Life in the trenches Peer- Assessment by Staff-ISK Petal Sophia Williams-Campbell https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6 You are to comment on 2 things he/she did well and 1 thing that they could improve on. WWW-2 points EBI: 1 point –Describe more than one problem of the trenches . -Use good spelling and grammar. -Use historical language and facts. en-us 2021-01-29 13:47:22 UTC 2021-02-09 08:23:11 UTC hello@padlet.com Agatha https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1151986392 Dear Mum, Dad, it’s me  Agatha. Today a very long day. many people dying , getting shot or by  explosion , I am sleepy but I can't sleep in a time like this i need to be prepared for everything that can happen. The food is bad The main food in the trenches was bully beef (canned corned beef), bread and biscuits. i miss eating yours mom , and the rats are the worst thing they come out of nowhere . 
Many diseases are getting in soldiers and i'm kinda worried as we don't have many medicines in the trenches . this might be the last letter i’m sending you as i am in  the war ,but all i wanted to say is that i miss you and i love you so much with all my heart . also give my big brother a hug for me .


                                      With love :Agatha klafke 
P.s.: if i come back can i please have a big meat?? I love how dad make them .

WWW
i like that she explained about the diseases and the little note wrote her dad


EBI better spelling
]]> 2021-02-02 05:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1151986392 Anas https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1151988753 Trench life is revolting the ad was fake, The trenches look nothing like they looked in the ads even inmates live better then this the trench is like a sewer filled with water and smelly and they only give us food every two days its  awful even this letter i had to sneak and send it my clothes are dirty and torn they will not let us leave until 9 months and if die they use you as cover, If he catches you sleeping on the job you have to do 24 hours. 

WWW i like how you explain the life in the trench .
and the facts you put in 


EBI  please put more punctuation on to it 

www:I like how you explain about you in trench
Ebi :put pragraphes and punctuation

]]> 2021-02-02 05:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1151988753 sara ali https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1173067979 Dear Mum, Dad, / from sara ali 
I haven't been writing a lot cause life in the trenches is horrible . People are always hungry and tired it's terrifying . Also it always rains and our tents flood all the time . The food it disgusting . And it's always cold . There is a disease going around called trench foot . It's a horrible disease where your feet start to rot and get diseased it's so hopeless and boring .it's like torturer . I wish i could come visit i miss you all .

WWW: She wrote about how horrible things were there and how terrifying it was.


EBI: Add pragraphes and talk about more things.



]]> 2021-02-07 09:52:23 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1173067979 Abdulrahman https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1173068578 Dear Mum, Dad, I have a crazy crazy week how I will live there?

I know that you are pessimistic about me, for not writing to you. 
I will tell you what happened in the first week from the start until the end, we start going to the trenches It was dirty the first time I saw it.They start given us some guns, and you knew that I don’t like to kill anybody but I strased to be strong.    

The second day our leader says be careful of the mud, I sayes what will happen, when I tried biting my leg, my leg has drawn to the bottom that one story.Another story was I felt bored, and then I go to cook something for me because I was hungry that time then I sow the thing that I don't want to see, It is a dead body was eaten by a rate what is going on.

I have a horrible week this time I will talk to you more than befor see you later. 

Sincerely bop 

WWW there is punctuation


EBI this is really good but but theirs no caps


]]> 2021-02-07 09:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1173068578 Mouza petalcampbell https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1173070942 Dear Mum, Dad, 



Sorry I haven’t been writing I was so busy fighting that I forgot to write a letter to you.  


Living in a trench is a awful life and It’s cold but I will keep doing this to save my family and friends. There is a lot of rain that is makes a lot of mud and if we stay in the mud for too long we get a disesase called a trench feet. It was hard to sleep because it was uncomfortable and because of all the sound. There is not a lot of food so some may not have not eaten or may not like the food.


WWW: I like the tractions
WWW: I like when you started it by sorry



EBI: put more pragraphes 


]]> 2021-02-07 09:53:49 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1173070942 Abdulrhman fadl 1470562 https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/vpid0eozx4yi3xo6/wish/1180868903 Dear Mum, Dad,


Sorry I haven't`t  written sooner but have been busy.I am writing to tell you about the experiences I have been going through these past few weeks.


Our trench is horrible when it rains it will be horrible if it stack. in your shoes also the trench when it get gold we all freeze. 
Also when we go to the trench we see big rats and some people in their shoes rat. and when there sleeping there was something cold trench food which is a horrible disease where your feet start to rot and get diseased. .and we can sleep only 2 hours and we only eat everyday bully beef. and we are living in a night for an hour in a time and not everybody like 5 people not sleeping and 5 people are sleeping. and I cannot to email everyday but I can do email every week.


from:Abdurhman 


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