7E14 - W28 Writing a story *part 2* by Vinschool Metropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o Made with a little mischief en-us 2022-03-04 02:38:51 UTC 2025-12-03 09:53:47 UTC hello@padlet.com vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117977 2022-03-04 02:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117977 vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117978 2022-03-04 02:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117978 Give feedback to your friends vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117979 You can follow this:
Structure & Language
  1. The story begins with the given sentence
  2. The story has exposition, action and resolution
  3. The writer has used past tenses.
  4. The writer has used connecting words and phrases.
  5. The writer has used imagery
6. Do you have any other comments?
7. Do you like this story? Why (not)?
]]> 2022-03-04 02:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117979 Timing: 20' vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117982 Write your story in about 80-100 words.
Pick one of the first sentences in the next column and write a story
Use:
  • 1 imagery
  • 1 word to create suspense
  • 1 direct speech

]]> 2022-03-04 02:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117982 vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117989 2022-03-04 02:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077117989 MaiPhong https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077224309  Today Mai will find out if her whole life has been a lie. She lives in a happy small village around her village is a dark forest that cannot be entered because no one has ever entered and exited. Her village worships a god who every night gives the knitters food in return they have to work for it. Everyone is happy here except me. I always feel like there's something wrong with this place. And tonight I will hide in the forest to find out what's there. when she went deep into the forest she saw a green shadow she chased it and met 2 big leopards. she fought it with a knife she carried that pierced its neck and many rays of light shot out and when she touched her it made her feel a sharp pain the other leopard succeeded in capturing her. and it brought her to a blue demon . it explained it was an alien and the food god it made for the inhabitants to supply the materials to launch the spaceship and swim now it was successful . it said goodbye to her and flew away .A bright future is waiting for her]]> 2022-03-04 03:42:31 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077224309 Thuc Anh anh021107 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077224628 It all started when My accidentally picked up wrong suitcase at the airpot . When she opened the suitcase , to her surpise it was a severed arm . She was so scared that she ran straight to the bathroom and reported it to the police . Suddenly a scary laugh came from behind the door . The air is starting to get go scary . The handle slowly turned , a black hand with sharp claws pulled her away . And since then no one has seen poor girl again . ]]> 2022-03-04 03:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077224628 Đăng :vv dang010859 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077227690 1.It all started when My accidentally picked up the wrong suitcase at the airport.My panicked because there are many important things in the suitcase.She informed the staff at the airport but they found not else.My recall that when she boarded the plane,someone noticed hei suitcase
because there are lot of valuare things in it.My thought that was a thief then she started investigating and knew he was a person normally lives here,she found his house,My went there and she her suitcase so she reported is to police.The police came to his house and there were so mant suitcase of the victims another.The police cached him the My been the heroes.]]> 2022-03-04 03:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077227690 Danh https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077233521 When i go a trip with my family. I picked up the wrong suitcase and in the suitcase, there is a bag of blue things that bright and look very special. When i eat it, i got a ability that i can control everything with just my hand. But,there is a gang whose using that to destroy the world. They know me eat that things and can kill them so they are following and try to kill me. And when they meet me, they use a tower and throw to me, at that time i dont know how to use the power and try to run. But then, i throw the meteors to them, i switch the place into the space and i says that this is power of the god. I throw some planets(not in solar system) straight to them. And then they die and i save the world
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(dont talk about my story pls)]]> 2022-03-04 03:49:36 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077233521 Hamt https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077233692 I'm a nice fun and friendly person, I'm honest and punctual, I work well in a team but also on my own as I like to set myself goals which I will achieve, I have good listening and communication skills. I have a creative mind and am always up for new challenges.
Imagine hihih]]> 2022-03-04 03:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077233692 Doanh doanh073807 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077235720 It all started when My accidentally picked up the wrong suitcase at the airport. When she arrived at the hotel she had no idea her suitcase had been changed and the serious thing was that the suitcase she took was a man's suitcase. 5 minutes later she opened her suitcase and said ''Omg, what is that??? shavers !!! and she smelled rotten socks. Then she packed the suitcase as fast as she could. She called the man and returned the suitcase

]]> 2022-03-04 03:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077235720 Dương duong000735 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077237891 Mai is a young woman who has been living in a small town her entire life. She has always been told that she was adopted and that her parents died in a car accident when she was very young. She has never questioned this story, but today is the day she would find out if it was true or not.
Mai's adoptive mother, who had raised her, had passed away recently and Mai found out that she had left her house to Mai in her will. Mai decided to go to the house and see what it looked like. When she arrived at the house, she found out that it was actually a mansion and there were many people there cleaning up after the funeral.
Mai went inside and found out that the house was filled with pictures of her as a baby with her parents. She also found out that they were still alive and living in another country. Mai's adoptive mother had lied to her for all these years about being adopted because they did
]]> 2022-03-04 03:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077237891 Ngoc Minh minh020031 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077237989 When Link walked into the living room, she saw a huge bouquet of flower. She came to smelled the flower, and it was so good, then she saw a letter. SHe opended the letter and she soon realized that wasn't her flower. That was her sister flower. she]]> 2022-03-04 03:53:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077237989 Thùy Linh linh031883 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077248862 It all started when My accidentallu picked up the wrong suitcase at the airport . When she came to her house and opened it . The first thing that was a big ps5 ! She was so shocked ! And then she called the number in the suitcase but they didn't answer . She runned to the airport and shouted out that " did who lost your suitcase " and there was a person said that " me " . She runned to that person . Then she noticed , that person was her ex bestfriend , it was a long time they didn't meet each other . They realise each other and give a hug for the other !]]> 2022-03-04 04:01:26 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/vs1lluht5cwdd46o/wish/2077248862