Maybe I need more clarity on the concept

But feels super exciting, fresh and contemporary

"reveal things that are not on surface level" : strongggggg definition!! :)

It is also cool to see a lot of mediums!!

https://www.tate.org.uk/whats-on/tate-modern/el-anatsui

some references to look at:

Anamorphic optical illusions by Georges Rousseau.

I want to see more!!

It would be better to have the real-life version of the painting and the AR digital version to show that they are different. This would strengthen your message.

Great work! :D

It's quite effective as just a virtual experience, if you're having trouble trying to make this happen IRL, with development it could work as a piece of standalone video work.

The flag/logo/fabric could be worked on to create a kind of flag of a 'society' or 'nation' for the project.

Nice music choice for the first clip. Found the overlays super interesting, I wouldn't have guessed it was an afterthought - would be interesting to see it in different shots as well? could be like a visual motif?

Only thing I would say is at the moment the theme is not very apparent, but obviously is early stages soooo keep going!!

Develop the cinematography.

Test out the sound recording kit, different mics, capture the street ambience.

Play with perspectives and gaps in the parallax - optical illusions.

Channel 4 (perspective) ident.

It might be good to look at fantasy children's films that have that art style included. If you want to create a layered fantasy design/ set, it might be worth looking at the Phantom of The Opera set, for example, or other set designs in theatre.

Start recording rough voice-overs and lay them on to a timeline. So you can begin to visualise your script.

Unifying a visual lanagauge.

I agree with justyna that a bedtime story may not be appropriate for the audience being young adults. Maybe just a story?

Great work! Excited to see the outcome :D

Super cheesy which fits with the fantastical environments.

Add "feature" taglines to sell your app/service, really push the trailer to convince the audience this is one to get the meet thr person on yiur cosmic dreams!

Great proof of concept!

Good visuals.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IMIXOmlGpw4

not that is a request but in the case, what is the kind of "problem" you want to solve or your purpose of creating this platform...

Secondlife is a game that has been around for a while that you can live a life in your virtual avatar, could be a good point of inspiration

Clear visual language

u can check out @diy_market on ig

It is well thought out; great work! :D

Already got some great features, ie. Chat and colour coding.

"Curator's picks" feature?

maybe you could categorize the products like ' most popular items' or add likes to the images or maybe ideas like bidding( Just an idea)

I like the grids separating the items

maybe work on the layout

Great Work !

reference:

• Geronimo Stilton book series

there's one book where u can rub the pages and they have different scents idk it could be a cool ideaaaa

also it has cool illustrations

• Was wondering if you'd like to print several copies so as to distribute it? maybe riso could be an option jsut because it is cheaper and has a cool look?

Could include women's safety devices as part of the "Props".

for production maybe consider the actors wearing the piece.

Not sure about the outcome. Is it a short film ? and what Genre?

Southwark Council - women safety advert

Shoot as much as possible, play with how to not show.

Do we need to see the murder?

Tasteful depiction please

Ending needs rethink

strong community element

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UTSlzfqYUK8&list=PLtwF7pVtpuydhTuPrkVIvOFT-LhVQaww3&index=2

this is kind of random but it reminded me of this bit of a movie lol

• look at textures and printing textures

• scented paper? maybe of a popular nostalgic sweet

• your publication can consist of different thicknesses of paper depending on what is needed

really well target to your audiences and to share your cultures with other people.

Interactive, creative, effective, loved it (where are the two missing puzzle pieces??😭)

• is there an underlying theme to all the different activities?

• check out work from interaction design arts students from LCC - they do similar fun interactive stuff

  
  

MAybe you can find TFP collaborators on assisting work on Insta. There are FB group for film communities who are willing to build portfolio.

For recording the experience in Jakarta, you could look into live streetcam cctv, but there might not be any. Collaborating with your parents is also a really nice idea!

The drawings that participants make, it could be nice to collect them and use them to propose a billboard of some kind with all the collected materials.

Scenes from a marriage by Ingmar Bergman, a simple very long film that explores realism and the breakdown of a marriage. It's a classic and could link to your project when thinking about dialogue and visuals

So much lovely potential with the origami b-roll, cutting to the folding paper and cutting back to the conversation.

inner dialogue maybe? what is that person thinking about the other person? like in Fleabag?

I think your work is very strong and saturated with emotions. I would add some more elements that our society associates with genZ and what gen Z finds familiar so they can relate to it even more. I want to feel like this campaign is familiar and directed to me a bit more in a way.

Great editing, excited to see more

Anti-capitalist, feminist game design references from Oopie.

Great visuals and concepts, excited to see!