https://padlet.com/23asharma/vq39oka63rzw Welcome to my padlet for positive peer feedback! If you comment, then please make sure to include your name! en-us 2018-02-01 15:01:28 UTC 2018-03-02 15:57:12 UTC hello@padlet.com 23ebianco https://padlet.com/23asharma/vq39oka63rzw/wish/236955033 Hi Asmita, I really enjoyed your piece it was really well written. 
My first star for you is that I am impressed and really really really liked your word choice, you kept with strong and vivid word choice throughout your piece and that kept the reader on edge. For example, using the word delves, and nourish, vital. Those are all really strong words that I would most definitely want in a strong essay. 
My second star is that I like the way you kept the essay flowing. everything seemed to flow smoothly and was relative to what you said previously. You had done such a great job especially making the bridge flow nicely into the thesis statement. I found that the way you worded everything was the reason for it, I will most definitely use that strategy the next time.
 My wish for you is to keep up the good work. I very much found no error what so ever. I found the piece both interesting and sophisticated as well as easy to understand and grasp. Really awesome job with everything!!!!!!!!! :) ]]> 2018-03-01 15:16:59 UTC https://padlet.com/23asharma/vq39oka63rzw/wish/236955033 23aniemczyk https://padlet.com/23asharma/vq39oka63rzw/wish/237384841 One think I liked about your piece was the intro. Your intro painted a clear visule of the scene and drew the reader in. Another thing you did great was that you had so much strong word choice throughout the entire piece. I suggest you keep up the great work since I couldn't find any flaw in your writing piece. Overall you did a great job and I really enjoyed your piece. Keep up the good work!]]> 2018-03-02 13:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/23asharma/vq39oka63rzw/wish/237384841 23etedesco https://padlet.com/23asharma/vq39oka63rzw/wish/237457257 One thing I really liked about your narrative was how you started off in the beginning. The way your started off really drew me in and made me want to read your piece more and more! Also I liked how you varied your word choice and used strong vocab. When you do this it makes your writing sound more powerful. I suggest you keep writing like you are because I couldn't find anything not understandable or wrong! I loved your piece! Great job! - Lizz]]> 2018-03-02 15:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/23asharma/vq39oka63rzw/wish/237457257