone offered them money.
2. Because of greediness, people tend to get money illegally.
3. People gets greedy and get into corruption because money can fill the loneliness and can even buy power.

]]> 2017-01-19 07:25:33 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003546 One of the causes of corruption is Regulation & inefficient management.(Parsun & Khay) lpsun https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003572 Supporting Sentence:
1.People become jobless due to lack of education or negative learning experience.
2.Delay in investments, starting of industries and also growth.
3.Decrease in foreign investment due to heavy corruption in the government bodies.

]]> 2017-01-19 07:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003572 Bibiana & Gabrielle https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003725 Topic sentence:
One of the causes of corruption is lack of job opportunities.
Supporting sentence:
1.People are willing to do anything for money even though its something negative like bribery.
2.They became greedy in the things they do to in order to earn more money.
3.They will be ready to pay lump some amounts for the job offer to the higher officials or politicians.]]> 2017-01-19 07:26:57 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148003725 ( syed and darren ) syamito https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148004540 Topic sentence : One of the strong points of corruption is personal interest.

Supporting 1 : personal interest stems from the greed that people have.

Supporting 2 : People who are usually underpaid will more likely dwell into corruption.

Supporting 3 : Poor management teams which lead to employees having low morale.

]]> 2017-01-19 07:32:39 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148004540 (Natasha, Narmy, XueYing) xueyingg https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148004597 Topic sentence: Firstly, one of the causes of corruption is the lack of effective management.

Supporting 1: In the police force, corruption and bribery among traffic polices are not uncommon. A speeding fine or a ticket could easily be overlooked with a couple of hundred ringgit.

Supporting 2: Even though the supervisors are aware of the bribery among the lower officers, action is rarely taken as most of the higher ups feel that investigating the issue is not worth their time.

Supporting 3: In most cases, it is even found that a system exists where bribery is not only being practiced among the lower-class officers, it is also practiced among all levels of the law enforcement hierarchy.

]]> 2017-01-19 07:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148004597 Chloe kaiwei_ct https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148004807 Topic sentence : Personal greed is one of the causes that lead to corruptions.

Support sentences:
1) Those people who are greedy have more unfettered desire for money and power.
2) They will revert to corruptions for more financial benefits.
3) The desire to continue holding the power is high and they would do anything to maintain the power.]]> 2017-01-19 07:34:49 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148004807 Sel & Carmen. j17023165 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148005267 Personal interest are one of the causes of corruptions these days.

Supporting sentences:
1. Individual or corporation will exploit their own official capacity for personal benefit.

2. People have a strong desire for more money, power and possessions than their need so they are greedy in their work.

3. When a person abused his or her official position for private gain.

]]> 2017-01-19 07:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148005267 Jade Chang jadechangyj12 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148005354 Topic sentence: One of the causes of corruptions is having a complex laws/procedure/process

1. They want to speed up the process to pass project and tender to management.
2. They want to get multi million dollar project.]]> 2017-01-19 07:38:25 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148005354 Jiha ungkuasila https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148005592 Topic sentences : low paying job is one of the causes that lead to corruption.

supporting sentences :

1. They want to have a lavish lifestyle when they can compensate for it.
2. The economy are very bad so the company cant afford to pay more to the workers.

]]> 2017-01-19 07:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/vu282roo7ygl/wish/148005592